Wk 16 CHAMP MATCH: Letterman Vs Lay Doubt.[Letterman wins]

[Spree]

DUE DATE
Due Dates is FRIDAY MIDNIGHT P.S.T.
Voting Due SUNDAY MIDNIGHT P.S.T.

Bar Limit
10 lines MIN
14 Lines MAX

No Show
If you no show you will have to battle twice in FL to get back into the league.


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LAST MINUTE EXTENSIONS
We are willing to make exceptions on some occasions but no matter the exception it will always be up to your opponent.


@Letterman @Lay Doubt

[Lay Doubt.]

THE CHAMP IS HERE.


you're a fucking faggot.. so I'm dropping first & there's a point to it, slut
if I let you set the tone for this battle the shit'll sound super lispy & flamboyant as fuuuck
kid you can't tarnish my greatness so stop acting like your garbage amazes
before I son you so fucking bad your mom'll go to court & try to garnish my wages
dude writes complete nonsense so need to stress cuz he's an easy test
good call on the name though, since every time Letterman shows we always CBS
I'm a legend with clinics, you think you can beat me? nah I'm deading ya gimmick
that's a bigger stretch than your girl getting nice & limber for me when I'm ready to hit it
with all the dope heads gone you became champ & PLETHORA's the kid you were dealt?!
shit had Killing Spree feelin like a disappointed father, with no choice but to give you the belt
anyone who thinks this'll be close is lost in the clouds cuz you'll get socked in the mouth
if voters are on the fence they're trying to get a better vantage point of me stomping you out
I got game for days, when I hit the club it's nothing for me to bag a hoe cuz I got it
when YOU hit the club the lines you drop get more "nahs" than a vote from Barcotic
get dropped queer, I'm top tier, so everyone's about to see this weak guy's disposal
your verses are so second-rate I can't tell if you're trying to diss cats or offer a re-fi proposal
I've been seeing some dope punches here lately, lotta cats are starting to put 'em together
it's like I'm in a word search league, every week I stare at incoherent text looking for Letter's
you've been champ for too long & it's embarrassing to us all that this fuck's reppin
so obviously it's time to pass the throne, when every time you drop it's a succession


Lights out.

[Letterman]

This account has 57 notifications because mfs keep leaving out the period at the end of my main name lmao

His reaction to Barcotic showed Lay's weak. Cuz votes like his are a habit
So it was beyond reasonable, Doubt.. & u left more than enough evidence to prove you're a faggot
I'm shooting every bullet in the clip. Til fluids leak from your head phony
Cuz God'll still reserve you a spot in Heaven.. after I empty the 40 out and leave you dead, homie
This aint '08. Ur battles were wack but ur followers are how u pulled em out
Now if you get a surplus of votes, that salty faggot is dickriding off multiple accounts
This fag tough? Bitch act rough.. I'll shoot with mad precision
& He'll get hit with this calamine if this bitch starts making rash decisions
Every week I take risks. Always keying last minute, for your info
If we see lego out on a limb, this kid had a tantrum & threw his blocks out the window
He fucks with trannys. Finds out its a man but still clings to her bed
It's a shame the bitch had to crossover.. & you still put the trick between ur legs
Doubt God? Haha.. this the 7th bar & im ending the cackle
And watch.. by the Athiest lacking faith in himself to even win in this battle
If I knew the bar limit b4, I would've stole the win AND ur bitch as a double
Thats why you didn't satan, son.. cuz too he was afraid to tell his Damian trouble
We can really fight. Send him my number if he wants a round
Show up to his crib if son dial.. then he'll get clocked and left outside on the ground
We didn't miss your presence. Your return had us weary, bitch
Cuz the league is like your old account: we'd rather have Lay Doubt left out period

[Greedy]

you're a fucking faggot.. so I'm dropping first & there's a point to it, slut
if I let you set the tone for this battle the shit'll sound super lispy & flamboyant as fuuuck
NICE OPENER.

kid you can't tarnish my greatness so stop acting like your garbage amazes
before I son you so fucking bad your mom'll go to court & try to garnish my wages
GREAT WORDING, BUT HELLA PLAYED CONCEPT

dude writes complete nonsense so need to stress cuz he's an easy test
good call on the name though, since every time Letterman shows we always CBS
THIS IS ALSO PLAYED ON LETTERMAN

