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    legend? shit must be rigged as fuck cuz no way u were chosen
    no one remembers ur accomplishments, so u had to edit ur own in
    so stop boasting so much bitch your rep is weak as hell
    no need to say you're a self made man.. trust me we can tell
    you're all out of concepts, so it's time u just departed bitch
    u had to rewrite for Bar this season just to have a decent part in it
    stop your crying and bitching pussy I'm sick of you faking fame
    we only roll out the red carpet so ur bleeding won't make a stain
    the Future left your crew and now u pussies getting smashed
    u have Alzheimer's now in chat always reminiscing in the past
    u need a kicking in the ass, stop crying and bitching son
    you're so scared of my bars you pm me to drop different ones
    when your fit's are done, realize u only drop some subpar lines
    the rest is so played voters swear they're redirected to the archives
    seriously u act like such a girl. the bitch of all the bitches
    half the league that knows ur a Brit has no idea ur from Britain
    you're poor and retarded. that can't be denied by you either
    cuz everytime I call u Lower Class u cry for two reasons
    get money? you're only hope is hopeless so me and Token chuckle
    only time com hit's the lottery he leaves the store with broken knuckles
    ur girl's a sloppy hair dresser, her reputation makes many scared
    but when I say she gave me bedhead, just know I didn't have any hair
    this homo isn't actually an alcoholic, watch me rip 'em in half
    when he says he has a cock tail, he really means a dick in his ass
    bitch you're soft as fuck, quit acting like a boss you're not
    you only have a darkside cuz we were playing shot for shot
    com's facin death. he's fallen off now just another dominated vet
    honestly, on the real u haven't had a single punch nominated yet

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    fuck all that shit. latest is '06 so let me say it for u bitch
    Final Resume.. is just u admitting that u won't be adding more to it
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    Re: Dios (6-2) vs. Com (5-3)

    blah blah blah

    I'll choke you after you've passed out, you can't mask its ya last bout
    So meet the second bitch in a month who's life passed from Tapout
    It's time I tore through this fool, bitch to the core n' ya through
    And If this fag ever showed true grit he'd probably flawless you too
    Bitch it's April you're a fool, and my avys worth just increases...
    ...when I put ya in a Splinter a sling and Shredder shit verse to pieces
    I'll stamp ya skull till I pop it n' run and jump on the socket
    So when you give a girl the eye, she's just gonna vomit and drop it
    You can't stop it, dirty bastard he's into scat on his bed
    I told this prick he'd get shit on and he brought a cup to the thread
    This fucker is dead and yo look, a hater's cliqued with a faker
    Coz this battle's tongue in cheek, but can't you and chrit do that later?
    Fates stuck, you can't stop it, wasted a chance to help run shit
    Bitch we even had an arrangement.. till I smashed your face with the trumpet
    And his I.D.'s on display but its just a fucking nerd looking queer
    Well at least Bert from Sesame Street can finally buy Ernie some beer
    Bitch we all know you're a metro and changing ya verse up's a nono
    Coz no matter how you dress it up it'll always come across homo
    This prick must have a mental block, his brain is literally snowed in..
    ...or else why tell people I reworded a verse that 10-0 ko'ed him?
    Bitch you're a stalker don't front me, dude's stressed from his monthly
    The only reason you give no extension is coz they've all left the country
    And I'd see this bitch muted but the little poor boy was excluded
    As a kid he got batteries for christmas... with no toys included
    Well I'll tell you now kid, ya rhymes suck.. easy to see when ya time's up..
    ..when the first hand's on ya neck and the second hand's got ya dial fucked
    While I don't care about this puff's swag stealing mine is enough, fag
    There's TWO guys pissed at ya colour choice the way ya making blue look bad
    You can't touch me so stop, infact why even drop in the thread?
    I'm gonna have Nas on the phone thankin me for proving Hip Hop is dead

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    Re: Dios (6-2) vs. Com (5-3)

    stop your crying and bitching pussy I'm sick of you faking fame
    we only roll out the red carpet so ur bleeding won't make a stain
    nice flip
    seriously u act like such a girl. the bitch of all the bitches
    half the league that knows ur a Brit has no idea ur from Britain
    imo shoulda said 'thinks' insteads of 'knows' but still solid tho
    bitch you're soft as fuck, quit acting like a boss you're not
    you only have a darkside cuz we were playing shot for shot
    made me chuckle.
    fuck all that shit. latest is '06 so let me say it for u bitch
    Final Resume.. is just u admitting that u won't be adding more to it

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    I'll stamp ya skull till I pop it n' run and jump on the socket
    So when you give a girl the eye, she's just gonna vomit and drop it
    You can't stop it, dirty bastard he's into scat on his bed
    I told this prick he'd get shit on and he brought a cup to the thread
    Fates stuck, you can't stop it, wasted a chance to help run shit
    Bitch we even had an arrangement.. till I smashed your face with the trumpet
    may've seen it before but still seems fresh
    This prick must have a mental block, his brain is literally snowed in..
    ...or else why tell people I reworded a verse that 10-0 ko'ed him?
    Bitch you're a stalker don't front me, dude's stressed from his monthly
    The only reason you give no extension is coz they've all left the country
    And I'd see this bitch muted but the little poor boy was excluded
    As a kid he got batteries for christmas... with no toys included
    just funny lol

    Dios - couple played bars. besides that, the rest was pretty solid. the misses were for the most part decent. just that i didnt see many punches that like blew me outta my chair if u know what i mean. good drop tho

    Com - just umm, kinda destroyed this battle lol dont think there was really anything i didn't like. guess we pissed em off w/ that allegation lol

    v/ Com
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    Re: Dios (6-2) vs. Com (5-3)

    legend? shit must be rigged as fuck cuz no way u were chosen
    no one remembers ur accomplishments, so u had to edit ur own in
    stop your crying and bitching pussy I'm sick of you faking fame
    we only roll out the red carpet so ur bleeding won't make a stain
    get money? you're only hope is hopeless so me and Token chuckle
    only time com hit's the lottery he leaves the store with broken knuckles

    vs.

    Fates stuck, you can't stop it, wasted a chance to help run shit
    Bitch we even had an arrangement.. till I smashed your face with the trumpet
    This prick must have a mental block, his brain is literally snowed in..
    ...or else why tell people I reworded a verse that 10-0 ko'ed him?
    Bitch you're a stalker don't front me, dude's stressed from his monthly
    The only reason you give no extension is coz they've all left the country

    this was close as fuck.. i mean, really - really close. both of ya are even in quotes imo, and both of ya came extremely dope.. i mean, there was certain parts where yall fell off a lil bit, but for the most part yall were consistent. the deciding factor for me is the amount of not so good punches.. and dios had more of them then com. regardless.. dope drop from both of you.

    vote - com

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    stop your crying and bitching pussy I'm sick of you faking fame
    we only roll out the red carpet so ur bleeding won't make a stain
    seriously u act like such a girl. the bitch of all the bitches
    half the league that knows ur a Brit has no idea ur from Britain
    ur girl's a sloppy hair dresser, her reputation makes many scared
    but when I say she gave me bedhead, just know I didn't have any hair

    vs

    It's time I tore through this fool, bitch to the core n' ya through
    And If this fag ever showed true grit he'd probably flawless you too
    This fucker is dead and yo look, a hater's cliqued with a faker
    Coz this battle's tongue in cheek, but can't you and chrit do that later?
    Fates stuck, you can't stop it, wasted a chance to help run shit
    Bitch we even had an arrangement.. till I smashed your face with the trumpet
    This prick must have a mental block, his brain is literally snowed in..
    ...or else why tell people I reworded a verse that 10-0 ko'ed him?
    And I'd see this bitch muted but the little poor boy was excluded
    As a kid he got batteries for christmas... with no toys included
    While I don't care about this puff's swag stealing mine is enough, fag
    There's TWO guys pissed at ya colour choice the way ya making blue look bad


    hm. def disappointed in dao. he's been dropping good lately but this week was a major backstep. i wasnt feeling the concepts or execution to be honest. the verse on a whole just came off bland to me. com came with alot of nice witty shit. lines that hit hard too, executed cleanly. all in all i think com took this one in every category.

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    Re: Dios (6-2) vs. Com (5-3)

    Quote Originally Posted by COM View Post

    I'll choke you after you've passed out, you can't mask its ya last bout
    So meet the second bitch in a month who's life passed from Tapout

    Pretty dope. Not sure if most people will get this. In my honest opinion, that'd be a good way to go out.. death my nice car.

    It's time I tore through this fool, bitch to the core n' ya through
    And If this fag ever showed true grit he'd probably flawless you too

    I'm not really sure where this was going. i see the misdirection, & i'm thinking "flawless" as in mortal kombat victories.. i may be way off.. but that's what im seeing. I just don't get the punch.

    Bitch it's April you're a fool, and my avys worth just increases...
    ...when I put ya in a Splinter a sling and Shredder shit verse to pieces

    cool concept. I like the flip. I'm not to sure how relevant the word play is though. It doesn't really add much other than to call him a girl. Shred her. ehh.. decent punch, cool line.

    I'll stamp ya skull till I pop it n' run and jump on the socket
    So when you give a girl the eye, she's just gonna vomit and drop it

    lol.. that's naaasty. ok punch, me likes.

    You can't stop it, dirty bastard he's into scat on his bed
    I told this prick he'd get shit on and he brought a cup to the thread

    Probably the best 2 girls 1 cup flip. nasty. good punch. I think you just offered to... disgusting..

    This fucker is dead and yo look, a hater's cliqued with a faker
    Coz this battle's tongue in cheek, but can't you and chrit do that later?

    ok. I've seen the "tongue n' cheek" idiom flipped a couple different ways. I liked the punch and wording here.

    Fates stuck, you can't stop it, wasted a chance to help run shit
    Bitch we even had an arrangement.. till I smashed your face with the trumpet

    arrangement? I think there's a flip there. I'm not sure. I think you're saying "musical arrangement" I hardly ever see the word in that context. cool punch

    And his I.D.'s on display but its just a fucking nerd looking queer
    Well at least Bert from Sesame Street can finally buy Ernie some beer

    lol.. very similar looking.. cool line

    Bitch we all know you're a metro and changing ya verse up's a nono
    Coz no matter how you dress it up it'll always come across homo

    a bit too simple.

    This prick must have a mental block, his brain is literally snowed in..
    ...or else why tell people I reworded a verse that 10-0 ko'ed him?

    lol.. clever personal.

    Bitch you're a stalker don't front me, dude's stressed from his monthly
    The only reason you give no extension is coz they've all left the country

    hmm. I don't quite get this line.

    And I'd see this bitch muted but the little poor boy was excluded
    As a kid he got batteries for christmas... with no toys included

    used up line. A bit to simply worded

    Well I'll tell you now kid, ya rhymes suck.. easy to see when ya time's up..
    ..when the first hand's on ya neck and the second hand's got ya dial fucked

    I like the wording and concept. check this out son! "I got hands around your neck like flavor flave's clock.." BIZNATCH!

    While I don't care about this puff's swag stealing mine is enough, fag
    There's TWO guys pissed at ya colour choice the way ya making blue look bad

    I'm surprised that you're the first one to use this personal in 2 weeks of him having that. good flip.

    You can't touch me so stop, infact why even drop in the thread?
    I'm gonna have Nas on the phone thankin me for proving Hip Hop is dead

    old concept. Wording's a bit fresher tho
    Vs.

