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    Super Grand Heru SELF ACTIVATE's Avatar
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    Strange Fruit Burning

    Topical battle verse
    Line Limit: 32
    Topic: Serial killer



    STRANGE FRUIT BURNING

    I will never forget the crackling sound that old vinyl made
    It reminded me of firewood battling a slow burning flame
    As the needle raked ... deep in between its groves
    And Billie Holiday ... sang meaning to the Blues
    "Blood on the leaves and blood on the root"
    She so elegantly cooed; while the music played
    And echoed thru the room, I could smell a trace
    Of a beautiful perfume and in a subtle way
    It reminded me of Sue: this gentle runway

    Circa 1992

    I took her to the movies on a chilly Tuesday afternoon
    'A River Runs Through It' was the film we went to view
    ... A beauty in full bloom with a baby in the womb ...
    ... At the age of 18 she had a bosom like balloons ...
    Same as ladies in saloons; tho the graceful way she moved
    You'd mistake her for a muse ... she was radiant as Luna
    With a face to wake the Moon! Could not wait to taste her fruit
    So I strung her from a noose then watched her struggle & turn blue
    Until the air escaped her lungs and she just dangled in the nude!

    "There's a rapist on the loose and he strangled Mary Sue!"

    Exclaimed the papers and the news
    But I was half across the nation when their station got a clue
    Tho the strangest twist of faith now finds me chained with no escape
    Cos the baby in her womb had survived without a scrape
    And for 25 years she fantasized about the day
    That our destinies would meet and she could see me face-to-face

    "Its been 2 decades in the making let's enjoy this fatal date!
    From the "Cradle To The Grave" takes new meaning in this case.
    See I traced your every play and every murder that you made,
    I learned your motives and your ways, until you surfaced in L.A.
    Where I met you at a bar and spiked your bourbon with nightshade.
    I would urge you say a prayer but its purpose would be vain..."


    Were the last words I heard before she burnt me in a blaze!




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    Edit: twist of *fate*

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    Re: Strange Fruit Burning

    Peeped this elsewhere. Dope. Nasty flow as usual. Keep rockin dawg
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    Re: Strange Fruit Burning

    yo son every time i see that title it reminds me of this joint lol



    as i told u elsewhere, this is dop, bruva. lyrically precise and imagery is top tier. not only sight but you provided a "feel" and "sound" as well in a matter of lines...

    As the needle raked ... deep in between its groves
    And Billie Holiday ... sang meaning to the Blues
    "Blood on the leaves and blood on the root"
    She so elegantly cooed; while the music played
    And echoed thru the room, I could smell a trace

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