Huntsman vs body bags [OPEN FOR VOTES]

[Ryno]

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[body bags]

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[Ryno]

this text shit ain't for misfits, I'm about to show out on his ass
if you ever heard someone call b.b king, then they had to be talkin jazz
ask the old heads, this fuckers legacy needs some help
he side stepped greatness for so long, he could reinvent Ginobilis euro step
yur the ugliest fucker on the block, trust me I asked his hoe
he's got so many worry lines on his forehead, it could pass as a fuckin bar code
faggots still livin in the early 2000s, get it together man
cos you don't need to know where ras be, to know he was the biggest b2k fan
he needs to hit the gym, bulk up cos if I catch ya yur dead
if we ever see a skull crusher, then it's me droppin the weight on his head

[Ryno]

Edit: body bags aka Ras jr aka Barz

[body bags]

This b the stomping of the century time murder this bitch
N dontt worry the hospital has lots. Of sheets,cause your insurance won't cover this
Damn I miss the deadline, but you also did too
Sees like we both got a problem with time...except you seem to b stuck in 2002
Lame as punches you don't think you got any chance do you
Cuz when I'm done you'll need a para o medics....the cast of greys anatomy, n botched to fix u
Shouldeve took the w and skipped your ass home queer
But I see you got pride in your verse...the kind thats get a parade every year
Get it? Ill admit thet last punch was trash,
But one bad punch is okuwhen up against verse full of ass


Ok I'm done wow this sucks

[Ryno]

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Mv vs fresh

Miracle vs Nixon

[body bags]

Miracle vs Nixon

[Elvis Freshley]

this text shit ain't for misfits, I'm about to show out on his ass
if you ever heard someone call b.b king, then they had to be talkin jazz

^^^ 4/5 This was pretty solid, I liked this opener. Clever

ask the old heads, this fuckers legacy needs some help
he side stepped greatness for so long, he could reinvent Ginobilis euro step

^^^ 2.5/5 Meh… Nah

yur the ugliest fucker on the block, trust me I asked his hoe
he's got so many worry lines on his forehead, it could pass as a fuckin bar codes

^^^ 2.5/5 Again this didn't really hit for me. Worried why?

faggots still livin in the early 2000s, get it together man
cos you don't need to know where ras be, to know he was the biggest b2k fan

^^^ 2.5/5 Nope

he needs to hit the gym, bulk up cos if I catch ya yur dead
if we ever see a skull crusher, then it's me droppin the weight on his head

^^^ 2.5/5 Yeah I know what skull crushers are in the gym, doesn't make this less soft.


Overall: 14/25 The opener was nice, I had high hopes after reading that but you fizzled out and got really vague and soft. Wasn't feeling anything other than the opener.


Body Bags


This b the stomping of the century time murder this bitch
N dontt worry the hospital has lots. Of sheets,cause your insurance won't cover this

^^^ 2.5/5 Nope, sheets like forms to fill out? Or bed sheets? Because what do bed sheets have to do with insurance? Even if it's forms this is soft

Damn I miss the deadline, but you also did too
Sees like we both got a problem with time...except you seem to b stuck in 2002

^^^ 2/5 He mentioned the early 2000's so did you feed? If you did it was a really weak feed didn't hit at all.

Lame as punches you don't think you got any chance do you
Cuz when I'm done you'll need a para o medics....the cast of greys anatomy, n botched to fix u

^^^ 2.5/5 why break down para o medics like that? Made it sound awkward. Didn't hit

Shouldeve took the w and skipped your ass home queer
But I see you got pride in your verse...the kind thats get a parade every year

^^^ 2/5 Gay pride? Not a punch

Get it? Ill admit thet last punch was trash,
But one bad punch is okuwhen up against verse full of ass

^^^2/5 Nah


Overall: 11.5/25 No quotables. Not sure if you rushed or what but this was very soft. Nothing creative.


Huntsman had one solid couplet to BB's nothing.

Vote Huntsman

[Joe Boston]

Huntz first bar decent nameplay. 2nd bar rhyme scheme off wording couldve been better on the finisher. 3rd bar lol it was a nice flip. 4th bar I felt the concept was too soft the wordplay waa cool but no sting factor. Closer ia a played flip

Bodybags I felt the opener was cool nice flip. 2nd bar u kinda fed.3rd bar the finishing concept couldve hit so much better but the wording was choppy. 4th bar lol nice flip. Closer was basic didnt hit for me.

I felt huntz was slightly more consistent here

V/Huntz

[body bags]

Miracle vs Nixon

also dope francis vs Rilla

[Blanco.]

this text shit ain't for misfits, I'm about to show out on his ass
if you ever heard someone call b.b king, then they had to be talkin jazz
ask the old heads, this fuckers legacy needs some help
he side stepped greatness for so long, he could reinvent Ginobilis euro step

vs

Shouldeve took the w and skipped your ass home queer
But I see you got pride in your verse...the kind thats get a parade every year

meh battle. both were pretty outdated.. i got huntsman taking the W here for having one more quoteable then body..

vote - hunt

[body bags]

Lol my first battle back ....3-0

[Ryno]

3-0 my way, bump

[Wordz AhGod.]

this text shit ain't for misfits, I'm about to show out on his ass
if you ever heard someone call b.b king, then they had to be talkin jazz
felt this could have been much harder, plus Ive seen bb. king lines before.
ask the old heads, this fuckers legacy needs some help
he side stepped greatness for so long, he could reinvent Ginobilis euro step
damn it, this could have been dope but the execution was ass. smh
yur the ugliest fucker on the block, trust me I asked his hoe
he's got so many worry lines on his forehead, it could pass as a fuckin bar code
your executions are killing you, the rest of your lines are good.. reword your setups to flow better and work on execution portion of your punches.
faggots still livin in the early 2000s, get it together man
cos you don't need to know where ras be, to know he was the biggest b2k fan
was cool
he needs to hit the gym, bulk up cos if I catch ya yur dead
if we ever see a skull crusher, then it's me droppin the weight on his head
nahh, felt lazy.

vs

This b the stomping of the century time murder this bitch
N dontt worry the hospital has lots. Of sheets,cause your insurance won't cover this
this was horribly stretched, concept wasn't too bad but the wording killed it
Damn I miss the deadline, but you also did too
Sees like we both got a problem with time...except you seem to b stuck in 2002
nahh, if his style used / or something like that this would make sense
Lame as punches you don't think you got any chance do you
Cuz when I'm done you'll need a para o medics....the cast of greys anatomy, n botched to fix u
nahh, this continuation style for punches is played.. it needs to be a HARD wordplay for this to work, this one was weak.
Shouldeve took the w and skipped your ass home queer
But I see you got pride in your verse...the kind thats get a parade every year
nahhh, setup could have been used to connect better.. calling him a "queer" won't cut it enough.
Get it? Ill admit thet last punch was trash,
But one bad punch is okuwhen up against verse full of ass
admitting your own punch was trash doesn't help, not sure if this was a wordplay attempt or just a typo, eitherway.. punch was bad.

I got huntsman taking this fairly easily with better concepts. Wording and execution struggled hard but the misses were stronger.

v/Ill Kay

[Letterman]

ask the old heads, this fuckers legacy needs some help
he side stepped greatness for so long, he could reinvent Ginobilis euro step
faggots still livin in the early 2000s, get it together man
cos you don't need to know where ras be, to know he was the biggest b2k fan

Vs

Nothing, the gay pride was almost a hit

Pretty onesided battle here. Both have wording issues, hunts verse was more polished though. Bags didn't have anything that connected at all.

v/illkay