WK 8 CONTENDERS MATCH SiK vs Fresh (Sik Wins)

[King]

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[SiK]

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[Fresh]

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[Fresh]

You’re not considered tough, faggot.. You’ll be getting offed like a slug
n the way u think it cicada be a bitch, its no wonder u always get squashed like a bug
I have yet to see something decent from u, I’m getting truly pissed off
cause if you’re considered dope, SiK.. Why am I the one going through withdrawals?
It’s ironic your fat ass is actually lightweight in this plot son
I’ll toss you up in the air to prove from your end it’s not one
Redundant ass mothafucka.. ur concepts have all been done before
And its funny how with those stretched out bars, you always come up short
You never get the pussy, dick breath… you oughtta start with trident
Even if you brought an entire army, no bitch would slaughter sgt privates
My verses like ecstasy; pudgy fuck knows I’m a hard act to follow
And if the Pillsbury Doughboy… Its cause they're a tough one to swallow
You’re a cancer to this league even when trying asbestos you can
If SiK’s setting the bar… It’s the same one I’m hitting him with that'll finish this man

[SiK]

Havent started. Been busy. Ill write tonight

[SiK]

Look....



Fresh been battlin forever wit no progress, I look at the shit n laugh
Ya slaved at text all these yrs for nothing so its fitting Aero denied your nigga pass
Your the only one who thinks ur dope, ya verse'll make the next guy vomit
Cuz everything I read from u is wack, maybe we need a pair of Fresh eyes on it
Ive seen you say ya bars r nice, but the fact is your fairing poor in bouts
Fresh aint just full of shit, your a junk drawer buried inside a hoarders house
Your sway session in 1-2 was sad and you should seriously get some help
Its funny you let Gal effect your emotions so much, you turned into a bitch yourself
Im royalty n you prolly got molested by your fam, im a prince n u on welfare
Cuz if Fresh Prince he just let his Uncle Phil his ass with enuf dick to stretch to Bel Air
You dont belong here faggot,your an outkasted loser whos textin is lame
Fresh aint just crampin raps style, he benched Lebron wit 7 minutes left in the game
I thought about startin over wit text, then come back n see the shit through
But fuck a Fresh start, cause im not tryina spend the next 10 years being a newb
We all seen ya girls pic, her ass is flat as fuck, so you wouldnt see me pipe her
Fuck develpoment, she got enough room left to grow in her trunk to fit the DC sniper


Gluck

[Smog]

You’re not considered tough, faggot.. You’ll be getting offed like a slug
n the way u think it cicada be a bitch, its no wonder u always get squashed like a bug
Pretty nice wording softened it a lil.. But I liked it

I have yet to see something decent from u, I’m getting truly pissed off
cause if you’re considered dope, SiK.. Why am I the one going through withdrawals?
I like this shit too

It’s ironic your fat ass is actually lightweight in this plot son
I’ll toss you up in the air to prove from your end it’s not one
Lol.. Iight had to think for a min here

Redundant ass mothafucka.. ur concepts have all been done before
And its funny how with those stretched out bars, you always come up short
Ok.. Weakest thus far but I feel it coulda been harsher

You never get the pussy, dick breath… you oughtta start with trident
Even if you brought an entire army, no bitch would slaughter sgt privates
Dope yo...

My verses like ecstasy; pudgy fuck knows I’m a hard act to follow
And if the Pillsbury Doughboy… Its cause they're a tough one to swallow
Lol.. This cool

You’re a cancer to this league even when trying asbestos you can
If SiK’s setting the bar… It’s the same one I’m hitting him with that'll finish this man
Kinda soft closer IMO..

Stretched bars n setting bars were ur softest hits but overall u had some nice shit IMO... Good verse

Sik


Fresh been battlin forever wit no progress, I look at the shit n laugh
Ya slaved at text all these yrs for nothing so its fitting Aero denied your nigga pass
Lol, that's foul.. Funny bar

Your the only one who thinks ur dope, ya verse'll make the next guy vomit
Cuz everything I read from u is wack, maybe we need a pair of Fresh eyes on it
Ok.. I get it but came off soft IMO

Ive seen you say ya bars r nice, but the fact is your fairing poor in bouts
Fresh aint just full of shit, your a junk drawer buried inside a hoarders house
Dope shit

