WK 14: Lay Doubt vs Packed Graves [LAY DOUBT WINS]

[KnowP]

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20 Lines MAX

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@Packed Graves @Lay Doubt

[Lay Doubt.]

http://i346.photobucket.com/albums/p...psktptk3ek.png

I been in hospital threw my back out an haven't started writing yet.

Listen up you Paul Wall looking muhfucka.. cuz you're a..


liiiittle too close ya boy there, you're sweet so start living with less of a thug act
idk what your favorite candy is.. but based on this pic I'm guessing it's fudge, Packed
I'll be sending his punk ass to the hospital again when I start letting the snub clap
& he won't do shit, getting his gay lover pregnant's the only way he ever would bust back
homie's looking a bit top heavy with that pot belly & you.. I'm perplexed by ya style
a pot shirt? grow up. just cuz you go by PG doesn't make it okay to dress like a child
if he thinks that shirt's clever I'll slap him cuz he'll get merked when I'm rappin
wake & bake. it's gonna be pretty tough to do the second once the first never happens
dumbass can't be too bright, the poser's shit's weak & this joke's a pipsqueak
fucking idiot went & named himself Graves, when he's clearly nowhere CLOSE to 6 feet
you're getting roasted this week, I spare no lives so you'll get mauled till ya dead
you little faggot, you ain't gutter.. you just have a goddamn bowling ball for a head
those tats are so bad, musta lost a bet.. I mean was the shit a prank or what?
your Robin Thicke ass artist should be sued, cuz those Blurred Lines look Gaye as fuck
yo did Stevie Wonder do them shits? looking at 'em is an unbearable thing, dawg
as if we couldn't tell by every verse you've ever written you're into terrible ink jobs


Lights out.

[Packed Graves]

http://i346.photobucket.com/albums/p...psqzsm1wtd.jpg



http://s346.photobucket.com/user/Rya...m1wtd.jpg.html


Your manhoods an embarrassing size faggit, admit it you like dick
He holds a beer bottle the same way he has to jerk off, thats two fingers an a tight grip
frail queer your weak there's nothing you could do thatll hurt me kid
so if we got any beef il pop up sporadically an ruin your day faster then that herpes did
top tier vets ?? your name was never brought up clown
youve got concepts like that vodka & redbull they are all half empty an watered down
I'm a crook stealing this win to prove your talent isn't even half of me
after the votes you'll have to wear another L except this time it won't be a logo from a graphic t
closet queer be comfortable in your skin or ya life is a waste
just be honest faggit cuz we all know this wasn't the first time make ups been applied to your face
this red heads probably a snitch so il beat him to a great degree
then burry his roots if Ginseng an leave cops digging like the Appalachian Outlaws on A&E
Pale fuck, catch a few rays before I leave ya jaw wired in pain
If the suns a natural form of energy, it's no wonder all your bars seem to be tired an drained
truth is your expression screams faggit you can tell dude is lame
a face only a mother could love & a Smirk that makes him question ever using the name

[$pitacular]

liiiittle too close ya boy there, you're sweet so start living with less of a thug act
idk what your favorite candy is.. but based on this pic I'm guessing it's fudge, Packed
*dead* lmfao
I'll be sending his punk ass to the hospital again when I start letting the snub clap
& he won't do shit, getting his gay lover pregnant's the only way he ever would bust back
effective, relevant, and I loved how you tied in the rhyme scheme with the previous punch. Well written
homie's looking a bit top heavy with that pot belly & you.. I'm perplexed by ya style
a pot shirt? grow up. just cuz you go by PG doesn't make it okay to dress like a child
I honestly didn't think there were any dope PG plays left, and then bam here it is
if he thinks that shirt's clever I'll slap him cuz he'll get merked when I'm rappin
wake & bake. it's gonna be pretty tough to do the second once the first never happens
violent and mean, which I like, but not hitting as hard as the previous punches
dumbass can't be too bright, the poser's shit's weak & this joke's a pipsqueak
fucking idiot went & named himself Graves, when he's clearly nowhere CLOSE to 6 feet
concept is dope, again very well written, liked this
you're getting roasted this week, I spare no lives so you'll get mauled till ya dead
you little faggot, you ain't gutter.. you just have a goddamn bowling ball for a head
this one was below par for you. Decent but not impressed
those tats are so bad, musta lost a bet.. I mean was the shit a prank or what?
your Robin Thicke ass artist should be sued, cuz those Blurred Lines look Gaye as fuck
another incredibly well thought out concept with multiple tie ins. Dope
yo did Stevie Wonder do them shits? looking at 'em is an unbearable thing, dawg
as if we couldn't tell by every verse you've ever written you're into terrible ink jobs
solid closer

