Wk 8 Ill Nik-a vs Sin City (ill Nik-a Wins)

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[ill nik-A]

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Welcome!

[$in City]

Yep...

[ill nik-A]

u going around sayin u’re gonna beat me like its fine; great, dawg
That talk doesn’t fly here… ur freedom of speech is an immigrant bein denied take off
No matter how long u take there’s no way ur chances grow
Don’t think of it as lost time… It’s more like u got killed & buried in a Rabbit hole
I got the magic pole, ur girl blows me & then acts innocent
Then u get home & she gives u an ear-full… I call the trick Lance Stephenson
I can’t bare to try vs u & I bet u’ll still get smothered, son
this win is so easy… it fell on my lap & tipped the stripper on my other one
ur pride is plenty, u all motivated like ur lines are heavy
If I'm facing a deadly Sin... By the time he finishes readin my shit he'll die of envy

[King]

@$in City

[$in City]

You a bum ass nigga and a loser, basically you just a easy target
So you'll never have the keys to victory much less your own shitty apartment
I'm the grimy type to start shit, spit ten lines to finish u off quick
His buzz in the league had em thinkin he fly, till I crushed him with chopsticks
When I come thru with the glock six the fuckin heat'll blow, you hella weak and slow
The truth is you'll never be ill Nik-a, even tho u just got sik a week ago
in reality you robbed him so now I'm servin u at least a fatality
Sin always catches up to you, to slam you and crack ya skull on concrete like police brutality
Fuck nigga, ur skill's a fallacy, if u think your raps would celibate u illin' 
You stay in the studio, cuz at the crib u have to shit, shower, and sleep in the kitchen

[Aero]

Ill Nika:

u going around sayin u’re gonna beat me like its fine; great, dawg
That talk doesn’t fly here… ur freedom of speech is an immigrant bein denied take off
idiom followed by a lame joke
No matter how long u take there’s no way ur chances grow
Don’t think of it as lost time… It’s more like u got killed & buried in a Rabbit hole
see above
I got the magic pole, ur girl blows me & then acts innocent
Then u get home & she gives u an ear-full… I call the trick Lance Stephenson
this just fails to come together as a concept
I can’t bare to try vs u & I bet u’ll still get smothered, son
this win is so easy… it fell on my lap & tipped the stripper on my other one
a bit corny
ur pride is plenty, u all motivated like ur lines are heavy
If I'm facing a deadly Sin... By the time he finishes readin my shit he'll die of envy
nice

a lot of misses here, you came a bit lazy


Sin City:

You a bum ass nigga and a loser, basically you just a easy target
So you'll never have the keys to victory much less your own shitty apartment
idiom followed by a dry joke
I'm the grimy type to start shit, spit ten lines to finish u off quick
His buzz in the league had em thinkin he fly, till I crushed him with chopsticks
the buzz added to the concept, saved it from being a miss.. this is ok
When I come thru with the glock six the fuckin heat'll blow, you hella weak and slow
The truth is you'll never be ill Nik-a, even tho u just got sik a week ago
ehhh its not really a diss
in reality you robbed him so now I'm servin u at least a fatality
Sin always catches up to you, to slam you and crack ya skull on concrete like police brutality
like the sin catches up but this needed a different setup.. sin and robbing of a battle is weak
Fuck nigga, ur skill's a fallacy, if u think your raps would celibate u illin'
You stay in the studio, cuz at the crib u have to shit, shower, and sleep in the kitchen
the celibate part made me think u were going to go for used concept in next line, stay in studio was a miss to me

no standouts, all barely par or mostly subpar





this was a poor battle, expected more from both.. its like you two wrote these verses together... both used a fly line, both had idioms followed by poor jokes, both used the other's names in very predictable ways, both used a sin line... No One gets my vote this is a TIE.

