Week 16: Useless 9-4 vs. Galactic 5-2 - USE WINS

[A. Diction]

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@Galactic

[Tic]

Sup? 14ish?

[A. Diction]

Yea...

[Tic]

Went 12 @useless

You’ve had big battles that could’ve made ya career but couldn’t hit
Dog. That’s a Drop Off even the most established drug dealers wouldn’t risk
You'll NEVER champ, but that’s the focus, ain’t it?
When your career has more Heir blockage than Cystic Fibrosis patients
Concepts & wording don’t work together, read any verse this guy has dropped
They turn their back to each other….that explains why you never had a Tidal Locked
You got a big mouth til I Rock ya dome & shit ooze from ya skull
Keep talkin & I’ll Pomegranate piece that’ll smash this fuckin fruit to a pulp
Ya girl is through, she’s really doubtin ya scheme
Cuz Meander been getting it on while you scream for help & drown in a stream
With the knife? I'll Slit ya wrists First w/ nothin less than precision
Then I'm thinkin "Jugular or Corratid next..." That's a Split Second Decision

[A. Diction]

aka dark matter

the nose grows with age, his been big since crack babe...
when dark ages, it'll have killed more unsuspecting ppl than the black plague.
allll of dark's lines are weak, its not smart writing b...
u dont compare incisor strength, sooo ur best bet is to start biting me.
his wife cheats, a lot. every night he walks in on sex...
but if he per suicide girl, the note would explain he literally talked her to death.
Imma killer, u know its over soon as u see the shotty...
After I put u on the flouride snatch ya teeth out to ensure they can't ID the body.
ur bars suck. if u battle suicide, I'm rooting for ur opponent...
for ur next projectile suggest u write a verse, then blow ur brains out on it.
if I'm seeing red, D is dead. I'm about my business...
I'll roll up on dark spots, and spray till nothing but blood clouds his vision.

[Lenox]

dark

1. liked the concept, cool
2. another good concept
3. tidal i didn't like even tho the wordplay was light
4. kinda corny
5. no
6. split decision was cool

vs

useless

1. lol nice
2. biting was okay
3. lotb
4. this was dope
5. execution was bland
6. potential, but lack of execution

vote: use......... this was a pretty dope battle i must say.. however dark kinda fell off towards the end, plus his punches weren't as strong use punches.. use had like 2 makers, 2 cool ones and one decent.. his misses weren't terrible.. thats why i got him winning.. good shit bros.

[Wuxia]

Went 12 @useless

You’ve had big battles that could’ve made ya career but couldn’t hit
Dog. That’s a Drop Off even the most established drug dealers wouldn’t risk

☆☆☆☆☆ (nice opener)

You'll NEVER champ, but that’s the focus, ain’t it?
When your career has more Heir blockage than Cystic Fibrosis patients

☆☆ (the backbone of this bar was the air/heir wp and that is an incredibly played pun, without it the bar falls apart, I gave you credit for the personal and creativity tho)

Concepts & wording don’t work together, read any verse this guy has dropped
They turn their back to each other….that explains why you never had a Tidal Locked

☆ (back to back cliched wp's, without it the bar has no legs)

You got a big mouth til I Rock ya dome & shit ooze from ya skull
Keep talkin & I’ll Pomegranate piece that’ll smash this fuckin fruit to a pulp

☆☆☆☆☆ (I've seen this wp done before but I loved the flip)

Ya girl is through, she’s really doubtin ya scheme
Cuz Meander been getting it on while you scream for help & drown in a stream

☆☆☆☆☆ (dope wp and set up/executed properly)

With the knife? I'll Slit ya wrists First w/ nothin less than precision
Then I'm thinkin "Jugular or Corratid next..." That's a Split Second Decision

☆☆☆☆☆ (I enjoyed the cleverly statementish feel of this bar and how you pulled it off

aka dark matter

the nose grows with age, his been big since crack babe...
when dark ages, it'll have killed more unsuspecting ppl than the black plague.

☆☆☆ (dope, only thing I wasn't feeling was the "big since crack babe" set up, lol)

allll of dark's lines are weak, its not smart writing b...
u dont compare incisor strength, sooo ur best bet is to start biting me.

☆☆☆☆☆ (excellent wp and overall bar)

his wife cheats, a lot. every night he walks in on sex...
but if he per suicide girl, the note would explain he literally talked her to death.

☆☆☆☆☆ (another inventive bar)

Imma killer, u know its over soon as u see the shotty...
After I put u on the flouride snatch ya teeth out to ensure they can't ID the body.

☆☆☆☆☆ (fire)

ur bars suck. if u battle suicide, I'm rooting for ur opponent...
for ur next projectile suggest u write a verse, then blow ur brains out on it.