I'm a legend with clinics, you think you can beat me? nah I'm deading ya gimmick
that's a bigger stretch than your girl getting nice & limber for me when I'm ready to hit it
THIS WAS SLICK

with all the dope heads gone you became champ & PLETHORA's the kid you were dealt?!
shit had Killing Spree feelin like a disappointed father, with no choice but to give you the belt
I LIKE THIS CONCEPT, BUT NOT HOW YOU DISPLAYED IT

anyone who thinks this'll be close is lost in the clouds cuz you'll get socked in the mouth
if voters are on the fence they're trying to get a better vantage point of me stomping you out
IVE SEEN "ON THE FENCE" LINES A LOT BUT THIS IS A GOOD FLIP.

I got game for days, when I hit the club it's nothing for me to bag a hoe cuz I got it
when YOU hit the club the lines you drop get more "nahs" than a vote from Barcotic
NOT FEELING THIS

get dropped queer, I'm top tier, so everyone's about to see this weak guy's disposal
your verses are so second-rate I can't tell if you're trying to diss cats or offer a re-fi proposal
YIKES...HEAT

I've been seeing some dope punches here lately, lotta cats are starting to put 'em together
it's like I'm in a word search league, every week I stare at incoherent text looking for Letter's
AGAIN, PLAYED ON HIM

you've been champ for too long & it's embarrassing to us all that this fuck's reppin
so obviously it's time to pass the throne, when every time you drop it's a succession
NOT FEELING THIS ONE EITHER

VS

His reaction to Barcotic showed Lay's weak. Cuz votes like his are a habit
So it was beyond reasonable, Doubt.. & u left more than enough evidence to prove you're a faggot
A LIL WORDY, BUT NICE OPENER

I'm shooting every bullet in the clip. Til fluids leak from your head phony
Cuz God'll still reserve you a spot in Heaven.. after I empty the 40 out and leave you dead, homie
MEH, DECENT HERE.

This aint '08. Ur battles were wack but ur followers are how u pulled em out
Now if you get a surplus of votes, that salty faggot is dickriding off multiple accounts
DECENT. NOT REALLY THAT MUCH GOING. MORE OF A SURPLUS DISS IMO

This fag tough? Bitch act rough.. I'll shoot with mad precision 
& He'll get hit with this calamine if this bitch starts making rash decisions
YES. YES INDEED.

Every week I take risks. Always keying last minute, for your info
If we see lego out on a limb, this kid had a tantrum & threw his blocks out the window
OK WORDPLAY, MEH EXECUTION

He fucks with trannys. Finds out its a man but still clings to her bed
It's a shame the bitch had to crossover.. & you still put the trick between ur legs
NICE

Doubt God? Haha.. this the 7th bar & im ending the cackle
And watch.. by the Athiest lacking faith in himself to even win in this battle
THIS WP IS A BIT FORCED. CONCEPT WAS GOOD THO

If I knew the bar limit b4, I would've stole the win AND ur bitch as a double
Thats why you didn't satan, son.. cuz too he was afraid to tell his Damian trouble
HMM.. NICE CONCEPT. 2WP'S BUT SOMETHING IS OFF ABOUT THIS

We can really fight. Send him my number if he wants a round
Show up to his crib if son dial.. then he'll get clocked and left outside on the ground
NICE. BUT WORDING WAS IFFY

We didn't miss your presence. Your return had us weary, bitch
Cuz the league is like your old account: we'd rather have Lay Doubt left out period
NICE CLOSER.


nice battle here.
Lay Down:
Stellar wording. But a lot of played material hurt your verse overall IMO.
L Chapo: solid showing, a few bars coulda been worded better, cpl misses but still pretty consistent for the most part.

Vote Letters.

[Smog]

Lay

Opener was dope good way to start.. lol
Sonnin u/ garnish wages has been done but that wording is smooth
Now I've seen letterman/ late night but see BS.. Shit was fire
Bigger stretch was dope
Disappointed father was ok
I've seen on the fence used a few times but u killed this Imo
Vote from barcotic was ok I mean iv e seen those type joints done but never really as a pick up line which made it land
Refi proposal was dope..
Word search is too played on him
Closer was pretty cool Imo thought it was light to some of ur other shit but still landed

Vs

Let

Opener was dope
I've seen dump 40's/ dead hommies but this was a little different so it was decent to me
Surplus was ehh.. Seen sone1 drop something lije it earlier this season
Calamine was dope bruh
Lego go was ehh I don't pronounce it that way
Crossover was nice..
Atheist was forced man unless u talkin in German hommie
I thought this satan son was nice
Son dial was ok.. Thought u set it up good but finished it a lik rough
Closer was nice

This shit a dope battle.. Very close I got let missin 3 n lay 2 but both put down some heavy hitters.. With 1 less miss n more of a personal attack I got lay edging this.. No question this a dope bout n props to both for an entertaining read.. Good luck yall but I got lay here

Lay

[Stat.]

