Phuc'n Siq vs ill kay [ill kay wins 5-1]

[Ryno]

10 lines
Due in 1 hr

[Phuc'n Siq]

Im here.

[Phuc'n Siq]

Its a ill day for ill kay... He aint feeling real well < cuz he cant get out it
u came with hopes of doubt when, his pool of blood is what he'll drown in
think im a quick slice cuz im 0-2, but u aint equip'd w.the right blade yet
Deadpool might be, so if kay any like him the lame'll just talk me to death
but Jesus!... this gay shit is crazy everywhere! killin me wit yall butt clan
u remind me of Fleece 'Booty' Johnson..
................. cause this killer dont shoot for the pussy, he just Hunts man

@Wordz AhGod. Just so I can get an idea, how would you have executed some of those lines ?

Herb shit! U need help w.exectutions.. n everything else cuz u just corny
I ask Kay if he hit o'girl n he was like, "Wordz AhGod smashed her for me"
n since u like to be in the spot light i put kay behind a camera n film him
n produce him w.a Hook so mean... u'd think i was rivaling Robin Willams <- R.I.P

[Ryno]

Phuc n Siq aka Straight Skillz

The balls in your court. But I'll disable you quick you know it's the truth
You'll see ' Skillz on wheels ' - quicker paraplegics shootin some hoops
Call a hospital n get a doctor. Bro, those verses losin w/ ease
If ' siq'll sell ' a drop to voters, then we hope you roll over n die from the disease
I live life like an nba player. My attitude is ill snatch ya chick for goodness sake
I'll go behind her back n score - w/ more ooo's n ahh's than Jamal crawfords shake n bake
Take a note or two. My fan mail says my tactics are awfully better
The way I'll stab em w/ my pen - Reporters'll think i put P.S down like I was adding to a letter
Your an internet dork. Social media or life ? This guy can't find a balance
It's like monkey see monkey do...he'll be on Facebook droppin his own fire challenge
The life you live is weak. Ur basement bound by games ya homo
When he here's the phrase ' cold shoulder ' - he'll proceed to explain sub zeros combo

[Phuc'n Siq]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?480007
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?479154

2 hours later huh... lol

[Elvis Freshley]

Its a ill day for ill kay... He aint feeling real well < cuz he cant get out it
u came with hopes of doubt when, his pool of blood is what he'll drown in

^^^ It and In don’t rhyme, out-it drown-in also don’t but even if they did there wasn’t a punch here

think im a quick slice cuz im 0-2, but u aint equip'd w.the right blade yet
Deadpool might be, so if kay any like him the lame'll just talk me to death

^^^ again the rhyme is a stretch deadpool was okay from his avy, but still pretty soft

but Jesus!... this gay shit is crazy everywhere! killin me wit yall butt clan
u remind me of Fleece 'Booty' Johnson..
................. cause this killer dont shoot for the pussy, he just Hunts man

^^^ Meh this wasn’t bad, still kind of soft but at least was a punch


Herb shit! U need help w.exectutions.. n everything else cuz u just corny
I ask Kay if he hit o'girl n he was like, "Wordz AhGod smashed her for me"

^^^ Probably your best couplet (thus far) the quote made it better. Cool

n since u like to be in the spot light i put kay behind a camera n film him
n produce him w.a Hook so mean... u'd think i was rivaling Robin Willams <- R.I.P

^^^ I get the Hook reference, but “produce him with a hook” is either a music thing, or a punch thing but neither work here with the “camera and film him” this was just really sloppy

You need more punches honestly. Not really bad as far as a general diss but you barley swung at Kay here.

Phuc n Siq aka Straight Skillz

The balls in your court. But I'll disable you quick you know it's the truth
You'll see ' Skillz on wheels ' - quicker paraplegics shootin some hoops

^^^ Meh… wasn’t feeling this

Call a hospital n get a doctor. Bro, those verses losin w/ ease
If ' siq'll sell ' a drop to voters, then we hope you roll over n die from the disease

^^^Concept was cool, first thing I thought when I saw his name. But you didn’t execute it. Took too long to get to the punch then it wasn’t really clever anyways.

I live life like an nba player. My attitude is ill snatch ya chick for goodness sake
I'll go behind her back n score - w/ more ooo's n ahh's than Jamal crawfords shake n bake

^^^ Pretty indirect punch but the flow was pretty cool and it was clever. I dug it

Take a note or two. My fan mail says my tactics are awfully better
The way I'll stab em w/ my pen - Reporters'll think i put P.S down like I was adding to a letter

^^^ Man this was really bad wording. “awfully better” I mean it kind of makes sense but it sounds dumb. And “Reporters’ll think” what do reporters have to do with this? Cool concept but it got slaughtered

Your an internet dork. Social media or life ? This guy can't find a balance
It's like monkey see monkey do...he'll be on Facebook droppin his own fire challenge

^^^ Not feeling this

The life you live is weak. Ur basement bound by games ya homo
When he here's the phrase ' cold shoulder ' - he'll proceed to explain sub zeros combo

^^^ This concept was iffy, with the right play on it, could have been dope. But instead it was just thrown on the page man.

