L.L.L. Week 2: Allen Knight (1 – 0) vs Dzaster (1 – 0)[Feed]

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

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LLL RULES!

verses due thursday 11:59PST
Minimum Lines = 10 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines
Extension: Up to opponent
3 voting links required LLL champ, FL CHAMP and LLL Contender matches required
2 no shows you out for the fallowing week.
3 no shows you out for season.

Since everyone MUST Vote on Champ/Contenders
Those battles will be Majority Votes WIN!!

[Allen Knight]

in for 12.

[DzasteR]

Here.

12 it is.

[Allen Knight]

Might need the ext.

[Allen Knight]

Ima be droppin late night if thats cool.

I wont be home till then.

[DzasteR]

Long week Allen - G'L though
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My verses concrete – you’ll feel the pressure, and the impact in this round
Cuz I’ll leave a lasting impression…..when I smash your face in the ground
I’ll turn this into some drastic shit – tear him apart and show yall who this faggot is
Cuz I’ll easily make a girl out of him…...right after I snatch his ribs
Ya girl texts me everyday to come over....I have her sayin my name til daylight
While you be thinking she love saying your name....when she texts you "K, Night!"
This dude is washed up, yall gas this chump - I'll blast the pump with the shotty to his liver
You crazy battling me - Allen's in Seine.... yea - cuz I dumped his body in that river.
You wasn't a threat in the last LLL - & you won't last in this gauntlet 
Claims he's cold as ice..... that's cuz he's been constantly placed on it
You get murdered easily - see I got the Ace and the 9, blazing at ya mental
Cuz when I pull ya card, you'll Switch up........like the latest from Nintendo
12.

[Spree]

Dzaster wins by NS Feed

[Wuxia]

Long week Allen - G'L though
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My verses concrete – you’ll feel the pressure, and the impact in this round
Cuz I’ll leave a lasting impression…..when I smash your face in the ground

☆☆☆ setup was choppy, liked the flip

I’ll turn this into some drastic shit – tear him apart and show yall who this faggot is
Cuz I’ll easily make a girl out of him…...right after I snatch his ribs

☆ setup too longwinded, softened the impact of a lackluster punch

Ya girl texts me everyday to come over....I have her sayin my name til daylight
While you be thinking she love saying your name....when she texts you "K, Night!"

☆☆☆☆☆ haven't seen this kind of np on him, pretty inventive

This dude is washed up, yall gas this chump - I'll blast the pump with the shotty to his liver
You crazy battling me - Allen's in Seine.... yea - cuz I dumped his body in that river.

☆☆☆☆☆ again, setup was longwinded, closer was fragmented, but I credited you because I loved the wp

You wasn't a threat in the last LLL - & you won't last in this gauntlet 
Claims he's cold as ice..... that's cuz he's been constantly placed on it

☆☆☆

You get murdered easily - see I got the Ace and the 9, blazing at ya mental
Cuz when I pull ya card, you'll Switch up........like the latest from Nintendo

☆ "like the latest from nintendo" was kind of sloppy
12.

Decent verse, bro.

[DzasteR]

Decent verse, bro.

preciate the feed man. still got work to do but ima get there. Good look.

[Art.]

Shitty feed really wanted to see this battle but whatever ...

The k night flip was dope , people always say punches and flips are kind of dead against Allen but they're dead against everyone I've seen so many art flips on me but if the wording and execution is on I like it .. now the wording there wasn't perfect imo but the concept was there.

Allen insane word play also dope as hell too many words in the first set up though I do like you tying the punch into the setup but make it shorter to many words makes it a bit choppy ..

So those were my 2 favorite bars of yours .. good shit showing up

[Lenox]

Solid verse.

I liked the knight name play tbh lol

I'd break it down further but there's not much to say