FRONTLINES PRESENTS:
CONTENDERS MATCH
@Killing Spree
vs
@dia
House Rules
Check-in by Wednesdsay 11:59pm EST
Verses due by Friday 11:59pm EST
One 12 hr extensions available upon request
10 lines min.
14 lines max.
good luck!!
Dia
Killing Spree
FRONTLINES PRESENTS:
CONTENDERS MATCH
@Killing Spree
vs
@dia
House Rules
Check-in by Wednesdsay 11:59pm EST
Verses due by Friday 11:59pm EST
One 12 hr extensions available upon request
10 lines min.
14 lines max.
good luck!!
let me hit you on memory lane, you trying to make a claim for the title is odd fosure.
because you couldn't orchestrate a killing spree, when you bit bars from god of war.
you're pussy and that's fact, trying to lecture niggas, when you never been class act.
how u school anyone? Boston's strong back track, if they spot a suspicious back pack.
you're a former champ, and that's hideous, RB needs to be exiled from the riff raff.
not ya comfort zone when slowhands punched you, you're used to being bitch slapped.
don't mean to pri-son, when I'm digging into your history, you're getting murdered.
cuz I UNCOVERED more foul shit, than the hackers that pen-tested on clinton's server.
your past depressing as fuck, and I aint even got into the fact you're a cock sucker.
suicidal, after delving into personals, never been so intrigued to pull out the box cutter.
dont belong in a contenders match, wouldnt drop heat if u was clumsy w/ a stove burner.
I don't have killer's remorse, wtf would I feel bad for bodying knowp's co-worker?
killing spree's usually end in a suicide, same conclusion as the columbine attack.
put me against KS, because u dont have to overcome an obstacle to qualify fa shack.
@Killing Spree due tonight
Originally Posted by Dia
listen...
This a murder scene! honestly my shotty be sendin ya head ta the bleachers
You'll be victim in the first 48 <--& it only took that long to see your feminine features
this guy is all bitch, this devil proves ya rhymin's all shit
people sayin he evil with bodies, that's coz Dia Ball Licks
For the record? ya girl topped me off & showed no likes a Dude
No question I Loggerhead!..After I nut, she goes home to fight W/you
Foolish fuck, I'll sink your advantage let'n the tooly's buck
Anything from you plays Into hands? its homie holding you from drowning in a pool of blood
Ya slitherin ways proof of failure. Spree KO's reason you fall D
Cos these magic bars shakin you's the only way Dia gone Ali
KNOW jockin you fuels my thirst for killin. I'll slaughter clown W/Facts
P, D A Light! stop praising him & realize Kid is watered Down & Wack
clown'll choke, Punches'll have sylivia come out ya nose
No such validation that Digest Fist's, Unless its my knucks going down his throat
Dia
let me hit you on memory lane, you trying to make a claim for the title is odd fosure.
because you couldn't orchestrate a killing spree, when you bit bars from god of war.
- lol
you're pussy and that's fact, trying to lecture niggas, when you never been class act.
how u school anyone? Boston's strong back track, if they spot a suspicious back pack.
- meh
you're a former champ, and that's hideous, RB needs to be exiled from the riff raff.
not ya comfort zone when slowhands punched you, you're used to being bitch slapped.
- ok
don't mean to pri-son, when I'm digging into your history, you're getting murdered.
cuz I UNCOVERED more foul shit, than the hackers that pen-tested on clinton's server.
- lol
your past depressing as fuck, and I aint even got into the fact you're a cock sucker.
suicidal, after delving into personals, never been so intrigued to pull out the box cutter.
- decent
dont belong in a contenders match, wouldnt drop heat if u was clumsy w/ a stove burner.
I don't have killer's remorse, wtf would I feel bad for bodying knowp's co-worker?
- meh
killing spree's usually end in a suicide, same conclusion as the columbine attack.
put me against KS, because u dont have to overcome an obstacle to qualify fa shack.
