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Lmao. Check. Going 10. I can post in an hour or any time tonight if you have the balls to get this over with fast.
Plz clean up this thread. Delete the verse above this post. I updated it with 3 new bars. Went 16.
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art got a killer instinct, the tempered jokes are gone bro
all those fire punches landed multiple hits, u got cinder ultra combo'ed
ur preggo wifey snorted crank, it's sort of hard to admit
it's obvious the third trimester up, cuz ur son was born retarded as shit
post ur crappy ass verse, go put ur deranged lad to bed
brethren looked so wretched afterbirth, u should of raised that instead
so just stfu u pudgy faggot, a vote against BROKE is sin
thumbs gouge ur eyes while i crush ur skull, ur a bloated prince oberyn
i lowkey pimp ur babymom, she calls me boss yearlong
that drunk whore loves to cup white balls when she's tossed: beer pong
i bag 8's & above, u game worn thots w/ chlamydia drip
yo whenever u try to machinate, she brainstorm plots to give u the slip
ur harmless, want to get capped fam? i'm willin to help
ur strapped with nonlethal gadgets b, ur practically batmans utility belt
want congrats for postin trash? u sad as a crack addict
ur so desperate to get attaboys, u should be askin to battle that faggot
Mannnnn.. I need at least a 24 hour extension... My phone just took a dive, no charge, no touch sensor . It's shot. I'ma try and use this one to write a new verse by Friday midnight Pacific. This my first time ever wit somethin like this but I understand if it's a no. Gotta give back this borrowed phone now, can't even check if it's a go. Bbasap
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Sure, bro! Good luck! Sorry about your phone!
So yea...
B in search of a top spot? Well ima put em in a box for it bet
Where the only options for URLs, n still wont see a DOT before Net
I'm poppin yo set, when I Up the Mag yall already know its issues
Brokes pussies no sorta tough orgy, n its fuck errbody rollin wit u!
Its that mouthpiece buggin me, cos u aint hurtin a fly
So keep yo lips Caged, or letem zip that trap shut while he squirtin ya eye
The last hoe u had, played u dirty like one On Demand
She aint feel you remotely,
Now ya Xfinity off these balls when I bunker on the sand
She dont Neyo time, if she missin da pendant B took it from her bracelet
Fkn rapist smh,
D aint seen a 24hr extension, since he popped blue pills n put her in the Matrix
Grill Dot in the hot seat, tell the truth or die in a flash
Say I aint above you wit matches?.. Then lemme drop the Gas ol'ine ass!
Yo fam aint physical their a pc of shit in the scrappin sense
Vacate when Im at D fence..
But is yo Mom back Broke? Cuz I can rubber out n make it look like an accident!
Me and U dont add up, its fag stuff to tryn rearrange figures
Les the type to get dressed for guys, n Net wuld never change for a nigga.
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Voting from my phone so excuse the eh break down
Broke
Cinder comboed
The trimester DOPE
the prince line , great episode , something was off there though cool concept
Utility belt
Atta boys
Dude overall this was a real cool verse ... you had a few misses but I thought they were just a bit off the beer pong concept was cool but when flipping the concept back to beer pong something felt off I know the whole cupped white balls but it sounded a bit funny , but nonetheless cool concept the bars that I was ehh about all had cool set ups and concepts but I just didn't think they landed hard enough but dope verse always a good read man .
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Idk man idk if I'm reading your shit wrong but a lot of lines had me completely lost maybe they went over my head if so I guess discredit the vote but i felt a lot of the punches I legit had no idea where the flip was or honestly even the punch was ... like the opening line Dot before Net I get .net but your only option for URLs idk completely over my head I guess I kept reading as I got multiple lines like that and some of the set ups were good but then you went a completely different direction or the punch was just out there .. I thought the hot seat die in a flash was cool set and then the above you with matches read funny but got away with it but then said gasoline ass again idk what's goin in here lol ... this isn't hate Just I guess constructive criticism wording has to be better
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art got a killer instinct, the tempered jokes are gone bro
all those fire punches landed multiple hits, u got cinder ultra combo'ed
Love KI - was really feeling this
ur preggo wifey snorted crank, it's sort of hard to admit
it's obvious the third trimester up, cuz ur son was born retarded as shit
FUUUCK
post ur crappy ass verse, go put ur deranged lad to bed
brethren looked so wretched afterbirth, u should of raised that instead
This may be LOTB
so just stfu u pudgy faggot, a vote against BROKE is sin
thumbs gouge ur eyes while i crush ur skull, ur a bloated prince oberyn
I love this flip but the execution was lacking a bit IMO.
i lowkey pimp ur babymom, she calls me boss yearlong
that drunk whore loves to cup white balls when she's tossed: beer pong
This was a miss for me but the flip was decent enough
i bag 8's & above, u game worn thots w/ chlamydia drip
yo whenever u try to machinate, she brainstorm plots to give u the slip
Wasn't feeling this
ur harmless, want to get capped fam? i'm willin to help
ur strapped with nonlethal gadgets b, ur practically batmans utility belt
This was dope
want congrats for postin trash? u sad as a crack addict
ur so desperate to get attaboys, u should be askin to battle that faggot
Liked this as well
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B in search of a top spot? Well ima put em in a box for it bet
Where the only options for URLs, n still wont see a DOT before Net
I actually thought this was decent. My one complaint is that again, these setups lend nothing at all to the punches other than a rhyme
I'm poppin yo set, when I Up the Mag yall already know its issues
Brokes pussies no sorta tough orgy, n its fuck errbody rollin wit u!
