Contenders Match: Week 10: Useless 6-2 vs. Onslaught 3-0 - USELESS WINS

[A. Diction]

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[Wuxia]

Check.

[A. Diction]

Pics?

If not 14.

[Wuxia]

I went 14. Will drop soon.

[A. Diction]

Onslot agreed to ext thru pm.

[A. Diction]

Onslaught's Verse:

its best to jet quick, when u turn around ur facing a shooter
this barrel role is to deliver shots at ur back and thwart ur evasive maneuver
ur girl told me the naked truth, her bitterness heavily shows
she said u look wild grisly bare and hopes u get mangled by several of those
my wardrobe's dapper, ur badly dressed and basically poor
when u go to clothing optional parties, u always get turned away at the door
plus u got that country boi swagger but ur just another upset
if girls want ur southern comfort, its cuz they aren't drunk enough to fuck yet
lets talk about ur week 7 loss, its obvious muff was venom
cuz he smacked u with callous disregard until his palms were covered in em'
you pathetic nutjob, u slipping hard and ur riders can vouch
when all that mod love shrinks, u aint ever getting off ur psychiatrists couch
u pull ugly predator broads, on dates they're anxious as fuck
if you see them check their wrist, they're inputting the codes to self-destruct


Vs.


Useless Verse:

I'll sneak in his house n trash the pc to make this fag stop...
Imma smash slot machine...for txt and rb, that'll be the jack pot.
girls stay using him, I better not see you with a fine thing...
if Slaughter best friend, Imma leave the pussy lookn like a crime scene.
named urself a marvel villain, I had to research and peep...
I was reading his super powers, n realized ur super power's puttin readers to sleep.
he ain't gettin girls that're outta this world, y'all can forget it...
but if ya bitch is Meteor thick, my click 'll smash u in the ground to hit it.
to be honest you're not hot, so will u PLEASE just stop queer...
ironic ur name is slot...cuz there'll always be a gap between u n the top tier.
tryna make a come back in txt, but he had to leave the lime...
it'd be better if you'd acquitted, cuz him champin' any league would be a crime.
funny that balnco barely tried and still gave u trouble, cheater...
Ironic: the only way u could win against bee, was with a Buzzer beater.

[Mindscribe]

Yo that verse was dope onslaught.
Pretty damn vicious n funny
Useless dope drop as well
Hm close battle
Slaught was funnier n flowed better
.
funnier
Use was more complex

onslaught just brought them clever bars n alot of em were gutshots

Vote onslaught

Idk if im allowed to vote or not but w.e.

[Meth]

Onslaught's Verse:

its best to jet quick, when u turn around ur facing a shooter
this barrel role is to deliver shots at ur back and thwart ur evasive maneuver
--ok/solid
ur girl told me the naked truth, her bitterness heavily shows
she said u look wild grisly bare and hopes u get mangled by several of those
--good.
my wardrobe's dapper, ur badly dressed and basically poor
when u go to clothing optional parties, u always get turned away at the door
--meh
plus u got that country boi swagger but ur just another upset
if girls want ur southern comfort, its cuz they aren't drunk enough to fuck yet
--good concept, wish you would have worded it so it was harsher.
lets talk about ur week 7 loss, its obvious muff was venom
cuz he smacked u with callous disregard until his palms were covered in em'
--lol... cool
you pathetic nutjob, u slipping hard and ur riders can vouch
when all that mod love shrinks, u aint ever getting off ur psychiatrists couch
--not feeling this
u pull ugly predator broads, on dates they're anxious as fuck
if you see them check their wrist, they're inputting the codes to self-destruct
--should have connected the concept to itself a bit better, but this is good regardless.

good verse


Vs.


Useless Verse:

I'll sneak in his house n trash the pc to make this fag stop...
Imma smash slot machine...for txt and rb, that'll be the jack pot.
--wording was weird, good wp/concept, ok bar
girls stay using him, I better not see you with a fine thing...
if Slaughter best friend, Imma leave the pussy lookn like a crime scene.
--lmaooo. dope.
named urself a marvel villain, I had to research and peep...
I was reading his super powers, n realized ur super power's puttin readers to sleep.
--good
he ain't gettin girls that're outta this world, y'all can forget it...
but if ya bitch is Meteor thick, my click 'll smash u in the ground to hit it.
--damn. use going in.
to be honest you're not hot, so will u PLEASE just stop queer...
ironic ur name is slot...cuz there'll always be a gap between u n the top tier.
--ok/solid
tryna make a come back in txt, but he had to leave the lime...
it'd be better if you'd acquitted, cuz him champin' any league would be a crime.
--nice.
funny that balnco barely tried and still gave u trouble, cheater...
Ironic: the only way u could win against bee, was with a Buzzer beater.
--corny and dissapointing finish to a hot verse

yo this battle was hot, dope shit.

quote wise i got 4-3 in use's favor.

even the ones i didnt quote were pretty solid except the closer for use

onslaught was the same except the phsycatric bar wasnt feeling that

good battle guys

v/ useless

[Aero]