vs

Your manhoods an embarrassing size faggit, admit it you like dick
He holds a beer bottle the same way he has to jerk off, thats two fingers an a tight grip
bro I fucking laughed so hard at this
frail queer your weak there's nothing you could do thatll hurt me kid
so if we got any beef il pop up sporadically an ruin your day faster then that herpes did
the level of intellect you and Lay are displaying in this battle is legendary. The sporadically made this so goddamn good
top tier vets ?? your name was never brought up clown
youve got concepts like that vodka & redbull they are all half empty an watered down
knew this was coming from the chat thread lol. Another well written punch
I'm a crook stealing this win to prove your talent isn't even half of me
after the votes you'll have to wear another L except this time it won't be a logo from a graphic t
I feel like this was the only punch you had that didn't really hit so far, doesn't relate to the pic IMO
closet queer be comfortable in your skin or ya life is a waste
just be honest faggit cuz we all know this wasn't the first time make ups been applied to your face
decent, harsh, liked it
this red heads probably a snitch so il beat him to a great degree
then burry his roots if Ginseng an leave cops digging like the Appalachian Outlaws on A&E
didn't like this one. Just didn't execute well to me
Pale fuck, catch a few rays before I leave ya jaw wired in pain
If the suns a natural form of energy, it's no wonder all your bars seem to be tired an drained
good concept, decent punch, great execution
truth is your expression screams faggit you can tell dude is lame
a face only a mother could love & a Smirk that makes him question ever using the name
I feel like you fell short on the closer.


Damn man THIS is why I love text battles. This battle makes me want to drop another verse right fucking now. You guys just showed the league and the entire net IMO what the fuuuuck this is supposed to look like. Incredible battle. HOF. Graves I didn't realize you were that fucking good. Lay you did as expected. In the end, I have to give it to Lay Doubt by a slim margin but holy shit this was close. I'm impressed

v/Lay Doubt

[Lenox]

Your manhoods an embarrassing size faggit, admit it you like dick
He holds a beer bottle the same way he has to jerk off, thats two fingers an a tight grip

Not funny.

frail queer your weak there's nothing you could do thatll hurt me kid
so if we got any beef il pop up sporadically an ruin your day faster then that herpes did

Loll nice

top tier vets ?? your name was never brought up clown
youve got concepts like that vodka & redbull they are all half empty an watered down

Okay

I'm a crook stealing this win to prove your talent isn't even half of me
after the votes you'll have to wear another L except this time it won't be a logo from a graphic t

Dope

closet queer be comfortable in your skin or ya life is a waste
just be honest faggit cuz we all know this wasn't the first time make ups been applied to your face

Not feeling

this red heads probably a snitch so il beat him to a great degree
then burry his roots if Ginseng an leave cops digging like the Appalachian Outlaws on A&E

Alright

Pale fuck, catch a few rays before I leave ya jaw wired in pain
If the suns a natural form of energy, it's no wonder all your bars seem to be tired an drained

Decent

truth is your expression screams faggit you can tell dude is lame
a face only a mother could love & a Smirk that makes him question ever using the name

Cool personal


Vs


liiiittle too close ya boy there, you're sweet so start living with less of a thug act
idk what your favorite candy is.. but based on this pic I'm guessing it's fudge, Packed

Lol

I'll be sending his punk ass to the hospital again when I start letting the snub clap
& he won't do shit, getting his gay lover pregnant's the only way he ever would bust back

Nah, lol.

homie's looking a bit top heavy with that pot belly & you.. I'm perplexed by ya style
a pot shirt? grow up. just cuz you go by PG doesn't make it okay to dress like a child

Played angle at pgs name

if he thinks that shirt's clever I'll slap him cuz he'll get merked when I'm rappin
wake & bake. it's gonna be pretty tough to do the second once the first never happens

Dope

dumbass can't be too bright, the poser's shit's weak & this joke's a pipsqueak
fucking idiot went & named himself Graves, when he's clearly nowhere CLOSE to 6 feet

Cool

you're getting roasted this week, I spare no lives so you'll get mauled till ya dead
you little faggot, you ain't gutter.. you just have a goddamn bowling ball for a head

No.

those tats are so bad, musta lost a bet.. I mean was the shit a prank or what?
your Robin Thicke ass artist should be sued, cuz those Blurred Lines look Gaye as fuck

Could have been better. This was alright though

yo did Stevie Wonder do them shits? looking at 'em is an unbearable thing, dawg
as if we couldn't tell by every verse you've ever written you're into terrible ink jobs

No


Idk when the last time lay battled but if it's been his first in a while then it was actually really dope. A couple with punches. A few jabs. Some weird misses also. Pg was his regular stuff. A couple haymakers with the graphic t and the herpes. Herpes bar IMO was lotb. This was a real dope battle. Quality punches by both. However lay had a lot worse misses than pg

