Unfukwitable vs DamienThorn [ Fuk wins ko]

[Fresh]

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@Unfukwitable

@DamienThorn

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Verses due Wednesday, February 4th 2014 11:59PM EST

16 - 20 lines.

ALL FL RULES APPLY

[Unfukwitable]

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[DamienThorn]

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[DamienThorn]

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[Unfukwitable]

I spoon females of ur dreams after I oil them up,
A bitch never had Thorn in her side, But they ALL think u're annoying as fuck.
Dying by ur hands? Damn, Thats something that I gotta see,
U'll only give me a Deaf sentence, Using sign language to convey an apology.
U got a bunch of Goons for me?, Bet I'll throw 1Punch & it's over D,
After I make the first 'One Z', The rest of ya crew'll buy PJ's and go to sleep.
He re-writes things that he previously read, Something ain't right,
But he acts so blind to flippin shit, He'll probably say "i" & "!" look nothing alike.
Idc if you cherish them goggles u call glasses, I'll set the record straight;
Once Im done 'smashin specs' It'll be nothin left to examine or investigate.
He uses false info against opponents. I ain't merciful;
I'll end ur whole Catfish approach, Since u tryna gain attention off of fake personals.
Them filler lines don't belong in a Champ match, So wheres the gratitude?
His bars is full of blowing smoke... They could rename a Hookah Lounge after you.
I hate this Homeless prick & that fisherman hat he collects change with;
Kill me?... If I Kick the Bucket it'll Be a bunch of coins on the Pavement.

BADA BING! BADA BOOM!

[DamienThorn]

Q. What's your RB power rankings right now? GO!

A. Hmmmmm Ok lemme see. My top 10

Barcotic
Spit
AK
Greedy$
Galactic
Packed Graves
Mimic
MUFF
Cred
Letterman

these things always change but off the top thats my 10 for now (almost in that order) lol

You're fucking lame and you know it, there's no question I'm right

Cause ya name's missin' from your OWN list of who's best in the site
..Still asking vets for advice, stealing their rhymes and punches..
Cause Short of their 2 Cents… you’re just a Dime a Dozen
Lately your punches haven’t been harsh, your skills have visibly declined 
So when I say ya Rhymes are Laid Back- I don't mean that you're Lyrically Inclined
Just another fag has-been who never was.. I've read most your battles, b
And in reality.. to say you've Plateaued is actually- a High Form of Flattery
You need diapers for those turds you been droppin, boxers are mad brown
That should keep ya Draws Fresh- next time your caught witcha pants down
I Gave your ho an "O", No Frontin'. The D' genrous like Ellen is
Unfuck can't hold a nut in.. You’re Done Fuckin’n she’s gotta Sell-a-Bit 
Never sold narcotics, though. You’re known for the crimes that you didn't do
If you ever had fell-on-knees..it was to suck Barcotic's dick while he pissed on you
Is this dude the champ? He hasn’t made his presence felt; just Retire the belt

Think you're too Cool and maybe that's why you took advantage of the state of FL 

Damn, I had 20 but you dropped right before I did. GL

[Fresh]

I spoon females of ur dreams after I oil them up,
A bitch never had Thorn in her side, But they ALL think u're annoying as fuck.
decent
Dying by ur hands? Damn, Thats something that I gotta see,
U'll only give me a Deaf sentence, Using sign language to convey an apology.
ok
U got a bunch of Goons for me?, Bet I'll throw 1Punch & it's over D,
After I make the first 'One Z', The rest of ya crew'll buy PJ's and go to sleep.
i think this had potential, but didn't like the direction u took it.
He re-writes things that he previously read, Something ain't right,
But he acts so blind to flippin shit, He'll probably say "i" & "!" look nothing alike.
not feelin it
Idc if you cherish them goggles u call glasses, I'll set the record straight;
Once Im done 'smashin specs' It'll be nothin left to examine or investigate.
cool
He uses false info against opponents. I ain't merciful;
I'll end ur whole Catfish approach, Since u tryna gain attention off of fake personals.
not feelin
Them filler lines don't belong in a Champ match, So wheres the gratitude?
His bars is full of blowing smoke... They could rename a Hookah Lounge after you.
this was ok
I hate this Homeless prick & that fisherman hat he collects change with;
Kill me?... If I Kick the Bucket it'll Be a bunch of coins on the Pavement.
Ehh not feelin it

vs

You're fucking lame and you know it, there's no question I'm right

Cause ya name's missin' from your OWN list of who's best in the site
This was ok
..Still asking vets for advice, stealing their rhymes and punches..
Cause Short of their 2 Cents… you’re just a Dime a Dozen
ok
Lately your punches haven’t been harsh, your skills have visibly declined
So when I say ya Rhymes are Laid Back- I don't mean that you're Lyrically Inclined
not feelin this
Just another fag has-been who never was.. I've read most your battles, b
And in reality.. to say you've Plateaued is actually- a High Form of Flattery
hmm, ima give this to you
You need diapers for those turds you been droppin, boxers are mad brown
That should keep ya Draws Fresh- next time your caught witcha pants down
nahh
I Gave your ho an "O", No Frontin'. The D' genrous like Ellen is
Unfuck can't hold a nut in.. You’re Done Fuckin’n she’s gotta Sell-a-Bit
I get what ur going for with the celibate / sell a bit.. but it doesn't work for me here effectively
Never sold narcotics, though. You’re known for the crimes that you didn't do
If you ever had fell-on-knees..it was to suck Barcotic's dick while he pissed on you
fell-on-knees had potential but the wording here is hindering the connection
Is this dude the champ? He hasn’t made his presence felt; just Retire the belt

Think you're too Cool and maybe that's why you took advantage of the state of FL
kinda weak here

Close battle, Damien was much better than I anticipated.. I think if Damien had reworded a couple of his bars he could have got this easy, but I've got Unfuk taking this 4-3. Very close tho, and props to Damien for steppin up and actually giving unfuk who's highly regarded a run for his money.

v/Unfuk

[Massaker]

Fuk - opener was nice, dead was cool. One z fell short for me, cool concept. Bar 4 was a huge miss for me tbh. Thought smashing specs and cat fish were cool,Bit light. Blowing smoke was light. Closer was a miss. Seen these concepts and this one wasn't nice.

Thorn - opener was OK. Felt I could have done something better with the personal. Dime a dozen was cool. Laid back was a miss for me. Same with platoued, wasn't feelin it. Draws fresh could have been cool. U kept it to generic imo. Sell a bit was a stretch for me man. Wasn't feeling that. I thought felines was cool. Closer was weak.

Overall light battle. Thorn dropped some better shit deff but I got unfukwitable taking this with harsher and more creative hits. Good shit thorn no doubt

Vote fuk

[Massaker]

@Greedy$ @Letterman @E Tha Real @Lenox @Amen @Packed Graves @Joe Boston @Smog @ votes so we can keep this moving

[Joe Boston]

Unfukwitable

I spoon females of ur dreams after I oil them up,
A bitch never had Thorn in her side, But they ALL think u're annoying as fuck.
felt the Thorn nameplay coulve been executed better

Dying by ur hands? Damn, Thats something that I gotta see,
U'll only give me a Deaf sentence, Using sign language to convey an apology.
ok nice wordplay flip

U got a bunch of Goons for me?, Bet I'll throw 1Punch & it's over D,
After I make the first 'One Z', The rest of ya crew'll buy PJ's and go to sleep.
I felt the wordplay was a slight reach here

He re-writes things that he previously read, Something ain't right,
But he acts so blind to flippin shit, He'll probably say "i" & "!" look nothing alike.
nah

Idc if you cherish them goggles u call glasses, I'll set the record straight;
Once Im done 'smashin specs' It'll be nothin left to examine or investigate.
ok cool wordplay direct hit nice flip

He uses false info against opponents. I ain't merciful;
I'll end ur whole Catfish approach, Since u tryna gain attention off of fake personals.
cool concept felt wording and execution failed here

Them filler lines don't belong in a Champ match, So wheres the gratitude?
His bars is full of blowing smoke... They could rename a Hookah Lounge after you.
ok flip

I hate this Homeless prick & that fisherman hat he collects change with;
Kill me?... If I Kick the Bucket it'll Be a bunch of coins on the Pavement.
nah statement finish


Damien

You're fucking lame and you know it, there's no question I'm right
Cause ya name's missin' from your OWN list of who's best in the site
basic hit this was ok as a jab for me

..Still asking vets for advice, stealing their rhymes and punches..
Cause Short of their 2 Cents… you’re just a Dime a Dozen
ok flip

Lately your punches haven’t been harsh, your skills have visibly declined
So when I say ya Rhymes are Laid Back- I don't mean that you're Lyrically Inclined
wasn't feeling this flip

Just another fag has-been who never was.. I've read most your battles, b
And in reality.. to say you've Plateaued is actually- a High Form of Flattery
ok felt a little humor factor in this hit

You need diapers for those turds you been droppin, boxers are mad brown
That should keep ya Draws Fresh- next time your caught witcha pants down
nah

I Gave your ho an "O", No Frontin'. The D' genrous like Ellen is
Unfuck can't hold a nut in.. You’re Done Fuckin’n she’s gotta Sell-a-Bit
good attempt but the sell a bit wordplay was a reach

Never sold narcotics, though. You’re known for the crimes that you didn't do
If you ever had fell-on-knees..it was to suck Barcotic's dick while he pissed on you
good wordplay I just didn't like how u ended the reference

Is this dude the champ? He hasn’t made his presence felt; just Retire the belt
Think you're too Cool and maybe that's why you took advantage of the state of FL
nah


I felt Damien had some ok bars he just needs to work on execution and wording. Felt Unfukwitable was a little more consistent had a couple reaches but overall his attemtps were better.

V/Unfukwiable

[Amen]

I spoon females of ur dreams after I oil them up,
A bitch never had Thorn in her side, But they ALL think u're annoying as fuck.

Set up could have been better, concept & punch was good tho.

Dying by ur hands? Damn, Thats something that I gotta see,
U'll only give me a Deaf sentence, Using sign language to convey an apology.

Deaf/Death is an older wordplay. I already knew the execution once I seen the concept.

U got a bunch of Goons for me?, Bet I'll throw 1Punch & it's over D,
After I make the first 'One Z', The rest of ya crew'll buy PJ's and go to sleep.

I think the concept was dope, didn't like your execution tho. It was lazy & corny, tbh.

He re-writes things that he previously read, Something ain't right,
But he acts so blind to flippin shit, He'll probably say "i" & "!" look nothing alike.

I liked this.

Idc if you cherish them goggles u call glasses, I'll set the record straight;
Once Im done 'smashin specs' It'll be nothin left to examine or investigate.

Ok.

He uses false info against opponents. I ain't merciful;
I'll end ur whole Catfish approach, Since u tryna gain attention off of fake personals.

Don't like this.

Them filler lines don't belong in a Champ match, So wheres the gratitude?
His bars is full of blowing smoke... They could rename a Hookah Lounge after you.

Ok.

I hate this Homeless prick & that fisherman hat he collects change with;
Kill me?... If I Kick the Bucket it'll Be a bunch of coins on the Pavement.

Played.

vs

You're fucking lame and you know it, there's no question I'm right

Cause ya name's missin' from your OWN list of who's best in the site

Not insulting really. Could have used a harsher execution. As is, the bar is statement'ish.

..Still asking vets for advice, stealing their rhymes and punches..
Cause Short of their 2 Cents… you’re just a Dime a Dozen

Again, same as bar above.

Lately your punches haven’t been harsh, your skills have visibly declined
So when I say ya Rhymes are Laid Back- I don't mean that you're Lyrically Inclined

Could have expanded on this concept. Stale as is. Missing the harsh factor.

Just another fag has-been who never was.. I've read most your battles, b
And in reality.. to say you've Plateaued is actually- a High Form of Flattery

This is ok. I like it.

You need diapers for those turds you been droppin, boxers are mad brown
That should keep ya Draws Fresh- next time your caught witcha pants down

Like your 1st couple bars. Lacks the insult factor/harshness.

I Gave your ho an "O", No Frontin'. The D' genrous like Ellen is
Unfuck can't hold a nut in.. You’re Done Fuckin’n she’s gotta Sell-a-Bit

Cool attempt. Could have been worded better.

Never sold narcotics, though. You’re known for the crimes that you didn't do
If you ever had fell-on-knees..it was to suck Barcotic's dick while he pissed on you

Reach. Cool attempt tho. Like the creative thought process.

Is this dude the champ? He hasn’t made his presence felt; just Retire the belt

Think you're too Cool and maybe that's why you took advantage of the state of FL

Not saying much here.

I got Unfuk taking this. Dame is progressing but definitely out spar'd here. Some decent attempts but nothing that landed effectively. Need to work on harsh executions.

v/Unfukwitable

[Massaker]

Good battle at dam
Ko win for @Unfukwitable
Closed