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Last edited by Donald Trump; April 5th, 2015 at 04:00 PM
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this is a Porsche vs a Pinto.. this queers steady trash
my bars will destroy Cayenne ruin his future w/ out sports cars in a deadly crash
Cai no shows and is booted. + is a faggot.
Set up was nice for the punch here but the nameplay/concept was soft for me. It deff would have KO'd cai if he showed no doubt but nothing crazy here
tough battle here but coup had a nice punch there, cài didn't really have muh doing for him but his wording was nice
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I thought your bar was light....
this is a Porsche vs a Pinto.. this queers steady trash
my bars will destroy Cayenne ruin his future w/ out sports cars in a deadly crash
-nice wordplay the set up was relevant but wasn't that crisp but overall u had a good bar here, It couldve had more of a impact if u worded it to seem more harsh too.
The setup was nice and I also did like the nameplay reference I did feel u could've done a little more with the Cayenne concept to make it have more impact
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I personally don't like the setup bar much
It's decent enough to help the diss impact, but not "solid"
The punch itself relies too heavily on the nameplay/wordplay concept
Rather than the conveyance of it. Like stated, it's light, BUT effectual in ways... Decent
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Eh, kinda forced feeling maybe it was the wording, could have been smoother IMO
I liked the wordplay. I've seen cayenne done tho. Overall the impact was hindered due to sloppy wording. Nice bar tho. Shows potential
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Cool bar, I have seen that wp executed different but overall cool np n effective punch imo
So you sayin cai is the Porsche and your the pinto lol insulting yourself here I think you have a decent concept but the overall bar lacked any impact and wasn't attacking cai really, ep was a good attempt tho smh @ ns props for showing coup