Vote: packed

[Slowhands]

liiiittle too close ya boy there, you're sweet so start living with less of a thug act
idk what your favorite candy is.. but based on this pic I'm guessing it's fudge, Packed
- nice opener
I'll be sending his punk ass to the hospital again when I start letting the snub clap
& he won't do shit, getting his gay lover pregnant's the only way he ever would bust back
- ok, but old feel almost
homie's looking a bit top heavy with that pot belly & you.. I'm perplexed by ya style
a pot shirt? grow up. just cuz you go by PG doesn't make it okay to dress like a child
- lmao good set up, humor, nameflip. Good bar
if he thinks that shirt's clever I'll slap him cuz he'll get merked when I'm rappin
wake & bake. it's gonna be pretty tough to do the second once the first never happens
- good follow up play
dumbass can't be too bright, the poser's shit's weak & this joke's a pipsqueak
fucking idiot went & named himself Graves, when he's clearly nowhere CLOSE to 6 feet
- good flow ok hit
you're getting roasted this week, I spare no lives so you'll get mauled till ya dead
you little faggot, you ain't gutter.. you just have a goddamn bowling ball for a head
- decent
those tats are so bad, musta lost a bet.. I mean was the shit a prank or what?
your Robin Thicke ass artist should be sued, cuz those Blurred Lines look Gaye as fuck
- decent hit
yo did Stevie Wonder do them shits? looking at 'em is an unbearable thing, dawg
as if we couldn't tell by every verse you've ever written you're into terrible ink jobs
- good closer

Nice verse, can never go wrong with pic battles lol. Your entire verse was pretty on point with consistency. Bust back line was relevant but conceptually felt old, flow and follow up from previous bar made it better. I thought PG/dress like a child hit was fire to me, love those bars. Rest of verse was pretty on point, think maybe a slight dip in consistency but loved how you tied in bars to previous ones. Had punches with good combo of everything in them.


PG
Your manhoods an embarrassing size faggit, admit it you like dick
He holds a beer bottle the same way he has to jerk off, thats two fingers an a tight grip
- lol opener
frail queer your weak there's nothing you could do thatll hurt me kid
so if we got any beef il pop up sporadically an ruin your day faster then that herpes did
- good punch
top tier vets ?? your name was never brought up clown
youve got concepts like that vodka & redbull they are all half empty an watered down
- ok
I'm a crook stealing this win to prove your talent isn't even half of me
after the votes you'll have to wear another L except this time it won't be a logo from a graphic t
- good hit, got it with L and finger play #nohomo
closet queer be comfortable in your skin or ya life is a waste
just be honest faggit cuz we all know this wasn't the first time make ups been applied to your face
- lol liked this, good set up helped
this red heads probably a snitch so il beat him to a great degree
then burry his roots if Ginseng an leave cops digging like the Appalachian Outlaws on A&E
- decent
Pale fuck, catch a few rays before I leave ya jaw wired in pain
If the suns a natural form of energy, it's no wonder all your bars seem to be tired an drained
- lmao funny af even tho seemed simple, good hit
truth is your expression screams faggit you can tell dude is lame
a face only a mother could love & a Smirk that makes him question ever using the name
- ok

You started good, first 2 bars were nice. Consistency dropped from that but barely. You have great combo of content in punches and some of the subtle choice of wording will probably not be picked up on by some. You had one bar that only set up was directed to pic, was good conceptually just noticed since everything else between yall seemed pic related. This is tough to call ....


Overall, considering current state of text with inactivity of the masses, this was a diamond in the rough. Classic shit. Both had what a punch should be, good mix of everything. This shit i've literally read 3 times trying to decide. I liked how Lay tied in a few bars to previous ones, thought that was clever. I also like actual set ups were relevant to punch and no a filler/punch structure. Packed had some clever shit as well and I feel like I have him edging this but even considered if its because I'm reading his 2nd and its more fresh in my head, so read it other way and had Lay edging so had to read a 3rd. This shits tough, I have Lay with 5 hits i liked. His bar 1, 3, 4, 6, and 8. Packed I got hitting on bars 1, 2, 4, 6, and 7. So fuck both of you right in your faces. I feel like Packed had better content, but Lay had better execution. I felt Lay distanced it with the tie-ins to bars previous and gave setups more effect. Good shit to both, if i could vote TIE then so be it. But if i had to choose then I got Lay by a gerbil taint hair. This shit was awesome, both just showed the league whats up and if yall stay active then everyone gets better by it. Classic shit guys.

