User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 6 of 6

Thread: Glorified Cavemen...(Naturistic Pull)...I'm fuked up..lol...

  1. #1
    Brix! Trahedy Siphon's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2004
    Location
    Manchester
    Age
    38
    Posts
    889
    Battle Record
    8-0

    Glorified Cavemen...(Naturistic Pull)...I'm fuked up..lol...

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...32#post1218732

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...34#post1218734

    ….Glorified Cavemen….Pt.1


    look, we ain’t nothing but glorified cavemen
    Bloodlust for carnage, hate and destruction
    And my heart rate fluctuates, thinking of the pain
    People feel under the hand of the strong again
    Weak become exploited, depressed, and oppressed
    Til the earth is a picture of meek unhappiness
    The natural instincts for Armageddon, war and peace
    Sky a smoke fog of loss and defeat……..

    I’m glorified from the state of our original form
    Groomed for destruction from the day I was born
    Victim of scorn, Dim light and dimmer helpless nights
    Emotions run wild and free, hate, delight and spite
    Without the growing height, I stay grounded, never elevating
    Think back contemplating on the distance I been creating…
    A verge of nothingness, just darkness and a faint glow
    Maybe the glow is my hero, maybe I’ll never know
    I strapped down to the table known as life…locked up…
    And blood eases from my ear drum, brain matters fucked up
    I looked up, looked deeper into my depths of solitude
    Life’s memories stored away, held in a solemn room
    A helpless mood, a cry out, a whisper of helpless plea
    For my self destructive nature not to be the death of me
    My humanity, is hanging in the balance of my haunt
    Valiant in my etched shades, the page is my confidant
    I see the future is bleak, even in my weak state of mind
    I seek the truth although the blanket of lies leaves me blind
    Contemplate pasts times, My face cracks its shell…do I smile?
    I forgot this feeling known as contentment; It’s been an awful while
    I was sterile, my life was just a careless whisper in the wind
    My natural instincts were taking over, control blew away like lint
    My lifeless stint, thank god my ordeal is finally over
    A fallen soldier, thinking deeper and in depth as a moulder
    Burn in my happiness of my self opinions and my company
    As earlier stated, My own thoughts and actions will be the death of me
    My discrepancy, my story untold until…well….now
    My lifelong vow…Succeeding and evolving somehow
    From the lifeless form of the unresolved thoughts of a caveman
    Everyday growing from the pre-historic brain scan……

    See I’m eclipsed by my nature…War torn in my own mind
    Left behind by my self…Now getting closer with every stride
    look, I’m no longer nothing but glorified cavemen
    Lost Bloodlust for carnage, hate and destruction
    And my heart rate fluctuates, thinking of the pain
    People feel under the hand of the strong again
    Weak become exploited, depressed, and oppressed
    Til the earth is a picture of meek unhappiness
    The natural instincts for Armageddon, war and peace
    Sky a smoke fog of loss and defeat……..

    …….Lost in my thoughts……
    .....Lost in the wind......
    Boom tick its Brix!

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

  2. #2
    Brix! Trahedy Siphon's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2004
    Location
    Manchester
    Age
    38
    Posts
    889
    Battle Record
    8-0
    hello?.....any feedbak?>..No one replies to my stuff anymore
    COME ON!!!!!! read my verse and tell me how depressed I
    am...lol...
    Boom tick its Brix!

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

  3. #3
    Free, As A Bird
    Join Date
    Sep 2003
    Location
    GB
    Age
    38
    Posts
    6,937
    This was pretty nice man...

    I hope to god that this is gona get some proper feed, not the noobish "It was good"...

    Anyway..

    U had Nice Multies/Internals in here..

    It seemed to me that it came fluently...

    Nothing seemed forced...

    Have u thought bout using it as an audio..??
    ArcBiggEZ

    Heavyweight Penis Crew

  4. #4
    Brix! Trahedy Siphon's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2004
    Location
    Manchester
    Age
    38
    Posts
    889
    Battle Record
    8-0
    yup...I'ma record it when my mates house is free
    Boom tick its Brix!

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

  5. #5
    Free, As A Bird
    Join Date
    Sep 2003
    Location
    GB
    Age
    38
    Posts
    6,937
    Hit me up with a link to the song when its done man...!!
    ArcBiggEZ

    Heavyweight Penis Crew

  6. #6
    Newbie
    Join Date
    Feb 2004
    Location
    Manchester
    Age
    37
    Posts
    25
    that was hott!! as EZ mentioned, it seemed fluent....like its what you feel inside....cant wait til its in an audio...hit me up with the link 2! keep it flowin!!!!!

    velocity
    'Check it,
    i grew up a fuckin scew up,
    got introduced to the game got an ounce and fuckin' blew up.'

Similar Threads

  1. Take 1 Pull.
    By Ntalek in forum The Studio
    Replies: 7
    Last Post: January 16th, 2008, 05:40 AM
  2. I Smell Pus$y- Who Tryna Get Fuked?
    By Enfamous in forum Closed Battles
    Replies: 9
    Last Post: April 1st, 2004, 11:30 PM
  3. Glorified Coin Tossing: TR and MethodZ
    By The Realist in forum Closed Battles
    Replies: 16
    Last Post: February 2nd, 2004, 03:41 AM
  4. Fuked up war
    By f-gee in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 15
    Last Post: March 28th, 2003, 11:20 AM

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •