Oz (4-2) vs Shafi (8-4-1) (Shafi Wins)

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LLL
Season 18

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[Amen]

here
want to go pics? or you one of those scary faggots.
holla

[Greedy]

No pics. Reg

[ILLunatic]

Ready for Blind Drops!

[Amen]

O’s game immaculate, I spit G that got hoes lined up for sex & more,
but if this Indian faggot ever tryna pick up line, it’s a career 9 to 5 tech support.
dudes fragile, weak & played w/ the flips, his flows are never sick,
so it’s no surprise that his Oz bars’ll date back to when THAT show was relevant.
plus $ got no game, sad ya wifey a whore… but this man is obsessed,
peep her slutty body language, she screams the names of every other mandarin sex.
but fuck that arab hoe son, don’t even know why dude’ll try bonding,
I mean, she gives explosive head & hopefully on you the bitch trys a suicide bombing.
no effort needed, choke on my fist after I’m done smashin ya teeth in,
Ironic, mag’s got you as a contender BUT haven’t won one of those matches all season.
a fact you’re a geek, kid & your annoyance bombardin the chat, bitch,
not only his presence strikes a nerve, ya neurons protestin bein a part of this faggot.

[ILLunatic]

Oz posted 12 @Shafi

[Greedy]

I advise you to stfu u faggot nerd ass nigga
always talkin that slick fuckboy shit

this whiteboy faggot bitch legion didnt want this work
cornball

foh whiteboy. and keep it moving you fuck nigga.

Ur on ur schoolyard bully steeze..but ill throw jabs at bullet speeds if that shit don't end
So make it seesaws or hit the ground like a skinny kid's big boned friend
He gon get these hands today. I honestly can't stand the way this faggot talks...
The only way I'll let him slide is face first down a fuckin cliff...made of jagged rocks
U the worst in the league. Mid tiers been murking this dweeb without showing remorse
Niggas would only consider Open flames as a viable option for disposing his corpse
Always whining when u lose, ur a queen n it's clear...so I've got no reason to fear
Fuck a closet case, ur the commercial free Extreme Home Makeover season premier
His bouts with weak comp were Rocky iv sure...but now he expects to topple Greed?
Its too bad tho...
Cuz ima Drago worse than Stallone when he avenged Apollo Creed

where this ay-rab nigga shafi at?

feisty little towel head.

like making Muslim jokes ain't the typical, predictable, clown thing to do
You'll call me a terrorist...then do it with a blade when u learn one's pounding ya boo

[Joe Boston]

OZ

O’s game immaculate, I spit G that got hoes lined up for sex & more,
but if this Indian faggot ever tryna pick up line, it’s a career 9 to 5 tech support.
lol good flip humor in the personal because hes indian

dudes fragile, weak & played w/ the flips, his flows are never sick,
so it’s no surprise that his Oz bars’ll date back to when THAT show was relevant.
good flip I felt the concept on the finisher execution could've been displayed much harder though

plus $ got no game, sad ya wifey a whore… but this man is obsessed,
peep her slutty body language, she screams the names of every other mandarin sex.
sort of a reach the wordplay

but fuck that arab hoe son, don’t even know why dude’ll try bonding,
I mean, she gives explosive head & hopefully on you the bitch trys a suicide bombing.
lol nice flip

no effort needed, choke on my fist after I’m done smashin ya teeth in,
Ironic, mag’s got you as a contender BUT haven’t won one of those matches all season.
I felt the setup wasn't relevant to the finisher could've been a better personal if the setup was there

a fact you’re a geek, kid & your annoyance bombardin the chat, bitch,
not only his presence strikes a nerve, ya neurons protestin bein a part of this faggot.
ok decent flip on the finisher

nice opener good humor. explosive head flip was pretty decent also. I felt u had some misses though which could've been executed better.

Shafi

Ur on ur schoolyard bully steeze..but ill throw jabs at bullet speeds if that shit don't end
So make it seesaws or hit the ground like a skinny kid's big boned friend
dope wordplay creative and also a good metaphorical comparison

He gon get these hands today. I honestly can't stand the way this faggot talks...
The only way I'll let him slide is face first down a fuckin cliff...made of jagged rocks
lol good flip

U the worst in the league. Mid tiers been murking this dweeb without showing remorse
Niggas would only consider Open flames as a viable option for disposing his corpse
ok flip

Always whining when u lose, ur a queen n it's clear...so I've got no reason to fear
Fuck a closet case, ur the commercial free Extreme Home Makeover season premier
lmfao

His bouts with weak comp were Rocky iv sure...but now he expects to topple Greed?
Its too bad tho...
Cuz ima Drago worse than Stallone when he avenged Apollo Creed
good attempt slight force on the drago wordplay but overall concept idea was decent

I felt shafi was very consistent with his bars here had a couple personal jabs good flips good wordplay overall creativity.

V/Shafi reason being he was just more consistent like I said creativity every bar was a hit.

[ILLunatic]

2 votes received

[Packed Graves]

Oz had- opener, oz, suicide bombing. Onky thing i can say is dont rely so much on slants you use them often & ruin the flow.


Vs

greedy had- jagged rocks fire, extreme home makeover, drago was nice. Yipou stayed consistent flow was dope as well.

Vote greedy, came off a little harsher & had lotb.

[NiccAteen]

O’s game immaculate, I spit G that got hoes lined up for sex & more,
but if this Indian faggot ever tryna pick up line, it’s a career 9 to 5 tech support.
rhyme is kinda off but like concept
dudes fragile, weak & played w/ the flips, his flows are never sick,
so it’s no surprise that his Oz bars’ll date back to when THAT show was relevant.
again rhymes off its hurting ur punches n concepts which have potential
plus $ got no game, sad ya wifey a whore… but this man is obsessed,
peep her slutty body language, she screams the names of every other mandarin sex.
ncie wp
but fuck that arab hoe son, don’t even know why dude’ll try bonding,
I mean, she gives explosive head & hopefully on you the bitch trys a suicide bombing.
played comment n off on Suicide Bombing Sterotype
no effort needed, choke on my fist after I’m done smashin ya teeth in,
Ironic, mag’s got you as a contender BUT haven’t won one of those matches all season.
good personal
a fact you’re a geek, kid & your annoyance bombardin the chat, bitch,
not only his presence strikes a nerve, ya neurons protestin bein a part of this faggot.
not feeling the closer

Quote Originally Posted by Oz View Post
I advise you to stfu u faggot nerd ass nigga
always talkin that slick fuckboy shit
Quote Originally Posted by Oz View Post
this whiteboy faggot bitch legion didnt want this work
cornball
Quote Originally Posted by Oz View Post
foh whiteboy. and keep it moving you fuck nigga.

Ur on ur schoolyard bully steeze..but ill throw jabs at bullet speeds if that shit don't end
So make it seesaws or hit the ground like a skinny kid's big boned friend
cool concept coulda been worded better
He gon get these hands today. I honestly can't stand the way this faggot talks...
The only way I'll let him slide is face first down a fuckin cliff...made of jagged rocks
like the concept and flip
U the worst in the league. Mid tiers been murking this dweeb without showing remorse
Niggas would only consider Open flames as a viable option for disposing his corpse
This and your closer were weakest of Drop
Always whining when u lose, ur a queen n it's clear...so I've got no reason to fear
Fuck a closet case, ur the commercial free Extreme Home Makeover season premier
Again Creative Concept
His bouts with weak comp were Rocky iv sure...but now he expects to topple Greed?
Its too bad tho...
Cuz ima Drago worse than Stallone when he avenged Apollo Creed
ok bar wordin off
Quote Originally Posted by Oz View Post
where this ay-rab nigga shafi at?
Quote Originally Posted by Oz View Post
feisty little towel head.
like making Muslim jokes ain't the typical, predictable, clown thing to do
You'll call me a terrorist...then do it with a blade when u learn one's pounding ya boo
not feeling closer and boo concept

Vote: OZ , both lacked consistency and weak closers but OZ takes it with personals and wordplay, Shafi had a decent verse too but you had two bars that were the worse of ya verse but concepts and potential is there both yall keep doing ya thing

[Fresh]