- meh
Good start, loved the humor hits. Felt like your bottom lines fell off from consistency from the nice hits before them. Great read
Killing Spree
listen...
This a murder scene! honestly my shotty be sendin ya head ta the bleachers
You'll be victim in the first 48 <--& it only took that long to see your feminine features
- ok, had potential
this guy is all bitch, this devil proves ya rhymin's all shit
people sayin he evil with bodies, that's coz Dia Ball Licks
- meh
For the record? ya girl topped me off & showed no likes a Dude
No question I Loggerhead!..After I nut, she goes home to fight W/you
- lol ish
Foolish fuck, I'll sink your advantage let'n the tooly's buck
Anything from you plays Into hands? its homie holding you from drowning in a pool of blood
- meh
Ya slitherin ways proof of failure. Spree KO's reason you fall D
Cos these magic bars shakin you's the only way Dia gone Ali
- ok
KNOW jockin you fuels my thirst for killin. I'll slaughter clown W/Facts
P, D A Light! stop praising him & realize Kid is watered Down & Wack
- meh
clown'll choke, Punches'll have sylivia come out ya nose
No such validation that Digest Fist's, Unless its my knucks going down his throat
- ok ish
Like the way you right, lot of content in short bars and good rhyme scheme. You had good hits and you had some misses due to wording or just placement of the play wasnt the best. Still good read
Overall, this had potntial to be dope battle. Dia had some hard hits on some humor lines set up constructally sound. Felt like he hard some hard hits and then his misses werent off by much. Killing Spree had good written verse with set ups and a couple good hits, but felt his misses were easily bigger than his opponent. I got Dia winning this with a few more bars than Killing Spree so vote gies to Dia for better execution. Good read to both
let me hit you on memory lane, you trying to make a claim for the title is odd fosure.
because you couldn't orchestrate a killing spree, when you bit bars from god of war.
>> GOT 'EM!!! Nice opener w/ a solid personal.. 0.50
you're pussy and that's fact, trying to lecture niggas, when you never been class act.
how u school anyone? Boston's strong back track, if they spot a suspicious back pack.
>>LOL!..0.50
you're a former champ, and that's hideous, RB needs to be exiled from the riff raff.
not ya comfort zone when slowhands punched you, you're used to being bitch slapped.
>> Nice punch / personal bro!..0.50
don't mean to pri-son, when I'm digging into your history, you're getting murdered.
cuz I UNCOVERED more foul shit, than the hackers that pen-tested on clinton's server.
>>Okay...0.25
your past depressing as fuck, and I aint even got into the fact you're a cock sucker.
suicidal, after delving into personals, never been so intrigued to pull out the box cutter.
>>OUCH! Lol...0.50
dont belong in a contenders match, wouldnt drop heat if u was clumsy w/ a stove burner.
I don't have killer's remorse, wtf would I feel bad for bodying knowp's co-worker?
>>Shots fuckin fiiiired!!!!! LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL #iMDead!...0.75
killing spree's usually end in a suicide, same conclusion as the columbine attack.
put me against KS, because u dont have to overcome an obstacle to qualify fa shack.
>>Okay finish..025
Total: 3.25
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This a murder scene! honestly my shotty be sendin ya head ta the bleachers
You'll be victim in the first 48 <--& it only took that long to see your feminine features
>>Niice opener (thanks for quote so we got it, lol)...0.50
this guy is all bitch, this devil proves ya rhymin's all shit
people sayin he evil with bodies, that's coz Dia Ball Licks
>>Ah fuck Lmfao / nice nameplay...0.50
For the record? ya girl topped me off & showed no likes a Dude
No question I Loggerhead!..After I nut, she goes home to fight W/you
>>not feelin' it...0.0
Foolish fuck, I'll sink your advantage let'n the tooly's buck
Anything from you plays Into hands? its homie holding you from drowning in a pool of blood
>>Okay...0.25
Ya slitherin ways proof of failure. Spree KO's reason you fall D
Cos these magic bars shakin you's the only way Dia gone Ali
>>Ali bars kinda played, but it was okay..0.25
KNOW jockin you fuels my thirst for killin. I'll slaughter clown W/Facts
P, D A Light! stop praising him & realize Kid is watered Down & Wack
>>Dope nameplay right here bro!...0.75
clown'll choke, Punches'll have sylivia come out ya nose
No such validation that Digest Fist's, Unless its my knucks going down his throat
>>Okay close...0.25
Total: 2.50
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MY VOTE: Dia (I felt he was more consistent and had stronger personals and more haymakers! - Def a good battle yall!!)
let me hit you on memory lane, you trying to make a claim for the title is odd fosure.
because you couldn't orchestrate a killing spree, when you bit bars from god of war.
1/3
Miss. unoriginal opener
you're pussy and that's fact, trying to lecture niggas, when you never been class act.
how u school anyone? Boston's strong back track, if they spot a suspicious back pack.
1/3
Another miss
you're a former champ, and that's hideous, RB needs to be exiled from the riff raff.
not ya comfort zone when slowhands punched you, you're used to being bitch slapped.
1.5/3
Light jab
don't mean to pri-son, when I'm digging into your history, you're getting murdered.
cuz I UNCOVERED more foul shit, than the hackers that pen-tested on clinton's server.
1.5/3
Barely a light jab. concept is old now and you didn't do much to revamp it
your past depressing as fuck, and I aint even got into the fact you're a cock sucker.
suicidal, after delving into personals, never been so intrigued to pull out the box cutter.
1/3
Another miss right here
dont belong in a contenders match, wouldnt drop heat if u was clumsy w/ a stove burner.
I don't have killer's remorse, wtf would I feel bad for bodying knowp's co-worker?
1.5/3
Light jab, I GUESS. the set up was out of place, and honestly woulda been better than a few of the other punchlines you used...
Regardless. this is way too wordy. cut down on the words
killing spree's usually end in a suicide, same conclusion as the columbine attack.
put me against KS, because u dont have to overcome an obstacle to qualify fa shack.
1/3
Bad closer. it's a miss
vs
listen...
This a murder scene! honestly my shotty be sendin ya head ta the bleachers
You'll be victim in the first 48 <--& it only took that long to see your feminine features
1.5/3
Good grief you ruined this with the wording you used. barely a light jab
this guy is all bitch, this devil proves ya rhymin's all shit
people sayin he evil with bodies, that's coz Dia Ball Licks
1/3
terrible miss.
For the record? ya girl topped me off & showed no likes a Dude
No question I Loggerhead!..After I nut, she goes home to fight W/you
1/3
Not feeling this, it's another miss
Foolish fuck, I'll sink your advantage let'n the tooly's buck
Anything from you plays Into hands? its homie holding you from drowning in a pool of blood
1/3
buck/blood is a bad rhyme, the setup is choppy, and the punch is longwinded.
Ya slitherin ways proof of failure. Spree KO's reason you fall D
Cos these magic bars shakin you's the only way Dia gone Ali
1/3
fourth miss in a row
KNOW jockin you fuels my thirst for killin. I'll slaughter clown W/Facts
P, D A Light! stop praising him & realize Kid is watered Down & Wack
1/3
no idea what you were going for
clown'll choke, Punches'll have sylivia come out ya nose
No such validation that Digest Fist's, Unless its my knucks going down his throat
1/3
bad closer, it's a miss.
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MVGT: Dia 8.5/21
Killing Spree 7.5/21
Speechless. This is one of the worst battles I've ever seen on the Contenders circuit fellas. Dia barely did better. and KS had more conceptual ideas but his drunken-style of wording ruins everything before you even finish the setup.
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Dia wins ko
**CLosed**
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