Lay Doubt
you're a fucking faggot.. so I'm dropping first & there's a point to it, slut
if I let you set the tone for this battle the shit'll sound super lispy & flamboyant as fuuuck
Cleverly calling him gay. Condense your wording. For example, the word super could be dropped and the punch wouldn't lose its effectiveness.
kid you can't tarnish my greatness so stop acting like your garbage amazes
before I son you so fucking bad your mom'll go to court & try to garnish my wages
Nice. Worded well.
dude writes complete nonsense so need to stress cuz he's an easy test
good call on the name though, since every time Letterman shows we always CBS
I've seen "CBS" line before but this was a name-play which makes it a decent flip. Also you had a typo, I think you meant to say "no need to stress," but you said "so need to stress." Polished writers write polished verses.
I'm a legend with clinics, you think you can beat me? nah I'm deading ya gimmick
that's a bigger stretch than your girl getting nice & limber for me when I'm ready to hit it
Weak flip on the stretch concept. Wording could be more concise here too. Take out "nice &" and the second line flows better while not sacrificing effectiveness.
with all the dope heads gone you became champ & PLETHORA's the kid you were dealt?!
shit had Killing Spree feelin like a disappointed father, with no choice but to give you the belt
I like how you spun a personal together with an old concept to make a decent punch.
anyone who thinks this'll be close is lost in the clouds cuz you'll get socked in the mouth
if voters are on the fence they're trying to get a better vantage point of me stomping you out
Nice. Better wording here.
I got game for days, when I hit the club it's nothing for me to bag a hoe cuz I got it
when YOU hit the club the lines you drop get more "nahs" than a vote from Barcotic
I liked this. Seen "nah" lines before but this was a decent flip. Got a shot at Bar, which is entertaining.
get dropped queer, I'm top tier, so everyone's about to see this weak guy's disposal
your verses are so second-rate I can't tell if you're trying to diss cats or offer a re-fi proposal
Cool line.
I've been seeing some dope punches here lately, lotta cats are starting to put 'em together
it's like I'm in a word search league, every week I stare at incoherent text looking for Letter's
This didn't connect well. Your boasting up other writers in the set-up and then saying that you're staring at incoherent text each week while looking for him.
you've been champ for too long & it's embarrassing to us all that this fuck's reppin
so obviously it's time to pass the throne, when every time you drop it's a succession
Cool closer. Suck Session


Letterman
His reaction to Barcotic showed Lay's weak. Cuz votes like his are a habit
So it was beyond reasonable, Doubt.. & u left more than enough evidence to prove you're a faggot
Cool name-play.
I'm shooting every bullet in the clip. Til fluids leak from your head phony
Cuz God'll still reserve you a spot in Heaven.. after I empty the 40 out and leave you dead, homie
Emptying the 40 to cause his death is not the same as pouring a 40oz out in memory of the dead homies. Therefore, this punch doesn't work.
This aint '08. Ur battles were wack but ur followers are how u pulled em out
Now if you get a surplus of votes, that salty faggot is dickriding off multiple accounts
Cool shot at Surplus. I like how you tied that into an effective punch against your opponent.
This fag tough? Bitch act rough.. I'll shoot with mad precision
& He'll get hit with this calamine if this bitch starts making rash decisions
Ok. Put more thought into the set-up maybe.
Every week I take risks. Always keying last minute, for your info
If we see lego out on a limb, this kid had a tantrum & threw his blocks out the window
Not really feelin this. He does whine like a kid in the chat thread but this wasn't a clever way of saying that.
He fucks with trannys. Finds out its a man but still clings to her bed
It's a shame the bitch had to crossover.. & you still put the trick between ur legs
I think the concept was a reach and that led to poor wording.
Doubt God? Haha.. this the 7th bar & im ending the cackle
And watch.. by the Athiest lacking faith in himself to even win in this battle
The set-up was weak because it had only two words in it that relate to the punch concept. Could have connected with a better set-up.
If I knew the bar limit b4, I would've stole the win AND ur bitch as a double
Thats why you didn't satan, son.. cuz too he was afraid to tell his Damian trouble
Say ten and Satan is a reach dude. Forced.
We can really fight. Send him my number if he wants a round
Show up to his crib if son dial.. then he'll get clocked and left outside on the ground
Like a dropped call, this was another failed connection.
We didn't miss your presence. Your return had us weary, bitch
Cuz the league is like your old account: we'd rather have Lay Doubt left out period
Eh. Although I hate period lines because people use them against me and everybody else like em.

