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    DATBOIP
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    Lightbulb Elevate

    I dont want to sound like garbage, writing is a pleasure
    one mans garbage, is another ones tressure.
    So as you read on, just to let you know
    my point will be flipped and twisted, so use your mind as a plough.
    break through my generic writing concept
    and you might know why if feel so upset.
    I keep seeing ya'll say "yo dude you need to 'Elevate'"
    but seems like yall cant find a lamer way, for yall to hate.
    If I took your advice and really wanted to elevate.
    Your slow elevator ride, is way too long for me to wait.
    I'd use the fuckin fire stairs, and beat you up to the top.
    Cut the fuckin pullie loose, and then listen to you drop.
    And when I say 'you drop', i dont mean as in your new reccord
    obviously, you cant imagine the elevator being towed out, by the wrecker.
    Most of yall like to kill people's rap dream
    tho you never really think of how much it might mean
    to the folks that put so much effort, to come up with their entire scene
    it could of taken months for me to write this
    but i could be lying, you know ignorance is bliss.
    so before you go judging me and telling me that i suck
    go over my shit twice, "elevate" your comments, cuz i dont give a fuck!
    Last edited by DATBOIP; October 3rd, 2005 at 04:10 AM Reason: completely mispelled a few words. lol

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    DATBOIP
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    and cause we live in a world of rules
    I commented on the following

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=234933
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=3237482

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    Boogey Man
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    that shit was tight man

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    DATBOIP
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    Quote Originally Posted by Boogey Man
    that shit was tight man
    Nah mannn...
    your tight yo...
    preciate tha props...
    atl baby!
    :word:

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    Boogey Man
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    any time my nigga

  6. #6
    DATBOIP
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    uppin for comments.
    preciate it.

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    Bout time ya give the haterz back what they give you, Carry on with the writing, i reckon it's propa, i think ya already elevated, time people learned to like what they hated. Keep it comin' aight
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
    TNL

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    DATBOIP
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    fa sho man, preciate that props. :hail:
    and the elevated comment...
    i took the stairs...

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    i know exactly what your talking bout dawg, lotta peolple talk shit to me as well over the years as well .. they probally cant help anyone to do anything and are probaly jealous and would rather you give up...your own style is your own fuck what anyone says this is a good drop right here.. and shows much potential.. could do with adding some multies in maybe to give it sum flavour


    nice ending yeak

    FUCK EM

    up
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  10. #10
    DATBOIP
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    das wasup
    preciate ya helpin thoughts
    will take heed in what you say
    always room for impovement
    fa sho.

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    DATBOIP
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    uppin fo your kindly given "elevated" comments and thoughts
    fa sho.

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    Nice rhyme like i said, me and u can collaberate later down the line, carry on spittin'
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
    TNL

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    Keep om's comin'
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
    TNL

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    DATBOIP
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    uppin for comments...

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    Quote Originally Posted by DATBOIP
    I dont want to sound like garbage, writing is a pleasure
    one mans garbage, is another ones tressure
    word yo

    nice original topic
    flow was good too

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=237476
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    this is perhaps the gayest thread...ALIVE....

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