10 lines
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ill kay
mic s
10 lines
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check.. in 2 hours? ehh alright ill drop
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@mic s due by tomorrow. Happy bday bro
you couldn't be ill on your sickest day, you'll get packed up like suitcases
hit em with the same pose his avy made - punches leave him with 2faces
you to basic, not enough arsenal in your hunt to get game
everybody skips sqaures in order to capture K, check-mate!
lets play - paparazzi shots that will have you flopped like nazi victims!
you couldn't be a champ with the belt but you can have mine like robin williams!
jumangi victim! this a jungle out here so K the hunting is all yours!
funny though your punches all stretchers, leavin a foot in your ass like paul george!
i know that its awkward but how many quotables have you been mentioned for?
when i got you with stiff arms trying to stop the attacking like your kevin ward
(the dude tony stewart killed for those of u that dont watch nascar)
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Fuck it...
Stop fakin it kid. My pistol whip game'll introduce you to a hearse
So maybe you should start packin ' iron mic ', n then add a few punches to ya verse
LOL you look like a fag in the vids. I thought you were cut throat n heartless
Them rhymes ain't meant for a studio...but mos def should stay in that small ass apartment
This shits n art. You're value in that department decayed
Cos you struggle w/ ' graphic battles ' the way Elvis put your ass in the grave
I mean it outta be a crime cos his bars are a fault
Concepts have so many ' forced entries ' - they should be charged w/ sexual assault
I don't believe in us antics. We know ur not a thugged out guy
Please ya rep ain't just bologna - it's more like a focus hope box wrapped in a bow tie
To the top. Droppin my links later
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mic s
you couldn't be ill on your sickest day, you'll get packed up like suitcases
hit em with the same pose his avy made - punches leave him with 2faces
This was an ok flip direct hit Avy punches aren't really effective but not bad
you to basic, not enough arsenal in your hunt to get game
everybody skips sqaures in order to capture K, check-mate!
this was cool but it was worded more statementish and the format its in I see it being a more audio based punch
lets play - paparazzi shots that will have you flopped like nazi victims!
you couldn't be a champ with the belt but you can have mine like robin williams!
ok not a bad flip lots of robin Williams current shit being flipped now this was a bit effective tho
jumangi victim! this a jungle out here so K the hunting is all yours!
funny though your punches all stretchers, leavin a foot in your ass like paul george!
again good concept but the format is more and audio line
i know that its awkward but how many quotables have you been mentioned for?
when i got you with stiff arms trying to stop the attacking like your kevin ward
ok concept don't have to explain tho lol
mic s I think ur incoperating audio battling/vbl into text format if u get what im saying. mainly the wording on some of ur hits would come off more stingwise if delivered audio. Text wise its just missing the wording aspect of the punch.
For example everybody skips squares to capture k,checkmate the pause in their when reading just gives me that impression it would be more effective in audio.
your too basic, not enough arsenal to hunt me down u queer
I have goons that'll capture k like I was on the checker board skipping squares
something to that aspect to make the wording standout more in a text format
Ill Kay
Stop fakin it kid. My pistol whip game'll introduce you to a hearse
So maybe you should start packin ' iron mic ', n then add a few punches to ya verse
nice flip here on the nameplay
LOL you look like a fag in the vids. I thought you were cut throat n heartless
Them rhymes ain't meant for a studio...but mos def should stay in that small ass apartment
lol nice personal
This shits n art. You're value in that department decayed
Cos you struggle w/ ' graphic battles ' the way Elvis put your ass in the grave
ok personal felt u could've been more creative in the aspect of the elvis reference
I mean it outta be a crime cos his bars are a fault
Concepts have so many ' forced entries ' - they should be charged w/ sexual assault
this bar seems familiar felt ive seen it before but overall good humor factor on the flip
I don't believe in us antics. We know ur not a thugged out guy
Please ya rep ain't just bologna - it's more like a focus hope box wrapped in a bow tie
lol
Well like I stated mic s just needs more work on formatting his punches into text battling the wording of them comes off more audio based. Ill Kay seems like a more experience text head he had a couple good personals and and some flips.
V/Ill Kay
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you couldn't be ill on your sickest day, you'll get packed up like suitcases
hit em with the same pose his avy made - punches leave him with 2faces
could of done more with this
you to basic, not enough arsenal in your hunt to get game
everybody skips sqaures in order to capture K, check-mate!
this was ok
lets play - paparazzi shots that will have you flopped like nazi victims!
you couldn't be a champ with the belt but you can have mine like robin williams!
wasnt feelin this one
jumangi victim! this a jungle out here so K the hunting is all yours!
funny though your punches all stretchers, leavin a foot in your ass like paul george!
haha cool wording could of been better though
i know that its awkward but how many quotables have you been mentioned for?
when i got you with stiff arms trying to stop the attacking like your kevin ward
(the dude tony stewart killed for those of u that dont watch nascar)
ok closer
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Stop fakin it kid. My pistol whip game'll introduce you to a hearse
So maybe you should start packin ' iron mic ', n then add a few punches to ya verse
ehh not really feelin this
LOL you look like a fag in the vids. I thought you were cut throat n heartless
Them rhymes ain't meant for a studio...but mos def should stay in that small ass apartment
lol
This shits n art. You're value in that department decayed
Cos you struggle w/ ' graphic battles ' the way Elvis put your ass in the grave
ghoul just used this same line against me but still decent lol
I mean it outta be a crime cos his bars are a fault
Concepts have so many ' forced entries ' - they should be charged w/ sexual assault
cool
I don't believe in us antics. We know ur not a thugged out guy
Please ya rep ain't just bologna - it's more like a focus hope box wrapped in a bow tie
ok closer
ill kay had the better verse here. mic you had some cool concepts you just gotta work on wording them better and adding ore creativity in them. good verse ill.
vote -kill
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you couldn't be ill on your sickest day, you'll get packed up like suitcases
hit em with the same pose his avy made - punches leave him with 2faces
nah
you to basic, not enough arsenal in your hunt to get game
everybody skips sqaures in order to capture K, check-mate!
played to death
lets play - paparazzi shots that will have you flopped like nazi victims!
you couldn't be a champ with the belt but you can have mine like robin williams!
This has been done 100000 since it happened
jumangi victim! this a jungle out here so K the hunting is all yours!
funny though your punches all stretchers, leavin a foot in your ass like paul george!
bad wording
i know that its awkward but how many quotables have you been mentioned for?
when i got you with stiff arms trying to stop the attacking like your kevin ward
not feeling this either
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Stop fakin it kid. My pistol whip game'll introduce you to a hearse
So maybe you should start packin ' iron mic ', n then add a few punches to ya verse
weak opener
LOL you look like a fag in the vids. I thought you were cut throat n heartless
Them rhymes ain't meant for a studio...but mos def should stay in that small ass apartment
meh
This shits n art. You're value in that department decayed
Cos you struggle w/ ' graphic battles ' the way Elvis put your ass in the grave
alright
I mean it outta be a crime cos his bars are a fault
Concepts have so many ' forced entries ' - they should be charged w/ sexual assault
cool, coulda been worded better
I don't believe in us antics. We know ur not a thugged out guy
Please ya rep ain't just bologna - it's more like a focus hope box wrapped in a bow tie
nahh
MVGT ill Kay
2 faces and belt was cool
Vs.
Iron mic, apartment, sexual assault
Decent battle here. Felt like mic s had alot of cool concepts but something was holding them back from hitting hard. The checkmate line would have been nice if we referred to a king as K. Ill kay has nice wording imo, had some solid shots and takes it pretty comfortable here.
Boss up