Your sway session in 1-2 was sad and you should seriously get some help
Its funny you let Gal effect your emotions so much, you turned into a bitch yourself
Again very nice

Im royalty n you prolly got molested by your fam, im a prince n u on welfare
Cuz if Fresh Prince he just let his Uncle Phil his ass with enuf dick to stretch to Bel Air
Like the creativity here, seemed tough but it hits

You dont belong here faggot,your an outkasted loser whos textin is lame
Fresh aint just crampin raps style, he benched Lebron wit 7 minutes left in the game
Lol, current and nice.. By the way was it cramps again for Lebron last night

I thought about startin over wit text, then come back n see the shit through
But fuck a Fresh start, cause im not tryina spend the next 10 years being a newb
Damn that's harsh

We all seen ya girls pic, her ass is flat as fuck, so you wouldnt see me pipe her
Fuck develpoment, she got enough room left to grow in her trunk to fit the DC sniper
Nice

Dope verse sik..fresh eyes was ur softest IMO fresh prince was actually dope.. Nice verse

Overall a pretty nice battle.. Fresh had solid verse wit a couple a soft hits one of his better verses tho so props for that.. Like the dope sik line a lot.. Sik also came nice af here with one soft punch so that summed it up for me really.. Fresh start was dope junk drawers was nice too n I really liked that emotions bar.. Good shit from both y'all man I really enjoyed this read.. Mad props..

Vote sik

[Packed Graves]

Fresh had- dope sik, sgt private was decent. Other that lots of your material came off pretty forced or worded very oddly.

Vs

Sik had the opener which was fire, hoarders house was ughhhhhh, gal affect your emotions, I like fresh prince, fresh start was grimy, overall very sound and consistent verse not many downfalls.

Vote for obvious reasons go to sik. Land slide

[Tic]

You’re not considered tough, faggot.. You’ll be getting offed like a slug
n the way u think it cicada be a bitch, its no wonder u always get squashed like a bug
This was cool, I liked it. Creative, bro.
I have yet to see something decent from u, I’m getting truly pissed off
cause if you’re considered dope, SiK.. Why am I the one going through withdrawals?
Nice. I think you could've perhaps worded this a little better though.
It’s ironic your fat ass is actually lightweight in this plot son
I’ll toss you up in the air to prove from your end it’s not one
Nah, I didn't like this. He's not really fat lol.
Redundant ass mothafucka.. ur concepts have all been done before
And its funny how with those stretched out bars, you always come up short
This could've been worded better. The concept was cool.
You never get the pussy, dick breath… you oughtta start with trident
Even if you brought an entire army, no bitch would slaughter sgt privates
Execution was off for me.
My verses like ecstasy; pudgy fuck knows I’m a hard act to follow
And if the Pillsbury Doughboy… Its cause they're a tough one to swallow
This wasn't bad. Liked the wordplay, I've seen it relatively recently though, which takes a bit away from the sting.
You’re a cancer to this league even when trying asbestos you can
If SiK’s setting the bar… It’s the same one I’m hitting him with that'll finish this man
Nah.

Look....



Fresh been battlin forever wit no progress, I look at the shit n laugh
Ya slaved at text all these yrs for nothing so its fitting Aero denied your nigga pass
This was alright.
Your the only one who thinks ur dope, ya verse'll make the next guy vomit
Cuz everything I read from u is wack, maybe we need a pair of Fresh eyes on it
I would've worded this differently, this was ok.
Ive seen you say ya bars r nice, but the fact is your fairing poor in bouts
Fresh aint just full of shit, your a junk drawer buried inside a hoarders house
This was dope.
Your sway session in 1-2 was sad and you should seriously get some help
Its funny you let Gal effect your emotions so much, you turned into a bitch yourself
Cool.
Im royalty n you prolly got molested by your fam, im a prince n u on welfare
Cuz if Fresh Prince he just let his Uncle Phil his ass with enuf dick to stretch to Bel Air
Nah not feeling this one.
You dont belong here faggot,your an outkasted loser whos textin is lame
Fresh aint just crampin raps style, he benched Lebron wit 7 minutes left in the game
Cool.
I thought about startin over wit text, then come back n see the shit through
But fuck a Fresh start, cause im not tryina spend the next 10 years being a newb
I liked this. On second read I would've worded it a bit differently, but it was nice.
We all seen ya girls pic, her ass is flat as fuck, so you wouldnt see me pipe her
Fuck develpoment, she got enough room left to grow in her trunk to fit the DC sniper
This was a little awkward. But good concept, IMO.