[Smog]

Lay


I'm dead off that opener
Bust back was ooook
Dress like a child was hard, damn I've seen plenty pg rated fluid but this was dope
Wake m bake was niiiice
Close to 6 feet was slick
Lmao at gutter.. Nice
Blurred lines was dope
Closer was fire too

Vs

Opener was ridiculous
Herpies was dope
Vodka n red bull was good

Wear another L was fire
Make up was flames too
A&e was light, wasn't worded great
Natural form of energy was slick
Closer was good


This shit is dead even almost.. I see why it's gettin hype, I mean that's exchanging blow for blow, I could def vote thus I tie but damn man it's lije no1 overpowered the other so I gotta go to weakest bar.. Graves a&e was just off by the execution while lay had the bust back which is dated.. I mean I can hardly knock talk for these but although bust back is a lik dated it was executed smoothly n had a lil more impact than the a&e joint.. Than small margin has me giving this to doubt but props to both yall for an excellent read.. I'd vote hof for sure n good luck yall


Lay

[.SiQ.]

liiiittle too close ya boy there, you're sweet so start living with less of a thug act
idk what your favorite candy is.. but based on this pic I'm guessing it's fudge, Packed
>> LMFAO!!!!!!!! funny ass start bro 1.0

I'll be sending his punk ass to the hospital again when I start letting the snub clap
& he won't do shit, getting his gay lover pregnant's the only way he ever would bust back
>> nah 0.0

homie's looking a bit top heavy with that pot belly & you.. I'm perplexed by ya style
a pot shirt? grow up. just cuz you go by PG doesn't make it okay to dress like a child
>> LoL word! nice diss here 0.75

if he thinks that shirt's clever I'll slap him cuz he'll get merked when I'm rappin
wake & bake. it's gonna be pretty tough to do the second once the first never happens
>> decent 0.25

dumbass can't be too bright, the poser's shit's weak & this joke's a pipsqueak
fucking idiot went & named himself Graves, when he's clearly nowhere CLOSE to 6 feet
>> ouch!! solid fuckin personal/nameflip 1.0

you're getting roasted this week, I spare no lives so you'll get mauled till ya dead
you little faggot, you ain't gutter.. you just have a goddamn bowling ball for a head
>> lol funny 0.50

those tats are so bad, musta lost a bet.. I mean was the shit a prank or what?
your Robin Thicke ass artist should be sued, cuz those Blurred Lines look Gaye as fuck
>> dope!! 0.75

yo did Stevie Wonder do them shits? looking at 'em is an unbearable thing, dawg
as if we couldn't tell by every verse you've ever written you're into terrible ink jobs
>> good close 0.50

Total: 4.75
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Your manhoods an embarrassing size faggit, admit it you like dick
He holds a beer bottle the same way he has to jerk off, thats two fingers an a tight grip
>> Lmfao funny start 0.75

frail queer your weak there's nothing you could do thatll hurt me kid
so if we got any beef il pop up sporadically an ruin your day faster then that herpes did
>> ah fuk lol 0.25

top tier vets ?? your name was never brought up clown
youve got concepts like that vodka & redbull they are all half empty an watered down
>> lol is that what he was really drinkin? dope fukin bar 0.75

I'm a crook stealing this win to prove your talent isn't even half of me
after the votes you'll have to wear another L except this time it won't be a logo from a graphic t
>> another nice bar here! 0.50

closet queer be comfortable in your skin or ya life is a waste
just be honest faggit cuz we all know this wasn't the first time make ups been applied to your face
>> okay 0.25

this red heads probably a snitch so il beat him to a great degree
then burry his roots if Ginseng an leave cops digging like the Appalachian Outlaws on A&E
>> ight 0.25

Pale fuck, catch a few rays before I leave ya jaw wired in pain
If the suns a natural form of energy, it's no wonder all your bars seem to be tired an drained
>> i thought this bar was light.. 0.25

truth is your expression screams faggit you can tell dude is lame
a face only a mother could love & a Smirk that makes him question ever using the name
>> cool close 0.50

Total: 3.50

My Vote: Lay

** This was def the best battle of the week, solid fuckin battle - but i got Lay takin it.

[OG Maestro]

This isn't HOF, this would water down what's already in it. Just have to make that clear

Vote: Lay Doubt

PG was decent but 4 bars were non-picture related. <--Already ruins the idea of this being HOF. Then, the bars that did hit weren't all that other than light-okay hits, like the Make Up bar & A&E bar for example. But the Herpes bar was one of the best in the battle, and the Beer Bottle/Tight Grip joint was funny as hell.
Lay was a small step above PG, showing up good. I liked his verse and I think he would have proved to be a viable HOF pic battle opponent for someone like @Amen but not with the level of this verse. He had 3 light bars that are misses to me, which include the Gutter bar, the PG bar and the Wake n Bake bar.
But, Lay had some bars that I will say was the best of the week. The Blurred Lines bar was dope, and the Bust Back was a brilliant double entendre. The rest was decent and funny, but nothing next level or high-grade.

Def battle of the week though.

[Amen]

@Lay Doubt WINS 5-1.

CLOSED!