Lay: Work on wording. Be direct. I wish I could have given you feedback on your last verse because you were worse about over-wording then and you needed to hear this last week. Unnecessary words are hurting your flow! I like how you don't stray away from what may be considered a "played" concept. There's always a fresh way to flip anything. Good verse overall, but there is always room to improve dawg.

Letterman: You had connection problems that made it hard to land any of the concepts you brought this week. Maybe keying up a verse right away and having a week to perfect it, is what will help solve your connectivity issues.

Vote Lay Doubt

[Clout]

you're a fucking faggot.. so I'm dropping first & there's a point to it, slut
if I let you set the tone for this battle the shit'll sound super lispy & flamboyant as fuuuck
dude writes complete nonsense so need to stress cuz he's an easy test
good call on the name though, since every time Letterman shows we always CBS
anyone who thinks this'll be close is lost in the clouds cuz you'll get socked in the mouth
if voters are on the fence they're trying to get a better vantage point of me stomping you out
get dropped queer, I'm top tier, so everyone's about to see this weak guy's disposal
your verses are so second-rate I can't tell if you're trying to diss cats or offer a re-fi proposal



His reaction to Barcotic showed Lay's weak. Cuz votes like his are a habit
So it was beyond reasonable, Doubt.. & u left more than enough evidence to prove you're a faggot
This fag tough? Bitch act rough.. I'll shoot with mad precision
& He'll get hit with this calamine if this bitch starts making rash decisions
Every week I take risks. Always keying last minute, for your info
If we see lego out on a limb, this kid had a tantrum & threw his blocks out the window
We can really fight. Send him my number if he wants a round
Show up to his crib if son dial.. then he'll get clocked and left outside on the ground


Mad close I feel like lett edge this. These were my favorite bars from each. This can go either way but I preferred the way letterman came at him. I didn't like the Satan bar shit was terrible from letterman. Lay had alot of old and expected name flips. But he can word em nicely can't hate. Just one seemed a bit more personal. The plethora line was too light to quote for me. I didn't like the 40 Oz flip from letter either stat was dead on with his expo on why it doesn't work right. Lay you had alot of old flips granted they were worded cool just not enough impact. I liked the vantage point bar from you. Thought the nah bar was terrible like letter man's one Satan bs.

V/ letter

[A. Diction]

with all the dope heads gone you became champ & PLETHORA's the kid you were dealt?!
shit had Killing Spree feelin like a disappointed father, with no choice but to give you the belt
get dropped queer, I'm top tier, so everyone's about to see this weak guy's disposal
your verses are so second-rate I can't tell if you're trying to diss cats or offer a re-fi proposal


The rest of ur verse was just stretched wording on played concepts. A couple of em were aite cuz of how u flipped it but most weren't.


Vs.


His reaction to Barcotic showed Lay's weak. Cuz votes like his are a habit
So it was beyond reasonable, Doubt.. & u left more than enough evidence to prove you're a faggot
This aint '08. Ur battles were wack but ur followers are how u pulled em out
Now if you get a surplus of votes, that salty faggot is dickriding off multiple accounts
This fag tough? Bitch act rough.. I'll shoot with mad precision
& He'll get hit with this calamine if this bitch starts making rash decisions
He fucks with trannys. Finds out its a man but still clings to her bed
It's a shame the bitch had to crossover.. & you still put the trick between ur legs

Doubt God? Haha.. this the 7th bar & im ending the cackle
And watch.. by the Athiest lacking faith in himself to even win in this battle
--- I wanted to like this bar but it's forced. Would be dope if it wasn't thinking...

Last 3 were blah. Didn't like the dbl wp thought it would been better just flipping Damian. Sun dial is played af. Closer was Decent'ish.