Gluck

Fresh you're improving, bro. You had a couple nice lines in here that I liked. I still think you need to work on wording more effectively, though. You have some cool concepts for sure, but your execution is weird on some of them. Sik, this was a pretty good showing from you as well. I won't lie, I've seen you come harder as a verse, but that hoarders bar was dope. Fresh start was nice too. I gotta give this to Sik for more consistency and the LOTB.

[Greed]

Fresh had an alright verse but ol boy wasn't fucking around. Solid verse sik. Hoarders lotb.

V sik

[King]

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[Witty]

You’re not considered tough, faggot.. You’ll be getting offed like a slug
n the way u think it cicada be a bitch, its no wonder u always get squashed like a bug
The wordplay was kinda off a little, maybe it's my accent, but it still worked and I liked it
I have yet to see something decent from u, I’m getting truly pissed off
cause if you’re considered dope, SiK.. Why am I the one going through withdrawals?
Ok, pretty played, but not bad
It’s ironic your fat ass is actually lightweight in this plot son
I’ll toss you up in the air to prove from your end it’s not one
Cool
Redundant ass mothafucka.. ur concepts have all been done before
And its funny how with those stretched out bars, you always come up short
Nah, too simple
You never get the pussy, dick breath… you oughtta start with trident
Even if you brought an entire army, no bitch would slaughter sgt privates
lol I like this
My verses like ecstasy; pudgy fuck knows I’m a hard act to follow
And if the Pillsbury Doughboy… Its cause they're a tough one to swallow
I didn't understand this tbh
You’re a cancer to this league even when trying asbestos you can
If SiK’s setting the bar… It’s the same one I’m hitting him with that'll finish this man
This was a cool idea, but it was poorly executed, I think you just need to take your time on wording and you'll be so much better, I think that about most people tbh not just you.

vs

Fresh been battlin forever wit no progress, I look at the shit n laugh
Ya slaved at text all these yrs for nothing so its fitting Aero denied your nigga pass
lol damn
Your the only one who thinks ur dope, ya verse'll make the next guy vomit
Cuz everything I read from u is wack, maybe we need a pair of Fresh eyes on it
I saw what you tried to do, but it didn't really work for me tbh cool idea tho
Ive seen you say ya bars r nice, but the fact is your fairing poor in bouts
Fresh aint just full of shit, your a junk drawer buried inside a hoarders house
Cool
Your sway session in 1-2 was sad and you should seriously get some help
Its funny you let Gal effect your emotions so much, you turned into a bitch yourself
again, this was cool...nothing too amazing but a nice punch
Im royalty n you prolly got molested by your fam, im a prince n u on welfare
Cuz if Fresh Prince he just let his Uncle Phil his ass with enuf dick to stretch to Bel Air
lol'd
You dont belong here faggot,your an outkasted loser whos textin is lame
Fresh aint just crampin raps style, he benched Lebron wit 7 minutes left in the game
Ok, I imagine these will be played pretty soon but you got it in quick lol liked it
I thought about startin over wit text, then come back n see the shit through
But fuck a Fresh start, cause im not tryina spend the next 10 years being a newb
This was clever, dope
We all seen ya girls pic, her ass is flat as fuck, so you wouldnt see me pipe her
Fuck develpoment, she got enough room left to grow in her trunk to fit the DC sniper
lmao

Sik's last line killed it for me lol I was already going to vote for him but I thought his closer was lotb tbh fresh had some cool lines and he has good ideas, he just needs to work on polishing them and getting his wording right and if he does this I think he can really challenge dudes in the future. Cool battle bros.

Vote - Sik

[Wordz AhGod.]