[Clout]

u going around sayin u’re gonna beat me like its fine; great, dawg
That talk doesn’t fly here… ur freedom of speech is an immigrant bein denied take off
No matter how long u take there’s no way ur chances grow
Don’t think of it as lost time… It’s more like u got killed & buried in a Rabbit hole
ur pride is plenty, u all motivated like ur lines are heavy
If I'm facing a deadly Sin... By the time he finishes readin my shit he'll die of envy

vs

I'm the grimy type to start shit, spit ten lines to finish u off quick
His buzz in the league had em thinkin he fly, till I crushed him with chopsticks


almost quoted stripper line because i thought it was funny. I got Ill Nika Winning by wording his Bars to hit better. i don't think anyone dropped a haymaker. But Ill-Nika showing his ring savvy, dropped more consistent. Kept those jabs pumping,


v/ Nika

[Tic]

u going around sayin u’re gonna beat me like its fine; great, dawg
That talk doesn’t fly here… ur freedom of speech is an immigrant bein denied take off
I actually liked this. A jab.
No matter how long u take there’s no way ur chances grow
Don’t think of it as lost time… It’s more like u got killed & buried in a Rabbit hole
I get the concept. Cool, but not hard hitting.
I got the magic pole, ur girl blows me & then acts innocent
Then u get home & she gives u an ear-full… I call the trick Lance Stephenson
I didn't like this.
I can’t bare to try vs u & I bet u’ll still get smothered, son
this win is so easy… it fell on my lap & tipped the stripper on my other one
You only have one lap, but this wasn't bad.
ur pride is plenty, u all motivated like ur lines are heavy
If I'm facing a deadly Sin... By the time he finishes readin my shit he'll die of envy
Nice way to close it.

You a bum ass nigga and a loser, basically you just a easy target
So you'll never have the keys to victory much less your own shitty apartment
Not really feeling this.
I'm the grimy type to start shit, spit ten lines to finish u off quick
His buzz in the league had em thinkin he fly, till I crushed him with chopsticks
This was ok.
When I come thru with the glock six the fuckin heat'll blow, you hella weak and slow
The truth is you'll never be ill Nik-a, even tho u just got sik a week ago
I liked this one. Cool.
in reality you robbed him so now I'm servin u at least a fatality
Sin always catches up to you, to slam you and crack ya skull on concrete like police brutality
Flowed nice but it wasn't too hard hitting. I've seen a lot of police brutality lines, you tied it together tho so it wasn't bad.
Fuck nigga, ur skill's a fallacy, if u think your raps would celibate u illin' 
You stay in the studio, cuz at the crib u have to shit, shower, and sleep in the kitchen
Concept was cool, but I think you could've worded it better.

This was actually close, IMO. I think Ill was a little bit more consistent. You have great wording, so even if the concepts aren't great you pull most of them through as jabs. Sin had some concepts but I feel like the wording was off.

Vote - Ill

[Fresh]

u going around sayin u’re gonna beat me like its fine; great, dawg
That talk doesn’t fly here… ur freedom of speech is an immigrant bein denied take off
Don't like this much.
No matter how long u take there’s no way ur chances grow
Don’t think of it as lost time… It’s more like u got killed & buried in a Rabbit hole
Could have taken this a different route, execution hurting you here
I got the magic pole, ur girl blows me & then acts innocent
Then u get home & she gives u an ear-full… I call the trick Lance Stephenson\
didnt like this..
I can’t bare to try vs u & I bet u’ll still get smothered, son
this win is so easy… it fell on my lap & tipped the stripper on my other one
I assume you're going for lap dance.. Its ok but its not attcaking ur opponent enough imo
ur pride is plenty, u all motivated like ur lines are heavy
If I'm facing a deadly Sin... By the time he finishes readin my shit he'll die of envy
I liked this.. Good closer

vs.

You a bum ass nigga and a loser, basically you just a easy target
So you'll never have the keys to victory much less your own shitty apartment
Iight, decent flip
I'm the grimy type to start shit, spit ten lines to finish u off quick
His buzz in the league had em thinkin he fly, till I crushed him with chopsticks
I think you could have done more with buzz/fly.. not feeling the chopsticks aspect
When I come thru with the glock six the fuckin heat'll blow, you hella weak and slow
The truth is you'll never be ill Nik-a, even tho u just got sik a week ago
lol nice personal
in reality you robbed him so now I'm servin u at least a fatality
Sin always catches up to you, to slam you and crack ya skull on concrete like police brutality
nope
Fuck nigga, ur skill's a fallacy, if u think your raps would celibate u illin'
You stay in the studio, cuz at the crib u have to shit, shower, and sleep in the kitchen
not feeling it

This battles close but I"'ve got Sin City taking it.. I dont like the way Nik'A uses his concepts tbh. Seems like its not attacking the opponent enough. I really liked the closer tho./ Sin had a cool flip for theopener, and I liked the sick a week ago punch.. His last two bars were shit but he still had enough to take this.

v/Sin City

[Packed Graves]

Nik came off pretty weak here which isn't normal, the opener & closer where fire to me other that lots of misses through out feels like you never really finished your concepts.