Overall: this an easy W for lett imo. He had fresher concepts and better flips.



V. Letty

[Enbombz]

you're a fucking faggot.. so I'm dropping first & there's a point to it, slut
if I let you set the tone for this battle the shit'll sound super lispy & flamboyant as fuuuck
lol good opener
kid you can't tarnish my greatness so stop acting like your garbage amazes
before I son you so fucking bad your mom'll go to court & try to garnish my wages
meh okay
dude writes complete nonsense so need to stress cuz he's an easy test
good call on the name though, since every time Letterman shows we always CBS
played okay flip
I'm a legend with clinics, you think you can beat me? nah I'm deading ya gimmick
that's a bigger stretch than your girl getting nice & limber for me when I'm ready to hit it
okay
with all the dope heads gone you became champ & PLETHORA's the kid you were dealt?!
shit had Killing Spree feelin like a disappointed father, with no choice but to give you the belt
nice persoall flip
anyone who thinks this'll be close is lost in the clouds cuz you'll get socked in the mouth
if voters are on the fence they're trying to get a better vantage point of me stomping you out
meh
I got game for days, when I hit the club it's nothing for me to bag a hoe cuz I got it
when YOU hit the club the lines you drop get more "nahs" than a vote from Barcotic
nah
get dropped queer, I'm top tier, so everyone's about to see this weak guy's disposal
your verses are so second-rate I can't tell if you're trying to diss cats or offer a re-fi proposal
i dont know the reference but i'll give you at everyone says its decent
I've been seeing some dope punches here lately, lotta cats are starting to put 'em together
it's like I'm in a word search league, every week I stare at incoherent text looking for Letter's
too played
you've been champ for too long & it's embarrassing to us all that this fuck's reppin
so obviously it's time to pass the throne, when every time you drop it's a successiona
nah

vs

His reaction to Barcotic showed Lay's weak. Cuz votes like his are a habit
So it was beyond reasonable, Doubt.. & u left more than enough evidence to prove you're a faggot
decent n/p opener
I'm shooting every bullet in the clip. Til fluids leak from your head phony
Cuz God'll still reserve you a spot in Heaven.. after I empty the 40 out and leave you dead, homie
meh
This aint '08. Ur battles were wack but ur followers are how u pulled em out
Now if you get a surplus of votes, that salty faggot is dickriding off multiple accounts
meh
This fag tough? Bitch act rough.. I'll shoot with mad precision
& He'll get hit with this calamine if this bitch starts making rash decisions
good shit
Every week I take risks. Always keying last minute, for your info
If we see lego out on a limb, this kid had a tantrum & threw his blocks out the window
bit of a reach but was decent
He fucks with trannys. Finds out its a man but still clings to her bed
It's a shame the bitch had to crossover.. & you still put the trick between ur legs
meh
Doubt God? Haha.. this the 7th bar & im ending the cackle
And watch.. by the Athiest lacking faith in himself to even win in this battle
too much of a reach
If I knew the bar limit b4, I would've stole the win AND ur bitch as a double
Thats why you didn't satan, son.. cuz too he was afraid to tell his Damian trouble
meh reachy
We can really fight. Send him my number if he wants a round
Show up to his crib if son dial.. then he'll get clocked and left outside on the ground
cool
We didn't miss your presence. Your return had us weary, bitch
Cuz the league is like your old account: we'd rather have Lay Doubt left out period
okay closer

close as fuck tbh for me. Letter reached a bit in parts and lay came with the played shit that's where they both missed most for me, both were pretty consistent though, nothing awful from either the misses weren't miles away just either too much of a reach or too obvious. I just gotta edge it to let though on the creativity. Lay's got this smooth execution but played it safe w/ some played stuff. Good champ match not hof but one of the better ones this season.