You never get the pussy, dick breath… you oughtta start with trident
Even if you brought an entire army, no bitch would slaughter sgt privates

vs

Fresh been battlin forever wit no progress, I look at the shit n laugh
Ya slaved at text all these yrs for nothing so its fitting Aero denied your nigga pass
Ive seen you say ya bars r nice, but the fact is your fairing poor in bouts
Fresh aint just full of shit, your a junk drawer buried inside a hoarders house
We all seen ya girls pic, her ass is flat as fuck, so you wouldnt see me pipe her
Fuck develpoment, she got enough room left to grow in her trunk to fit the DC sniper


fresh having execution and wording issues, them shits are killing him. Sik had a consistent verse, the ones I quoted were dope from.. the one I quoted from fresh wasn't hard but had potential.

v/Sik

[PureEnergy]

Fresh-
You’re not considered tough, faggot.. You’ll be getting offed like a slug
n the way u think it cicada be a bitch, its no wonder u always get squashed like a bug
*This was okay*
I have yet to see something decent from u, I’m getting truly pissed off
cause if you’re considered dope, SiK.. Why am I the one going through withdrawals?
*Cool, but I think it lack a bit of striking power*
It’s ironic your fat ass is actually lightweight in this plot son
I’ll toss you up in the air to prove from your end it’s not one
*Eh, okay*
Redundant ass mothafucka.. ur concepts have all been done before
And its funny how with those stretched out bars, you always come up short
*Aiight*
You never get the pussy, dick breath… you oughtta start with trident
Even if you brought an entire army, no bitch would slaughter sgt privates
*Kinda like this*
My verses like ecstasy; pudgy fuck knows I’m a hard act to follow
And if the Pillsbury Doughboy… Its cause they're a tough one to swallow
*Uuuh, this was weird*
You’re a cancer to this league even when trying asbestos you can
If SiK’s setting the bar… It’s the same one I’m hitting him with that'll finish this man
*Not bad*

Sik-
Fresh been battlin forever wit no progress, I look at the shit n laugh
Ya slaved at text all these yrs for nothing so its fitting Aero denied your nigga pass
*Haha, lol*
Your the only one who thinks ur dope, ya verse'll make the next guy vomit
Cuz everything I read from u is wack, maybe we need a pair of Fresh eyes on it
*Real nice*
Ive seen you say ya bars r nice, but the fact is your fairing poor in bouts
Fresh aint just full of shit, your a junk drawer buried inside a hoarders house
*Cool, good one*
Your sway session in 1-2 was sad and you should seriously get some help
Its funny you let Gal effect your emotions so much, you turned into a bitch yourself
*Aiight*
Im royalty n you prolly got molested by your fam, im a prince n u on welfare
Cuz if Fresh Prince he just let his Uncle Phil his ass with enuf dick to stretch to Bel Air
*Lol, damn!*
You dont belong here faggot,your an outkasted loser whos textin is lame
Fresh aint just crampin raps style, he benched Lebron wit 7 minutes left in the game
*Kinda funny*
I thought about startin over wit text, then come back n see the shit through
But fuck a Fresh start, cause im not tryina spend the next 10 years being a newb
*This was cold*
We all seen ya girls pic, her ass is flat as fuck, so you wouldnt see me pipe her
Fuck develpoment, she got enough room left to grow in her trunk to fit the DC sniper
*Shit! Good closer*

I enjoyed reading both verses. They both were very good. Lost of good punches and personals, unfortunately for Fresh, Sik's verse was full of harder hitting punches. Don't get me wrong, Fresh's verse was very dope, but Sik's verse had better puches throughout. Great battle. G'luck.

Vote- Sik

[murda sho.]

Sik

Ive seen you say ya bars r nice, but the fact is your fairing poor in bouts
Fresh aint just full of shit, your a junk drawer buried inside a hoarders house
Your sway session in 1-2 was sad and you should seriously get some help
Its funny you let Gal effect your emotions so much, you turned into a bitch yourself

You dont belong here faggot,your an outkasted loser whos textin is lame
Fresh aint just crampin raps style, he benched Lebron wit 7 minutes left in the game


Fresh

My verses like ecstasy; pudgy fuck knows I’m a hard act to follow
And if the Pillsbury Doughboy… Its cause they're a tough one to swallow

Sik started off slow with a couple misses then picked up with a couple dope punches, Fresh I just wasn't feeling this verse, seemed like all jabs if that, I barely quoted what I did, just my opinion nothing really stood out to me and those asbestos and cicada lines were bad yo don't try to stretch wordplay out like that, v/Sik