10 lines
Due by Monday
Killing Spree
ill kay
10 lines
Due by Monday
@Killing Spree due Wednesday. My fault
A coincidence aye ? Then how'd you know he was lyrisic ? Fuck outta here ...
Ain't no goin the distance, ill destroy ur parade like a bomb threat
If we gave Kill a meter of success, he'd turn it into a thousand wack concepts
Ya noticed how he dropped less bars n still had you shook
It's funny...King didn't have to crush you for us to know you drop like a rook
You tried to have us fooled, n it didn't work as you can see
I mean that bite was so clear, i thought I was watching Jaws on Blu Ray DVD
We can't play ur type of games, ur tactics'll get us all fried
If someone has killer instinct, it just means they'll look for lines in a veterans archive
Despite ur recent events, every single drop you had sucked
Ya punches n flow are the worst combination since Lenox n joe boston tagged up
What you call a work of art ain't much but a waste of time
Cos ya punches so forced, it makes me wanna fall in love w/ Wordz' window line
We know ur faggot, the type to stay on some slick shit
Sprees seen so much staff, his house could hold it's own company picnic
Let's go to war, I got grenades for days if ya think I'm lyin
He'll be slow to get the point, when shank'em like that scene from saving private Ryan
Told fresh he lost when score was 4-2/check Elvis freshlys VBL. Shirts right bruh/ spree candy/Kay jeweler/his alias Huntsmen
You can't fight wit prom night baby writes, so spree off'n his assOriginally Posted by ill kay
Cos even YOU knew ya first dance wasn't shaking shit off! & belongs in the trash !^^^
& im'a tank over this jerk if he think'n of toppin the best'a sprees work
Cos ya head'll turn red when I squeeze you harder than n Elvis Freshly T shirt!
speak'n on that now^^,seems you got outclass'd.. IN that bout!
Elvis didn't have to raise his hands for you to flinch, tag @Fresh , & tap out!
You wack to me! There's no sugar coating that, & I'll crack ya teeth
only chance you got box'n spree's if you steal'n sweets while work'n that factory!
& girls think you soft n childish, and prob running towards gay men
So when they talk good bout that man Hunt? Its reminiscing out door games @ age 10!
Plus bitches crumble when I drum role they pussy, get nervous n drool for me
If they ever sayin they happy when Kay rocks? They must've purchased sum jewelry!
Funny you went from wack to boss in five days, now I'm choking the kid
reason you were asked to join BS? Is cos it's the resulting fact for most of your wins!
Judging by ya slow skilled verses I'll be fast on beating kid in
Cos you couldn't over come fee(fi) like an over ruled speeding ticket!
@Fresh My finished verse.
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Ill Kay:
Ain't no goin the distance, ill destroy ur parade like a bomb threat
If we gave Kill a meter of success, he'd turn it into a thousand wack concepts
Despite ur recent events, every single drop you had sucked
Ya punches n flow are the worst combination since Lenox n joe boston tagged up
We know ur faggot, the type to stay on some slick shit
Sprees seen so much staff, his house could hold it's own company picnic
Vs
Killing spree:
speak'n on that now^^,seems you got outclass'd.. IN that bout!
Elvis didn't have to raise his hands for you to flinch, tag @Fresh , & tap out
Plus bitches crumble when I drum role they pussy, get nervous n drool for me
If they ever sayin they happy when Kay rocks? They must've purchased sum jewelry!
Vote ill kay
Overall, it was an ok battle. I have ill Kay taking this with a better overall verse
Kill a bitch and kill her kid
all depends what her nigga did
-herbo
@Killing Spree 2 voting links
Veterans archive
Vs
Join bs
Ok battle. I'll Kay had a few more that I almost quoted. He was pretty consistent in the throwing of jabs. Wasn't loving a lot from spree tbh. He had the boxing sprees line that could have been much better. Bs I only quoted cause it's relevant, even though any bs plays in 2014 are a bit looked down upon
Stay up
V/ kay
The blue stuff.
ill kay
Ain't no goin the distance, ill destroy ur parade like a bomb threat
If we gave Kill a meter of success, he'd turn it into a thousand wack concepts
ehh ok
Ya noticed how he dropped less bars n still had you shook
It's funny...King didn't have to crush you for us to know you drop like a rook
nah
You tried to have us fooled, n it didn't work as you can see
I mean that bite was so clear, i thought I was watching Jaws on Blu Ray DVD
lol alright
We can't play ur type of games, ur tactics'll get us all fried
If someone has killer instinct, it just means they'll look for lines in a veterans archive
cool
Despite ur recent events, every single drop you had sucked
Ya punches n flow are the worst combination since Lenox n joe boston tagged up
lol alright
What you call a work of art ain't much but a waste of time
Cos ya punches so forced, it makes me wanna fall in love w/ Wordz' window line
Don't get this personal
We know ur faggot, the type to stay on some slick shit
Sprees seen so much staff, his house could hold it's own company picnic
alright
Let's go to war, I got grenades for days if ya think I'm lyin
He'll be slow to get the point, when shank'em like that scene from saving private Ryan
nah
Killing Spree
You can't fight wit prom night baby writes, so spree off'n his ass
Cos even YOU knew ya first dance wasn't shaking shit off! & belongs in the trash !^^^
nah
& im'a tank over this jerk if he think'n of toppin the best'a sprees work
Cos ya head'll turn red when I squeeze you harder than n Elvis Freshly T shirt!