Vs

Sin had only sik a week ago. Other then that came off very weak here as we'll feel like he didn't take his time at all.

Vote- nick by the hair on his wet back.

[Greed]

I thought the studio line was an alright concept sin. Lacked direction and not sure what celibate was for. Nik got this on strength of misses.

V nik

[Smog]

Re: Wk 8 Ill Nik-a vs Sin City
u going around sayin u’re gonna beat me like its fine; great, dawg
That talk doesn’t fly here… ur freedom of speech is an immigrant bein denied take off
Lol.. That's ok

No matter how long u take there’s no way ur chances grow
Don’t think of it as lost time… It’s more like u got killed & buried in a Rabbit hole
Weak IMO

I got the magic pole, ur girl blows me & then acts innocent
Then u get home & she gives u an ear-full… I call the trick Lance Stephenson
Don't like how it's worded

I can’t bare to try vs u & I bet u’ll still get smothered, son
this win is so easy… it fell on my lap & tipped the stripper on my other one
Nah
ur pride is plenty, u all motivated like ur lines are heavy
If I'm facing a deadly Sin... By the time he finishes readin my shit he'll die of envy
Dope IMO


Vs..


You a bum ass nigga and a loser, basically you just a easy target
So you'll never have the keys to victory much less your own shitty apartment
Nah weak IMO

I'm the grimy type to start shit, spit ten lines to finish u off quick
His buzz in the league had em thinkin he fly, till I crushed him with chopsticks
Ehh ok kinda weird ending

When I come thru with the glock six the fuckin heat'll blow, you hella weak and slow
The truth is you'll never be ill Nik-a, even tho u just got sik a week ago
Lol, dope IMO

in reality you robbed him so now I'm servin u at least a fatality
Sin always catches up to you, to slam you and crack ya skull on concrete like police brutality
Worded bad but coulda been nice bro

Fuck nigga, ur skill's a fallacy, if u think your raps would celibate u illin'
You stay in the studio, cuz at the crib u have to shit, shower, and sleep in the kitchen
Not really feelin this

Close battle, but I got nik so two nice barz n sin with one so that was the difference here.. Y'all two usually drop some nasty shit tho...


Vote nik

[Sharp]

Rabbit hole was cool
Deadly sin ive seen flipped against a few guys

V

Chopsticks was ok
Nameflip was played before i was born tbh


It was even on quotes but the rest of niks verse did enough to win

V/nik

[Witty]

u going around sayin u’re gonna beat me like its fine; great, dawg
That talk doesn’t fly here… ur freedom of speech is an immigrant bein denied take off
Cool, I like this
No matter how long u take there’s no way ur chances grow
Don’t think of it as lost time… It’s more like u got killed & buried in a Rabbit hole
Wasn't feeling it tbh
I got the magic pole, ur girl blows me & then acts innocent
Then u get home & she gives u an ear-full… I call the trick Lance Stephenson
Had to search the reference due to being irish (not your fault) but I understand it now and this is dope
I can’t bare to try vs u & I bet u’ll still get smothered, son
this win is so easy… it fell on my lap & tipped the stripper on my other one
Ok
ur pride is plenty, u all motivated like ur lines are heavy
If I'm facing a deadly Sin... By the time he finishes readin my shit he'll die of envy
This was dope, my favourite line of this verse

vs

You a bum ass nigga and a loser, basically you just a easy target
So you'll never have the keys to victory much less your own shitty apartment
No, way too simple
I'm the grimy type to start shit, spit ten lines to finish u off quick
His buzz in the league had em thinkin he fly, till I crushed him with chopsticks
ehh, ok I guess
When I come thru with the glock six the fuckin heat'll blow, you hella weak and slow
The truth is you'll never be ill Nik-a, even tho u just got sik a week ago
Cool, np is so played tho, but i still liked this
in reality you robbed him so now I'm servin u at least a fatality
Sin always catches up to you, to slam you and crack ya skull on concrete like police brutality
Again, much too simplistic
Fuck nigga, ur skill's a fallacy, if u think your raps would celibate u illin'
You stay in the studio, cuz at the crib u have to shit, shower, and sleep in the kitchen
See above

Nik took this pretty easily imo I don't think he dropped his best stuff but it was enough to take the win, just more creative and harder hitting punches, Sin was just too simplistic in my eyes, his verse lacked creativity

Vote - Ill Nik-A