This was my least favorite verse from you. No real punches in the entire verse. A lot of slick concepts that you just left dry.


Vote- This wasn’t a good battle honestly, weak on both ends. But Phuc’n Siq just had a couple harder hits.

[Wordz AhGod.]

Its a ill day for ill kay... He aint feeling real well < cuz he cant get out it
u came with hopes of doubt when, his pool of blood is what he'll drown in
wasn't feeling, second line was choppy.
think im a quick slice cuz im 0-2, but u aint equip'd w.the right blade yet
Deadpool might be, so if kay any like him the lame'll just talk me to death
wording had this falling flat.
but Jesus!... this gay shit is crazy everywhere! killin me wit yall butt clan
u remind me of Fleece 'Booty' Johnson..
................. cause this killer dont shoot for the pussy, he just Hunts man
cool nameplay, wording was supper stretched, if you use the 3 line style.. try to keep the setup line as short as possible and cut down the syllables as much as you can for the execution lines.
Herb shit! U need help w.exectutions.. n everything else cuz u just corny
I ask Kay if he hit o'girl n he was like, "Wordz AhGod smashed her for me"
this didn't make much sense.
n since u like to be in the spot light i put kay behind a camera n film him
n produce him w.a Hook so mean... u'd think i was rivaling Robin Willams <- R.I.P
this didn't rhyme, punch was ok.

Phuc n Siq aka Straight Skillz

The balls in your court. But I'll disable you quick you know it's the truth
You'll see ' Skillz on wheels ' - quicker paraplegics shootin some hoops
could have been dope, wording of the transition from the first part to the second part of your execution line was choppy, like it was missing some words in between.
Call a hospital n get a doctor. Bro, those verses losin w/ ease
If ' siq'll sell ' a drop to voters, then we hope you roll over n die from the disease
Ive used a siclecell (however you spell it lol) line before so Im a bit bias towards the wordplay, this one felt a bit lazy.
I live life like an nba player. My attitude is ill snatch ya chick for goodness sake
I'll go behind her back n score - w/ more ooo's n ahh's than Jamal crawfords shake n bake
this was ok, not hard or personal, felt a bit stretched..
Take a note or two. My fan mail says my tactics are awfully better
The way I'll stab em w/ my pen - Reporters'll think i put P.S down like I was adding to a letter
dope nameplay, possibly too wordy but i liked the overall concept.
Your an internet dork. Social media or life ? This guy can't find a balance
It's like monkey see monkey do...he'll be on Facebook droppin his own fire challenge
nahhh
The life you live is weak. Ur basement bound by games ya homo
When he here's the phrase ' cold shoulder ' - he'll proceed to explain sub zeros combo
nahh

cool battle, nothing fansy or hard hitting but a good read none the less. I have ill Kay taking it fairly easily due to having better concepts. He just has to work on his wording as some of his bars are either choppy from him cutting out words or lack a proper execution to match his harder punches.

v/ill Kay

rtf
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...AhGod-vs-Lenox

[Wordz AhGod.]

@ill kay

we need two links from you homie, feel free to vote on the link I left above.

[Lenox]

This was an easy judge.
Multis: ill kay
Punches: ill kay
Flow: ill kay
Enjoyment: ill kay
Opener: ill kay
Closer: ill kay
MVGT: ill kay

[Spree]

Pool of blood, and robin Williams


Vs
Paraplegic, shake n bake, p.s.

I felt this was close battle. Phuc bars were a bit more wordy then kays and his
Misses weren't as good as kays.
Vote Kay

[Ryno]

Voted on:

Killing Spree vs Body bags
Wordz vs Lenox

3-1 my way

[Greedy]

Siq had:
Words a god

Ill had:
P.s and Jamal crawford

Vote: ill Kay

I felt both kinda rushed. Siq isn't bad, just don't do 1hr drops. Take ur time and come with that heat. Siq, u coulda won because ill Kay slacked up
Ill Kay, ur verse was better overall, but I think you came much weaker than I've seen you drop. Your concepts are on point tho. Just take more time to execute them better

[Ryno]

4-1 bump

[Blanco.]

Its a ill day for ill kay... He aint feeling real well < cuz he cant get out it
u came with hopes of doubt when, his pool of blood is what he'll drown in

vs.

Call a hospital n get a doctor. Bro, those verses losin w/ ease
If ' siq'll sell ' a drop to voters, then we hope you roll over n die from the disease
Your an internet dork. Social media or life ? This guy can't find a balance
It's like monkey see monkey do...he'll be on Facebook droppin his own fire challenge

this was an ok battle both had some misses. ill kay had one more quote so i got him taking this. he had more creativity in his verse. phuq was basic as shit. work on adding harshness your your lines and be witty when wording your concepts.

vote - ill kay.

[Ryno]

@Fresh or @Wordz AhGod. Close this please, 5-1