vote let

[Barcotic]

you're a fucking faggot.. so I'm dropping first & there's a point to it, slut
if I let you set the tone for this battle the shit'll sound super lispy & flamboyant as fuuuck

simplistic but pretty decent opener

kid you can't tarnish my greatness so stop acting like your garbage amazes
before I son you so fucking bad your mom'll go to court & try to garnish my wages

plaaayed out man, u should already kno

dude writes complete nonsense so need to stress cuz he's an easy test
good call on the name though, since every time Letterman shows we always CBS

both CBS and letterman nameflips are played but the combo made it decent

I'm a legend with clinics, you think you can beat me? nah I'm deading ya gimmick
that's a bigger stretch than your girl getting nice & limber for me when I'm ready to hit it

again, played. reminds me of the countless long stretch/yoga lines

with all the dope heads gone you became champ & PLETHORA's the kid you were dealt?!
shit had Killing Spree feelin like a disappointed father, with no choice but to give you the belt

this was cool, smooth wording too

anyone who thinks this'll be close is lost in the clouds cuz you'll get socked in the mouth
if voters are on the fence they're trying to get a better vantage point of me stomping you out

cool

I got game for days, when I hit the club it's nothing for me to bag a hoe cuz I got it
when YOU hit the club the lines you drop get more "nahs" than a vote from Barcotic

ironically this bar deserves a nah. it was weak

get dropped queer, I'm top tier, so everyone's about to see this weak guy's disposal
your verses are so second-rate I can't tell if you're trying to diss cats or offer a re-fi proposal

decent

I've been seeing some dope punches here lately, lotta cats are starting to put 'em together
it's like I'm in a word search league, every week I stare at incoherent text looking for Letter's

whack, plus basically every way to use letter as a np is played out

you've been champ for too long & it's embarrassing to us all that this fuck's reppin
so obviously it's time to pass the throne, when every time you drop it's a succession

ehh, decent-ish



vs



His reaction to Barcotic showed Lay's weak. Cuz votes like his are a habit
So it was beyond reasonable, Doubt.. & u left more than enough evidence to prove you're a faggot

pretty sure this is played on him, the personal aspect didn't save it (even tho it's true)

I'm shooting every bullet in the clip. Til fluids leak from your head phony
Cuz God'll still reserve you a spot in Heaven.. after I empty the 40 out and leave you dead, homie

didn't like this at all

This aint '08. Ur battles were wack but ur followers are how u pulled em out
Now if you get a surplus of votes, that salty faggot is dickriding off multiple accounts

decent

This fag tough? Bitch act rough.. I'll shoot with mad precision
& He'll get hit with this calamine if this bitch starts making rash decisions

ur heating up now, this was coo

Every week I take risks. Always keying last minute, for your info
If we see lego out on a limb, this kid had a tantrum & threw his blocks out the window

lol nice

He fucks with trannys. Finds out its a man but still clings to her bed
It's a shame the bitch had to crossover.. & you still put the trick between ur legs

dece, could've been a lot better tho

Doubt God? Haha.. this the 7th bar & im ending the cackle
And watch.. by the Athiest lacking faith in himself to even win in this battle

forced, unless ur hush or someone else w/ a lisp

If I knew the bar limit b4, I would've stole the win AND ur bitch as a double
Thats why you didn't satan, son.. cuz too he was afraid to tell his Damian trouble

nope

We can really fight. Send him my number if he wants a round
Show up to his crib if son dial.. then he'll get clocked and left outside on the ground

seen similar n this wasn't any better

We didn't miss your presence. Your return had us weary, bitch
Cuz the league is like your old account: we'd rather have Lay Doubt left out period

k cool, and relevant since he's been logging in on it lately



so overall this was an underwhelming champ match that had a lot of old flips, it was definitely close tho tbh.. 2 standouts + 4 passables vs 3 standouts + 2 passables = really hard to call

play doubt had some pretty bad misses, plus letter had lotb (lego out on a limb) IMO so Ima go w/ him

v/letterman

[Surplus]

I'll give letter credit, his first 10 lines were dope.

But his last 10 lines all sucked.

Lay Doubt had some played concepts but killed this.

Not ganna vote but lay doubt won this, letter started hot but ended real bad imo.

-vote doesn't count. not broken down

-staff

[Packed Graves]

Vote: letterman if you want explanation I will but doubt should be dq'd anyway.

