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    Sights of a Blindman: Realisation

    Sights Of A Blindman

    Your views are worthless
    I dont need your help
    Just leave me be.....
    or listen


    Persistent propoganda for total lack of vision
    Resistant to my senses but hail to submission
    My indecision is missing, I still fail to listen
    Not seen as disabled, just sins put among the ridden
    I even fear them, see it stemmed from the taste
    My own dexterity was left & locked in one place
    Which was off the face, gone..beyond all doubt
    Begging to be included, but left cancelled out
    Thats what its about..relishing what you have now
    The cry of first born or your matramonial vow
    I ask the innocence how & why it decieved my sight
    Contemplate answers,believing none to be the right
    So I'm left sombre for longer, consistant w/ my views
    If vision could hire a muse then maybe I wouldnt lose
    Now I refuse to pay divedance..cataract forth hence
    My other feelings do nothing only to sit on the fence
    Cryout for lent..when will this starvation ever end?
    "Well that depends..on you embracing it as a friend
    Illusions apprehend the real views in which you seek
    Eat away every week, feeding on the lonely & weak
    Takes the smile from your cheeks..jubilation not won
    & if you think the pain is over..its only just begun"

    Even my thoughts are left sporadic..how do I follow?
    When there aint no tomorrow..for my eyes feel sorrow
    Self mutilation will be gone tomorrow..maybe..I hope
    For the sights of this blindman can no longer cope
    W/ attitudes that conflict & addict making me sick
    For I can predict..that I'm embedded to be a prick
    There goes the "Click"..finally..the realisation kicks in
    This sorry excuse for a man..will never see again


    Happy now?
    Reduce me more?
    theres nuttin to..
    reduce
    Last edited by comadose; March 16th, 2004 at 05:42 PM

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    I really got into it when i started thinking about the Sophocles ancient greek play Oedipus the King....

    it's about a man who discovers he has murdered his father and slept with his mother... so he tears his own eyes out in a tragic moment of self loathing...

    this has got that kind of emotion... the flow was a bit spotty in places due to syllables... but it could be spit properly... umm... i didn't feel the rhyme 'listen' and then 'bad men' but... ok...

    work on a little more line complexity but otherwise solid drop man...

    keep it up and check my work Heart and Mind (Ode to Cam)
    Hence Forward

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    Yea I know about Oedipus complex
    I did it psychology.
    He unconciously desired his mother
    & when he came bk to the kingdom he killed
    his father & slept w/ hois mother.
    Proves Freuds theory correct.
    But also conflicts w/ it.
    Thanx for feedbk
    pz

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    -Brix-=Crew Hooper...

    Anywho...This was a certainly nice piece...I know at one point I underestimated you..

    Now...I know I was wrong~~~~~

    I Haven't Been Nowhere..But..Can You See Where I'm Coming from...

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    lol cheers.
    I only hop when I've got a limp =-}
    I'm always underestimated!!!!!!!!!!!!
    & hated on.
    But whats a Brix to do?
    ah well

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    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119988

    here's the link to my ish... really appreciate a quick look...
    Hence Forward

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    So I guess you are the guy that IMed me asking for a topic.

    And I responded with Sights of a Blindman.

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    ^^Yeah it was for a topical battle w/ Sureal.
    But after I dropped my verse he closed it.
    Ah well

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    Top of the pile^^

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