I really don't get this. Magazine/issue flip is played though and you really didn't flip it any new kind of way
Its that mouthpiece buggin me, cos u aint hurtin a fly
So keep yo lips Caged, or letem zip that trap shut while he squirtin ya eye
Nothing really to this. You are attempting personals without really any cleverness or thought put into the setup at all
The last hoe u had, played u dirty like one On Demand
She aint feel you remotely,
Now ya Xfinity off these balls when I bunker on the sand
Xfinity play was actually kind of nice here, fit the gold reference. Do more like this. HOWEVER, your wording and execution stiill need some work. This does show promise.
She dont Neyo time, if she missin da pendant B took it from her bracelet
Fkn rapist smh,
D aint seen a 24hr extension, since he popped blue pills n put her in the Matrix
This was all over the place
Grill Dot in the hot seat, tell the truth or die in a flash
Say I aint above you wit matches?.. Then lemme drop the Gas ol'ine ass!
I felt this up until the "punch". Something about the wording is off or maybe I just don't understand
Yo fam aint physical their a pc of shit in the scrappin sense
Vacate when Im at D fence..
But is yo Mom back Broke? Cuz I can rubber out n make it look like an accident!
This was everywhere
Me and U dont add up, its fag stuff to tryn rearrange figures
Les the type to get dressed for guys, n Net wuld never change for a nigga.
This wasn't even really a punch, more a statement
Overall, B had this pretty easily. A few... "misses", I guess, but even those had something to bring to the table. Net, you showed some capacity to actually drop some decently dope shit this week. Your wording kills you and your formatting is a bit of an eyesore at times, but you do have some concepts that if you ever learn to develop, you could be a lot nicer. Focus on your setups and try and actually develop schemes around them, instead of saying a bunch of shit for 75% of the bar and then having an unlinked punch.
No hate here, I really did see some improvement.
v/ Broke
art got a killer instinct, the tempered jokes are gone bro
all those fire punches landed multiple hits, u got cinder ultra combo'ed
ur preggo wifey snorted crank, it's sort of hard to admit
it's obvious the third trimester up, cuz ur son was born retarded as shit
i lowkey pimp ur babymom, she calls me boss yearlong
that drunk whore loves to cup white balls when she's tossed: beer pong
ur harmless, want to get capped fam? i'm willin to help
ur strapped with nonlethal gadgets b, ur practically batmans utility belt
want congrats for postin trash? u sad as a crack addict
ur so desperate to get attaboys, u should be askin to battle that faggot
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B in search of a top spot? Well ima put em in a box for it bet
Where the only options for URLs, n still wont see a DOT before Net
The last hoe u had, played u dirty like one On Demand
She aint feel you remotely,
Now ya Xfinity off these balls when I bunker on the sand
Grill Dot in the hot seat, tell the truth or die in a flash
Say I aint above you wit matches?.. Then lemme drop the Gas ol'ine ass!
Not bad, Net you brought some interesting concepts to this match. The Xfinity bar was cool, still lacked a little depth to it but it did something for me. The other two quotes above also were your best bars. Overall, your verse still struggled. Some wp you do is dope, often times you force 'em. Your inconsistency fucks it up sometimes. Keep working fam. Lesnar, pretty cool verse. You had a few bars that were iffy like the machinate bar - it was spotty to me. On the other hand, you had better bars simply - your flow was better and didn't feel all over the place. You were more consistent and your delivery was more solid than Net's.
v/ B Dot
Les- trimester was nice seen wordplay before but this was dope, batmans utility belt was rofl. You had a few misses but none that where a complete miss. Just lighter then what I like to see.
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Net- URLs see dot before net I get it how it ties in but the punch is played as shit, xfinity was a good wordplay but your execution was horrendous. You seem either really rusty or never elevated An stick at your peak.
Breakdown- Les obviously takes the dub here it was easy to see why it would go in his favor. He had better jabs An landed the only 2 quotable lines of the battle. Net your bars are scattered brained as fuck with no real direction you went from cable xfinity to a bunker wtf?
I don't know if I should vote on this but it's obvious Les wins.
I can't honestly believe a niggga that post this shit tells me I don't have a quotable line or weak verse hahahahaa
1x Best Overall Textcee(tie)
1x FL Best Text Battler
ur preggo wifey snorted crank, it's sort of hard to admit
it's obvious the third trimester up, cuz ur son was born retarded as shit
post ur crappy ass verse, go put ur deranged lad to bed
brethren looked so wretched afterbirth, u should of raised that instead
i bag 8's & above, u game worn thots w/ chlamydia drip
yo whenever u try to machinate, she brainstorm plots to give u the slip
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This was a beatdown here, One came with some fire ass wp and punches the other came with some poorly worded and executed bars his opener had alot of potential too wish he couldve did the concept justice, but this was a very easy call imo... v/ Broke
the Trimester/Mak an 8 bar was dope!
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