☆☆☆ (loved the wp, great bar, second reference to suicide in the verse hurt the rating)

if I'm seeing red, D is dead. I'm about my business...
I'll roll up on dark spots, and spray till nothing but blood clouds his vision.

☆☆☆☆☆ (this was constructed very well)

Both had the same amount of 5 ☆ bars. I think it was 4 a pc. Made for a dope battle. Useless had stronger misses while Glactic slipped up with a cpl used wp's.

v-Useless

[Notti]

You’ve had big battles that could’ve made ya career but couldn’t hit
Dog. That’s a Drop Off even the most established drug dealers wouldn’t risk
You got a big mouth til I Rock ya dome & shit ooze from ya skull
Keep talkin & I’ll Pomegranate piece that’ll smash this fuckin fruit to a pulp
Ya girl is through, she’s really doubtin ya scheme
Cuz Meander been getting it on while you scream for help & drown in a stream

vs

allll of dark's lines are weak, its not smart writing b...
u dont compare incisor strength, sooo ur best bet is to start biting me.
his wife cheats, a lot. every night he walks in on sex...
but if he per suicide girl, the note would explain he literally talked her to death.
Imma killer, u know its over soon as u see the shotty...
After I put u on the flouride snatch ya teeth out to ensure they can't ID the body.
if I'm seeing red, D is dead. I'm about my business...
I'll roll up on dark spots, and spray till nothing but blood clouds his vision.

Overall: Wow dope fuckin battle, not rlly any misses in this battle. Both artists came hard but i felt Useless had 1 more quotable. I felt the pomegrante wp was LOTB, but i gotta go wit useless more 1 more quotbale and harder hitting punches overall.

v. Useless. Dope ass battle

[Ryno]

Drop off, pomegranate

Vs

Black plague, incisor, fluoride, closer

V/useless. He takes it with consistency

[Attack of the Muff]

You’ve had big battles that could’ve made ya career but couldn’t hit
Dog. That’s a Drop Off even the most established drug dealers wouldn’t risk
(lol ok orc. this was cool tho but swagger jacking obv. still like it)
You'll NEVER champ, but that’s the focus, ain’t it?
When your career has more Heir blockage than Cystic Fibrosis patients
(eh I get it but I don't like the phrase heir blockage in reference to him failing to champ)
Concepts & wording don’t work together, read any verse this guy has dropped
They turn their back to each other….that explains why you never had a Tidal Locked
(don't like thiss)
You got a big mouth til I Rock ya dome & shit ooze from ya skull
Keep talkin & I’ll Pomegranate piece that’ll smash this fuckin fruit to a pulp
(fire flip)
Ya girl is through, she’s really doubtin ya scheme
Cuz Meander been getting it on while you scream for help & drown in a stream
(fire)
With the knife? I'll Slit ya wrists First w/ nothin less than precision
Then I'm thinkin "Jugular or Corratid next..." That's a Split Second Decision
(clever)

the nose grows with age, his been big since crack babe...
when dark ages, it'll have killed more unsuspecting ppl than the black plague.
(gone. at first I was like what do u mean kill but this is supposed to be a humorous bar. I get it. took me 2 reads. )
allll of dark's lines are weak, its not smart writing b...
u dont compare incisor strength, sooo ur best bet is to start biting me.
(nice)
his wife cheats, a lot. every night he walks in on sex...
but if he per suicide girl, the note would explain he literally talked her to death.
(dope. pursue a side girl.)
Imma killer, u know its over soon as u see the shotty...
After I put u on the flouride snatch ya teeth out to ensure they can't ID the body.
(ungh)
ur bars suck. if u battle suicide, I'm rooting for ur opponent...
for ur next projectile suggest u write a verse, then blow ur brains out on it.
(didn't someone use a projectile line this week? lol iono but this is heavily familiar in my head right now. )
if I'm seeing red, D is dead. I'm about my business...
I'll roll up on dark spots, and spray till nothing but blood clouds his vision.
(this is ok)

lol nice battle. tied In quotes. lookin at my breakdown ima give ot use tho coz he had only 1 significant miss. gal had two I think so yea

v/use

[Enbombz]

Strong showing here guys

Galactic opened with two nice bars and closed in the same fashion, all those bars we some good shit man. didn't like tidal lock but pomegranate was okay to.
use - suicide girl was dope, flouride was good too, also thought ur projectile was okay (not as gd as mine) biting me n blood clots were nice bars too

looking back you were both pretty consistent here, i read gals verse and thought he's took this but then i read use's and was surprised tbh probably his best ive seen him drop. I thought use landed with every bar really where as gal had one iffy one. This could go either way but i got it 3-2 to use on my favorite bars here.

vote use