[Forge]

you're a fucking faggot.. so I'm dropping first & there's a point to it, slut
if I let you set the tone for this battle the shit'll sound super lispy & flamboyant as fuuuck
ook
kid you can't tarnish my greatness so stop acting like your garbage amazes
before I son you so fucking bad your mom'll go to court & try to garnish my wages
lol i thought this was good
dude writes complete nonsense so need to stress cuz he's an easy test
good call on the name though, since every time Letterman shows we always CBS
nope sorry bro
I'm a legend with clinics, you think you can beat me? nah I'm deading ya gimmick
that's a bigger stretch than your girl getting nice & limber for me when I'm ready to hit it
didnt like this one either man
with all the dope heads gone you became champ & PLETHORA's the kid you were dealt?!
shit had Killing Spree feelin like a disappointed father, with no choice but to give you the belt
no to me
anyone who thinks this'll be close is lost in the clouds cuz you'll get socked in the mouth
if voters are on the fence they're trying to get a better vantage point of me stomping you out
this was good
I got game for days, when I hit the club it's nothing for me to bag a hoe cuz I got it
when YOU hit the club the lines you drop get more "nahs" than a vote from Barcotic
not really creative to me
get dropped queer, I'm top tier, so everyone's about to see this weak guy's disposal
your verses are so second-rate I can't tell if you're trying to diss cats or offer a re-fi proposal
nope bro
I've been seeing some dope punches here lately, lotta cats are starting to put 'em together
it's like I'm in a word search league, every week I stare at incoherent text looking for Letter's
didnt hit to me
you've been champ for too long & it's embarrassing to us all that this fuck's reppin
so obviously it's time to pass the throne, when every time you drop it's a succession
this was a good line


His reaction to Barcotic showed Lay's weak. Cuz votes like his are a habit
So it was beyond reasonable, Doubt.. & u left more than enough evidence to prove you're a faggot
this wasnt really great
I'm shooting every bullet in the clip. Til fluids leak from your head phony
Cuz God'll still reserve you a spot in Heaven.. after I empty the 40 out and leave you dead, homie
no i seen 40 lines alot back when i last battled in 2010
This aint '08. Ur battles were wack but ur followers are how u pulled em out
Now if you get a surplus of votes, that salty faggot is dickriding off multiple accounts
sorry dont get it
This fag tough? Bitch act rough.. I'll shoot with mad precision
& He'll get hit with this calamine if this bitch starts making rash decisions
this was really good
Every week I take risks. Always keying last minute, for your info
If we see lego out on a limb, this kid had a tantrum & threw his blocks out the window
i think this was forced
He fucks with trannys. Finds out its a man but still clings to her bed
It's a shame the bitch had to crossover.. & you still put the trick between ur legs
lol good
Doubt God? Haha.. this the 7th bar & im ending the cackle
And watch.. by the Athiest lacking faith in himself to even win in this battle
this was clever it hit really good imo
If I knew the bar limit b4, I would've stole the win AND ur bitch as a double
Thats why you didn't satan, son.. cuz too he was afraid to tell his Damian trouble
lol i like this one was creative
We can really fight. Send him my number if he wants a round
Show up to his crib if son dial.. then he'll get clocked and left outside on the ground
yes this was dope imo
We didn't miss your presence. Your return had us weary, bitch
Cuz the league is like your old account: we'd rather have Lay Doubt left out period
didnt feel this


this was a good one to me i think letterman won this he had acouple of more hard hitting lines to me good job to both

[.SiQ.]

your verses are so second-rate I can't tell if you're trying to diss cats or offer a re-fi proposal
I've been seeing some dope punches here lately, lotta cats are starting to put 'em together
it's like I'm in a word search league, every week I stare at incoherent text looking for Letter's

Vs


Heaven.. after I empty the 40 out and leave you dead, homie
This aint '08. Ur battles were wack but ur followers are how u pulled em out
Now if you get a surplus of votes, that salty faggot is dickriding off multiple accounts
This fag tough? Bitch act rough.. I'll shoot with mad precision
& He'll get hit with this calamine if this bitch starts making rash decisions
Every week I take risks. Always keying last minute, for your info
If we see lego out on a limb, this kid had a tantrum & threw his blocks out the window
He fucks with trannys. Finds out its a man but still clings to her bed
It's a shame the bitch had to crossover.. & you still put the trick between ur legs
Doubt God? Haha.. this the 7th bar & im ending the cackle
And watch.. by the Athiest lacking faith in himself to even win in this battle
If I knew the bar limit b4, I would've stole the win AND ur bitch as a double
Thats why you didn't satan, son.. cuz too he was afraid to tell his Damian trouble
We can really fight. Send him my number if he wants a round
Show up to his crib if son dial.. then he'll get clocked and left outside on the ground
We didn't miss your presence. Your return had us weary, bitch
Cuz the league is like your old account: we'd rather have Lay Doubt left out period


Vote: let

Felt it was truly 1 sided

[JEM.]

Doubt:

you're a fucking faggot.. so I'm dropping first & there's a point to it, slut
if I let you set the tone for this battle the shit'll sound super lispy & flamboyant as fuuuck
Dope. nice opener mate.

kid you can't tarnish my greatness so stop acting like your garbage amazes
before I son you so fucking bad your mom'll go to court & try to garnish my wages
Nice.

dude writes complete nonsense so need to stress cuz he's an easy test
good call on the name though, since every time Letterman shows we always CBS
Nice.

I'm a legend with clinics, you think you can beat me? nah I'm deading ya gimmick
that's a bigger stretch than your girl getting nice & limber for me when I'm ready to hit it
Eh, not feeling.

with all the dope heads gone you became champ & PLETHORA's the kid you were dealt?!
shit had Killing Spree feelin like a disappointed father, with no choice but to give you the belt
Nice.

anyone who thinks this'll be close is lost in the clouds cuz you'll get socked in the mouth
if voters are on the fence they're trying to get a better vantage point of me stomping you out
Dope.

I got game for days, when I hit the club it's nothing for me to bag a hoe cuz I got it
when YOU hit the club the lines you drop get more "nahs" than a vote from Narcotic
Nice line, and relevant.

get dropped queer, I'm top tier, so everyone's about to see this weak guy's disposal
your verses are so second-rate I can't tell if you're trying to diss cats or offer a re-fi proposal
Nice line.

I've been seeing some dope punches here lately, lotta cats are starting to put 'em together
it's like I'm in a word search league, every week I stare at incoherent text looking for Letter’s
I wasn’t feeling this one, failed to go from cool concept to impactful punch.

you've been champ for too long & it's embarrassing to us all that this fuck's reppin
so obviously it's time to pass the throne, when every time you drop it's a succession
Haha clever. Nice.


Let:

His reaction to Barcotic showed Lay's weak. Cuz votes like his are a habit
So it was beyond reasonable, Doubt.. & u left more than enough evidence to prove you're a faggot
Nice.

I'm shooting every bullet in the clip. Til fluids leak from your head phony
Cuz God'll still reserve you a spot in Heaven.. after I empty the 40 out and leave you dead, homie
Not feeling, I see what you tried to do here - but it doesn’t connect.

This aint '08. Ur battles were wack but ur followers are how u pulled em out
Now if you get a surplus of votes, that salty faggot is dickriding off multiple accounts
Lol, nice! Plus, haha, surplus posting in the thread. Couldn’t have chalked this one up
any better.

This fag tough? Bitch act rough.. I'll shoot with mad precision
& He'll get hit with this calamine if this bitch starts making rash decisions
So, this felt lazy to me? The actual punch was pretty good, but before just seemed
thrown up… Actually, I never gave the “in an audio or live battle” feedback,
but text’s one upper hand is you can elaborate and build a scene… That would have
helped this go from a light jab to a straight right hand.

Every week I take risks. Always keying last minute, for your info
If we see lego out on a limb, this kid had a tantrum & threw his blocks out the window
Lol, Dope.


He fucks with trannys. Finds out its a man but still clings to her bed
It's a shame the bitch had to crossover.. & you still put the trick between ur legs
Not feeling.

Doubt God? Haha.. this the 7th bar & im ending the cackle
And watch.. by the Athiest lacking faith in himself to even win in this battle
Everything about this bar was okay… But the word play was really good.
Decent punch.

If I knew the bar limit b4, I would've stole the win AND ur bitch as a double
Thats why you didn't satan, son.. cuz too he was afraid to tell his Damian trouble
Not feeling, stretched and the wording was all over the place here.

We can really fight. Send him my number if he wants a round
Show up to his crib if son dial.. then he'll get clocked and left outside on the ground
Lol, nice.

We didn't miss your presence. Your return had us weary, bitch
Cuz the league is like your old account: we'd rather have Lay Doubt left out period
Decent closer.


All in all, I think Lay got this… But a couple of observations, Lay didn’t come as
flawless as I expected. It wasn’t his usual super smooth, crazy tied-in transitions
etc… Letterman hit with more wordplay than I have read from him, ALSO,
had the LOTB but after that, had concepts, but wording - or lack of set ups,
or even in the satan/dame in like trying to load punches but missing.

I was expected a bit more… but all in all pretty entertaining battle guys.

v/Doubt