it was good..but i need to make them come across more clear...maybe next week lol
but good job man
it was good..but i need to make them come across more clear...maybe next week lol
but good job man
Soft Focus
..Returns..
\/ote.. Stryk9 he had some realy good lines but so did Eclapt but S9 had alot more hard hitting punches..
pz.
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The clock Stryks 9 & crashes the kids imagination
He's a depressed youth pulling down our Nation
I would of left out pullin down our nation...would of flipped something on depression...
Compare my work to yours i'm over your head
People float in thoughts drowned in yours instead
the setup could of been the actaul punch if worded better..but it would have needed a witty setup to make it land..
Predictions granted your way but is it actually correct
Hence the fact at battlen..you suck at every aspect
kinda promising setup..the punch blew it though..
So if i'm good at one catagory thats a W. for Eclapt
Drop my verse first and you wont no how to react
hell no
Don't bother to write back people wont be amused
You could throw 1000 punches & I wouldn't be brused
bad way to say he's weak...
Pushing all the wrong buttons damn kid..c'mon
...ya whole verse is retarded..
like a hole sex session of lezbians with a strop on
strap on...ooo Jenna Haze oo....getting back to the line:No,lesbians are not retards for using strapons..well they are 'casue they should of called me instead but...nevermind.
Eclapt there wasn't much wit in your half punches half filler/brag lines...next time don't explain your verse,your verse should not need to be explained.If people don't understand it you're to blame for making it not so comprehensable.
Clapt is in the wrong forum, yeah your glass is half full
i can almost see your death ,cuz your oblivions shadow
no connection..oblivion shadow would of been good with shadowsedge not here...
topical turned bateler??yeah your a comfirmed gimmick
You only pull chicks working at poultry sperm clinics
poultry sperm clinic..eeewww...disconnected setup again..
concerned critics,accept easy when asked just to shoot ya
a bitch in your past life and your going back to the future
meh
your changing past attempts at art and that is laudable
did gods laughing, finally tell you that you blow at topicals?
decency..
you know at hospitals theres injuries and i fucking know this
you couldnt even use brain fluid with concentrated osmosis
medium
soft focus is garbage and getting fucked by my virility
no ones claping when they realize that your a liability
Stryk you just said you were gay..
Stry9 had a bit more to his verse he kind of concentrated on offending his opponent more than Eclapt...so Stryk gets the edging here
Vote Stryk 9
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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Eclapt - decent verse...you had a couple of nice punches....but your wording messed up your punches....Flow was nice...some personals in there but didnt hit hard because of the wording....Your closing meta was funny but coulda used better wording...but ur concepts were nice just need to word everything better....verse score - 7.8/10...
Stryk9 - Another decent verse....you had better wording than eclapt which made your punches more understandable....they hit harder then his...thats really all that took the battle here....cause everything else was prolly tied up....good spits by both....but ur punches hit harder....give it a 8.2/10....
Vote - Stryk9
This was okay, but...
He came harder
Vote: Stryk9
yea eclapt...u don't have to explain ur verse, it makes me think that you look at the whole board as a pile of retards...lol ur verse wasn't THAT complex...nothing good...not horrible..but not good...and the strap on line was the best in ur verse...which says alot about the level ur at...
Stryk...ur verse wasn't good either, but u came harder...had a lot more vocab and ur rhyming seemed a little more complex....nothing good here either, but atleast u made urself look kinda smart, and used personals...
vote- Stryk9
I.J.L.
The clock Stryks 9 & crashes the kids imagination
He's a depressed youth pulling down our Nation
^didn't flow right....so...it kinda lost its sting...
Compare my work to yours i'm over your head
People float in thoughts drowned in yours instead
^....thats not a bad thing...
Predictions granted your way but is it actually correct
Hence the fact at battlen..you suck at every aspect
^not bad.... best punch so far =)
So if i'm good at one catagory thats a W. for Eclapt
Drop my verse first and you wont no how to react
^thats filler....sorry to say =(
Don't bother to write back people wont be amused
You could throw 1000 punches & I wouldn't be brused
^spelled it wrong but i get it...too basic though..
Pushing all the wrong buttons damn kid..c'mon
...ya whole verse is retarded..
like a hole sex session of lezbians with a strop on
^..................................no..good try though..
Clapt is in the wrong forum, yeah your glass is half full
i can almost see your death ,cuz your oblivions shadow
^hmmmmmm ok not bad..alias stuff
topical turned bateler??yeah your a comfirmed gimmick
You only pull chicks working at poultry sperm clinics
^heheh um.......ok...good for comedy..
concerned critics,accept easy when asked just to shoot ya
a bitch in your past life and your going back to the future
^....think about that one for a sec.........no..
your changing past attempts at art and that is laudable
did gods laughing, finally tell you that you blow at topicals?
^......... ok
you know at hospitals theres injuries and i fucking know this
you couldnt even use brain fluid with concentrated osmosis
^......osmosis.................aight not too hard..
soft focus is garbage and getting fucked by my virility
no ones claping when they realize that your a liability
^..... um you started out alot better then you ended...
overall stryk took this by about 2 punches and the level of complexity was off this was a mismatch in my eyes pz.
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
yo LOL... 1st of all, it's stryk9, not stryke... LOL at you kids
but yea Stryk9 took this, actually came witty... hit a couple of times pretty hard, liked the verse as a whole. Eclapt, you shouldn't even be in this league honestly... this match was a giveaway
vote - Stryk9
I've beat demurgic and rapidfire..i should've beat this kid..i came back to elavate...i believe this is what the league is for....anyways..it is the net..lol...and i havent text battled in a long time and when i was actually elavating i left and stopped writting/and attemptong battles...so i'm just getting back into it...so blah...nets so serious these days...whoa
Soft Focus
..Returns..
Originally Posted by DeMiurgiC
about the back to the future line
i was aiming for like
he was a bitch then and hes going back that way in the future
i know it sucked but oh well
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Stryk9 wins by KO, closed.
Stryk9 (1-0)
Eclapt (0-1)
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