On:

its best to jet quick, when u turn around ur facing a shooter
this barrel role is to deliver shots at ur back and thwart ur evasive maneuver
nice
ur girl told me the naked truth, her bitterness heavily shows
she said u look wild grisly bare and hopes u get mangled by several of those
I immediately look at it as wild grisly bear so this loses impact
my wardrobe's dapper, ur badly dressed and basically poor
when u go to clothing optional parties, u always get turned away at the door
no
plus u got that country boi swagger but ur just another upset
if girls want ur southern comfort, its cuz they aren't drunk enough to fuck yet
ok
lets talk about ur week 7 loss, its obvious muff was venom
cuz he smacked u with callous disregard until his palms were covered in em'
ha ok
you pathetic nutjob, u slipping hard and ur riders can vouch
when all that mod love shrinks, u aint ever getting off ur psychiatrists couch
cool concept but wording could be cleaner
u pull ugly predator broads, on dates they're anxious as fuck
if you see them check their wrist, they're inputting the codes to self-destruct
ok

your bars are cool but they're not worded to be very effective. need to be meaner or funnier but good job


U:

I'll sneak in his house n trash the pc to make this fag stop...
Imma smash slot machine...for txt and rb, that'll be the jack pot.
nicely put
girls stay using him, I better not see you with a fine thing...
if Slaughter best friend, Imma leave the pussy lookn like a crime scene.
ha aight
named urself a marvel villain, I had to research and peep...
I was reading his super powers, n realized ur super power's puttin readers to sleep.
thought this was going to be hard but it was light
he ain't gettin girls that're outta this world, y'all can forget it...
but if ya bitch is Meteor thick, my click 'll smash u in the ground to hit it.
I like the wp but punch was ok
to be honest you're not hot, so will u PLEASE just stop queer...
ironic ur name is slot...cuz there'll always be a gap between u n the top tier.
niiice
tryna make a come back in txt, but he had to leave the lime...
it'd be better if you'd acquitted, cuz him champin' any league would be a crime.
ok
funny that balnco barely tried and still gave u trouble, cheater...
Ironic: the only way u could win against bee, was with a Buzzer beater.
cute but that's it

good use of np in here and it didn't feel over done



decent battle but Use wins

[Ryno]

Grisly,callous, southern comfort

Vs

Opener, slaughter, meteor, top tier, acquitted

V/ Useless... Dude was pretty fuckin consistent this time around. No knock on Onslaught though as his verse was decent but he got out punched this time around.

[Smog]

Onslaught's Verse:

its best to jet quick, when u turn around ur facing a shooter
this barrel role is to deliver shots at ur back and thwart ur evasive maneuver

This was pretty dsmn good..

ur girl told me the naked truth, her bitterness heavily shows
she said u look wild grisly bare and hopes u get mangled by several of those

I like this too..

my wardrobe's dapper, ur badly dressed and basically poor
when u go to clothing optional parties, u always get turned away at the door

Ehh, light

plus u got that country boi swagger but ur just another upset
if girls want ur southern comfort, its cuz they aren't drunk enough to fuck yet

This is played, seen it flipped the same

lets talk about ur week 7 loss, its obvious muff was venom
cuz he smacked u with callous disregard until his palms were covered in em'

This was fresh.. I liked this

you pathetic nutjob, u slipping hard and ur riders can vouch
when all that mod love shrinks, u aint ever getting off ur psychiatrists couch

This was nice too

u pull ugly predator broads, on dates they're anxious as fuck
if you see them check their wrist, they're inputting the codes to self-destruct
Iight


Vs.


Useless Verse:

I'll sneak in his house n trash the pc to make this fag stop...
Imma smash slot machine...for txt and rb, that'll be the jack pot.

Seen the slot/ jackpot done on him in 1-2 already but i like what u did especially with the set up


girls stay using him, I better not see you with a fine thing...
if Slaughter best friend, Imma leave the pussy lookn like a crime scene.
Cool np

named urself a marvel villain, I had to research and peep...
I was reading his super powers, n realized ur super power's puttin readers to sleep.
Ooooook

he ain't gettin girls that're outta this world, y'all can forget it...
but if ya bitch is Meteor thick, my click 'll smash u in the ground to hit it.
I liked this

to be honest you're not hot, so will u PLEASE just stop queer...
ironic ur name is slot...cuz there'll always be a gap between u n the top tier.
This was nice too

tryna make a come back in txt, but he had to leave the lime...
it'd be better if you'd acquitted, cuz him champin' any league would be a crime.
Dope wp blended in smooth

funny that balnco barely tried and still gave u trouble, cheater...
Ironic: the only way u could win against bee, was with a Buzzer beater.
Ok

Damn this was a nice bout imo, thought slot had some heat n some jabs in there too but felt useless had a lil more heat or more harder punches n less jabs but honestly this is pretty close but I got less edging it out.. Botw tho imo.. Good read fellas



Vote useless

[Attack of the Muff]

its best to jet quick, when u turn around ur facing a shooter
this barrel role is to deliver shots at ur back and thwart ur evasive maneuver
(I like this )
ur girl told me the naked truth, her bitterness heavily shows
she said u look wild grisly bare and hopes u get mangled by several of those
(ehh not feeling the first interpretation of the wp. it works but the first angle of it just doesn't sound good to me. u look wild grisly bare lol)
my wardrobe's dapper, ur badly dressed and basically poor
when u go to clothing optional parties, u always get turned away at the door
(I like )
plus u got that country boi swagger but ur just another upset
if girls want ur southern comfort, its cuz they aren't drunk enough to fuck yet
(looool)
lets talk about ur week 7 loss, its obvious muff was venom
cuz he smacked u with callous disregard until his palms were covered in em'
(nice)
you pathetic nutjob, u slipping hard and ur riders can vouch
when all that mod love shrinks, u aint ever getting off ur psychiatrists couch
(ok)
u pull ugly predator broads, on dates they're anxious as fuck
if you see them check their wrist, they're inputting the codes to self-destruct
(ehhhhhhhhhhh I get it but the whole idea of chicks inputting codes to self destruct is eh. I get the movie angle tho0

I'll sneak in his house n trash the pc to make this fag stop...
Imma smash slot machine...for txt and rb, that'll be the jack pot.
(first read I thought this was bad but I like this reading it again. lol @ for text n rb ...That'll be the jack pot. lmao)
girls stay using him, I better not see you with a fine thing...
if Slaughter best friend, Imma leave the pussy lookn like a crime scene.
(simple but I like)
named urself a marvel villain, I had to research and peep...
I was reading his super powers, n realized ur super power's puttin readers to sleep.
(ok)
he ain't gettin girls that're outta this world, y'all can forget it...
but if ya bitch is Meteor thick, my click 'll smash u in the ground to hit it.
(love the wp. tie ins could have been way better. specially the end . coo ltho)
to be honest you're not hot, so will u PLEASE just stop queer...
ironic ur name is slot...cuz there'll always be a gap between u n the top tier.
(FUCK)
tryna make a come back in txt, but he had to leave the lime...
it'd be better if you'd acquitted, cuz him champin' any league would be a crime.
(this was nice too)
funny that balnco barely tried and still gave u trouble, cheater...
Ironic: the only way u could win against bee, was with a Buzzer beater.
(aww naw I don't like what u did w/ this)

man lol cool battle. I got this 4 to 5 in quotes. I think onslaught did very well but just got slightly outbarred here. by 1 quote. more than likely botw here btw

gs u two. realtalk

v/useless

[Junto]

voting...


its best to jet quick, when u turn around ur facing a shooter
this barrel role is to deliver shots at ur back and thwart ur evasive maneuver
this is heat
ur girl told me the naked truth, her bitterness heavily shows
she said u look wild grisly bare and hopes u get mangled by several of those
haha solid
my wardrobe's dapper, ur badly dressed and basically poor
when u go to clothing optional parties, u always get turned away at the door
ehhh too simple to me
plus u got that country boi swagger but ur just another upset
if girls want ur southern comfort, its cuz they aren't drunk enough to fuck yet
played...
lets talk about ur week 7 loss, its obvious muff was venom
cuz he smacked u with callous disregard until his palms were covered in em'
seen this concept before too
you pathetic nutjob, u slipping hard and ur riders can vouch
when all that mod love shrinks, u aint ever getting off ur psychiatrists couch
cool idea, doesn't hit too good the way you worded it
u pull ugly predator broads, on dates they're anxious as fuck
if you see them check their wrist, they're inputting the codes to self-destruct
creative... okay

vs.

I'll sneak in his house n trash the pc to make this fag stop...
Imma smash slot machine...for txt and rb, that'll be the jack pot.
haha I like that
girls stay using him, I better not see you with a fine thing...
if Slaughter best friend, Imma leave the pussy lookn like a crime scene.
not bad
named urself a marvel villain, I had to research and peep...
I was reading his super powers, n realized ur super power's puttin readers to sleep.
light
he ain't gettin girls that're outta this world, y'all can forget it...
but if ya bitch is Meteor thick, my click 'll smash u in the ground to hit it.
lol @ meteor thick. this was cool
to be honest you're not hot, so will u PLEASE just stop queer...
ironic ur name is slot...cuz there'll always be a gap between u n the top tier.
yea this is pretty tough
tryna make a come back in txt, but he had to leave the lime...
it'd be better if you'd acquitted, cuz him champin' any league would be a crime.
simple but decent hit still
funny that balnco barely tried and still gave u trouble, cheater...
Ironic: the only way u could win against bee, was with a Buzzer beater.
ehhhh

Damn this was closer than votes show to me...
Onslaught came out real strong wit the first 2 bars. Barrel role was G shit, LOTB
The ones some people like actually brought the verse down for me though
I did that Southern comfort line similarly years back, too old... & same wit callous
The last bars weren't bad but nothin up to the level as barrel role & grisly after them
useless was more consistent throughout. Superpowers & buzzer beater were on the weak side
But the rest was solid or better - Jackpot was nice, top tier was mean, acquitted & slaughter...
Wit one or two subs onslaught woulda taken this but I got useless on consistency, good read here

V/ Useless

[A. Diction]

I posted the wrong closer lol.


Good shit @Onslaught that verse was dope