What no
speak'n on that now^^,seems you got outclass'd.. IN that bout!
Elvis didn't have to raise his hands for you to flinch, tag @Fresh , & tap out!
eh ok
You wack to me! There's no sugar coating that, & I'll crack ya teeth
only chance you got box'n spree's if you steal'n sweets while work'n that factory!
with better wordin this could've been better
& girls think you soft n childish, and prob running towards gay men
So when they talk good bout that man Hunt? Its reminiscing out door games @ age 10!
good concept ending fell flat tbh
Plus bitches crumble when I drum role they pussy, get nervous n drool for me
If they ever sayin they happy when Kay rocks? They must've purchased sum jewelry!
Kinda basic but ok
Funny you went from wack to boss in five days, now I'm choking the kid
reason you were asked to join BS? Is cos it's the resulting fact for most of your wins!
alright
Judging by ya slow skilled verses I'll be fast on beating kid in
Cos you couldn't over come fee(fi) like an over ruled speeding ticket!
what? is that a person he battle I still don't get it
Cool beans this battle was decent man Spree after reading your verse now I know y wording is important not being an ass but you didn't execute some of those concepts properly. The boxin spree, and man hunt concepts are just a couple of examples shit could've been fire just sayin. now Ill kay verse just seemed more polished in comparison some pretty cool hits and some that just missed completely but did enough to win here. Spree just take your time when writing verses and you'll be fine word that that shit and reword it some more
vote Ill kay
....Boss status....
So give me an example to fix my wording
3-0 my way
kay
Ain't no goin the distance, ill destroy ur parade like a bomb threat
If we gave Kill a meter of success, he'd turn it into a thousand wack concepts
decent flip here I felt u could've of done more with the meter of success reference as far as the sting factor went
Ya noticed how he dropped less bars n still had you shook
It's funny...King didn't have to crush you for us to know you drop like a rook
ok personal im assuming rook is a chess/checkers term? rook meaning short for rookie not bad
You tried to have us fooled, n it didn't work as you can see
I mean that bite was so clear, i thought I was watching Jaws on Blu Ray DVD
lol good flip on the personal
We can't play ur type of games, ur tactics'll get us all fried
If someone has killer instinct, it just means they'll look for lines in a veterans archive
ive seen to many veterans archive flips looking for material etc.
Despite ur recent events, every single drop you had sucked
Ya punches n flow are the worst combination since Lenox n joe boston tagged up
ok hit current but I felt lacked sting factor
What you call a work of art ain't much but a waste of time
Cos ya punches so forced, it makes me wanna fall in love w/ Wordz' window line
lol funny because the hit was actually a forced wordplay
We know ur faggot, the type to stay on some slick shit
Sprees seen so much staff, his house could hold it's own company picnic
lol
Let's go to war, I got grenades for days if ya think I'm lyin
He'll be slow to get the point, when shank'em like that scene from saving private Ryan
could've been executed better on the metaphore
Spree
You can't fight wit prom night baby writes, so spree off'n his ass
Cos even YOU knew ya first dance wasn't shaking shit off! & belongs in the trash !^^^
felt this could've been worded much better
& im'a tank over this jerk if he think'n of toppin the best'a sprees work
Cos ya head'll turn red when I squeeze you harder than n Elvis Freshly T shirt!
lol
speak'n on that now^^,seems you got outclass'd.. IN that bout!
Elvis didn't have to raise his hands for you to flinch, tag @Fresh , & tap out!
ok personal but again the wording needs to be more polished
You wack to me! There's no sugar coating that, & I'll crack ya teeth
only chance you got box'n spree's if you steal'n sweets while work'n that factory!
ok good concept like the wordplay np creativity
& girls think you soft n childish, and prob running towards gay men
So when they talk good bout that man Hunt? Its reminiscing out door games @ age 10!
lmao
Plus bitches crumble when I drum role they pussy, get nervous n drool for me
If they ever sayin they happy when Kay rocks? They must've purchased sum jewelry!
kay jeweler concept are very predictable on him
Funny you went from wack to boss in five days, now I'm choking the kid
reason you were asked to join BS? Is cos it's the resulting fact for most of your wins!
ok personal flip
Judging by ya slow skilled verses I'll be fast on beating kid in
Cos you couldn't over come fee(fi) like an over ruled speeding ticket!
ok personal but the rhyme scheme is off
I liked kays king/rook personal. the biting jaws blu ray concept was ok good humor factor. the wordzahgod window line was funny. staff company pinic line. u had a couple lines with added humor factor. spree elvis freshly tshirt line was funny. box n spress line was cool. manhunt line was pretty funny. bs personal was cool.
I felt quote wise was even also felt both had some other potential hits that could've been excecuted better due to wording. I felt Spree had slight more humor factor and consistency I enjoyed his creativity a bit more.
V/Spree
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