O’s game immaculate, I spit G that got hoes lined up for sex & more,
but if this Indian faggot ever tryna pick up line, it’s a career 9 to 5 tech support.
plus $ got no game, sad ya wifey a whore… but this man is obsessed,
peep her slutty body language, she screams the names of every other mandarin sex.
but fuck that arab hoe son, don’t even know why dude’ll try bonding,
I mean, she gives explosive head & hopefully on you the bitch trys a suicide bombing.

vs

Ur on ur schoolyard bully steeze..but ill throw jabs at bullet speeds if that shit don't end
So make it seesaws or hit the ground like a skinny kid's big boned friend
He gon get these hands today. I honestly can't stand the way this faggot talks...
The only way I'll let him slide is face first down a fuckin cliff...made of jagged rocks
U the worst in the league. Mid tiers been murking this dweeb without showing remorse
Niggas would only consider Open flames as a viable option for disposing his corpse
like making Muslim jokes ain't the typical, predictable, clown thing to do
You'll call me a terrorist...then do it with a blade when u learn one's pounding ya boo

Cool battle here. Oz came pretty clean, but Shafi just out punched him here. I have quotes 4-3 in favor of shafi, and I almost quoted apollo creed but the way it was worded hindered impact imo. O Pen flames was LOTB for me as well, so I have shafi taking this fairly comfortably.

v/Shaf

[Barcotic]

opener, body language, closer was ok

vs

seesaws lotb, let him slide, closet case


didn't like the 'O' nameplays at all n terrorist is mad played, but I still feel shafi was just a little bit cleaner w the hits here. cool batt

v/shafi

[Aero]

Oz:

O’s game immaculate, I spit G that got hoes lined up for sex & more,
but if this Indian faggot ever tryna pick up line, it’s a career 9 to 5 tech support.
coolish, I get it bc of the commercial, had I not seen the commercial this would be nothing
dudes fragile, weak & played w/ the flips, his flows are never sick,
so it’s no surprise that his Oz bars’ll date back to when THAT show was relevant.
aight cool
plus $ got no game, sad ya wifey a whore… but this man is obsessed,
peep her slutty body language, she screams the names of every other mandarin sex.
this needed a better connection to really have the impact the wp provides
but fuck that arab hoe son, don’t even know why dude’ll try bonding,
I mean, she gives explosive head & hopefully on you the bitch trys a suicide bombing.
lol no...
no effort needed, choke on my fist after I’m done smashin ya teeth in,
Ironic, mag’s got you as a contender BUT haven’t won one of those matches all season.
eh, cool cool
a fact you’re a geek, kid & your annoyance bombardin the chat, bitch,
not only his presence strikes a nerve, ya neurons protestin bein a part of this faggot.
I get the angle you were going for but this didn't do it

started off cool, then kinda stumbled through parts




Shafi:


Ur on ur schoolyard bully steeze..but ill throw jabs at bullet speeds if that shit don't end
So make it seesaws or hit the ground like a skinny kid's big boned friend
forced wp
He gon get these hands today. I honestly can't stand the way this faggot talks...
The only way I'll let him slide is face first down a fuckin cliff...made of jagged rocks
hands today stand the way, liked that... the pause that led to jagged rocks wasn't needed because that wasn't the surprise moment, the surprise moment was the down a cliff
U the worst in the league. Mid tiers been murking this dweeb without showing remorse
Niggas would only consider Open flames as a viable option for disposing his corpse
lol @ without showing remorse... O pen flames... this was a hot line no pun intended
Always whining when u lose, ur a queen n it's clear...so I've got no reason to fear
Fuck a closet case, ur the commercial free Extreme Home Makeover season premier
firstly its suspect that you even know of a show like that.. and 2ndly it was just too wordy
His bouts with weak comp were Rocky iv sure...but now he expects to topple Greed?
Its too bad tho...
Cuz ima Drago worse than Stallone when he avenged Apollo Creed
eh coolish
you like making Muslim jokes ain't the typical, predictable, clown thing to do
You'll call me a terrorist...then do it with a blade when u learn one's pounding ya boo
wp is played but its relelvant for who you are and the quote


started off wack, I thought that was going to be the end of you but then you came with some stuff



This was a really close battle I have Obnoxious winning by a very tiny margin and its because his misses weren't as bad and Shafi did too much with the name play on O and Oz

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7 votes received