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    legend? shit must be rigged as fuck cuz no way u were chosen
    no one remembers ur accomplishments, so u had to edit ur own in

    there's not much validity to the personal. decent punch tho

    so stop boasting so much bitch your rep is weak as hell
    no need to say you're a self made man.. trust me we can tell

    similar flip on the same personal? punch isn't so harsh

    you're all out of concepts, so it's time u just departed bitch
    u had to rewrite for Bar this season just to have a decent part in it

    funny. cool line

    stop your crying and bitching pussy I'm sick of you faking fame
    we only roll out the red carpet so ur bleeding won't make a stain

    nice punch, i like the concept

    the Future left your crew and now u pussies getting smashed
    u have Alzheimer's now in chat always reminiscing in the past

    ehh, wording's a bit off. ok concept

    u need a kicking in the ass, stop crying and bitching son
    you're so scared of my bars you pm me to drop different ones

    don't know if that's true.. but either way.. it's just a decent line.

    when your fit's are done, realize u only drop some subpar lines
    the rest is so played voters swear they're redirected to the archives

    seen many similar "archive" flips. the wording here isn't any better

    seriously u act like such a girl. the bitch of all the bitches
    half the league that knows ur a Brit has no idea ur from Britain

    ok. pretty funny. a little wit, i like it.

    you're poor and retarded. that can't be denied by you either
    cuz everytime I call u Lower Class u cry for two reasons

    uhh.. doesn't rhyme first off. secondly, i don't get the punch

    get money? you're only hope is hopeless so me and Token chuckle
    only time com hit's the lottery he leaves the store with broken knuckles

    I think that's way to simple. "hit/punch". decent concept tho

    ur girl's a sloppy hair dresser, her reputation makes many scared
    but when I say she gave me bedhead, just know I didn't have any hair

    lol.. clever wordplay. punch was decent

    this homo isn't actually an alcoholic, watch me rip 'em in half
    when he says he has a cock tail, he really means a dick in his ass

    damn.. i swear i said this to some one a week ago or something.. wtf.. coincidence probably.. good punch and concept

    bitch you're soft as fuck, quit acting like a boss you're not
    you only have a darkside cuz we were playing shot for shot

    i don't really get this concept.. not sure what the "dark side" flip is all about.

    com's facin death. he's fallen off now just another dominated vet
    honestly, on the real u haven't had a single punch nominated yet

    simple wording, statement, good personal.

    fuck all that shit. latest is '06 so let me say it for u bitch
    Final Resume.. is just u admitting that u won't be adding more to it

    decent flip.. ok personal. too many flips on his "accomplishments" I think.

    Com:
    witty verse. consistent and full of cool concepts. I figured you to come with a real angry style this week, ya didn't. Ya just came with good punchlines. lol. cool drop

    Fav lines -
    I'll choke you after you've passed out, you can't mask its ya last bout
    So meet the second bitch in a month who's life passed from Tapout
    You can't stop it, dirty bastard he's into scat on his bed
    I told this prick he'd get shit on and he brought a cup to the thread
    And his I.D.'s on display but its just a fucking nerd looking queer
    Well at least Bert from Sesame Street can finally buy Ernie some beer
    This prick must have a mental block, his brain is literally snowed in..
    ...or else why tell people I reworded a verse that 10-0 ko'ed him?

    Dios: solid verse. only a few played/missed lines. couple creative word plays as well. I think a few of your bars REALLY missed, and a few were gems. good drop as well.

    fav lines -
    you're all out of concepts, so it's time u just departed bitch
    u had to rewrite for Bar this season just to have a decent part in it
    stop your crying and bitching pussy I'm sick of you faking fame
    we only roll out the red carpet so ur bleeding won't make a stain
    this homo isn't actually an alcoholic, watch me rip 'em in half
    when he says he has a cock tail, he really means a dick in his ass

    over all: Nice battle, you both were pretty creative and dropped some quotable. I have Com being more consistent, and that's my decision.

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    legend? shit must be rigged as fuck cuz no way u were chosen
    no one remembers ur accomplishments, so u had to edit ur own in
    EHH
    so stop boasting so much bitch your rep is weak as hell
    no need to say you're a self made man.. trust me we can tell
    O.K
    you're all out of concepts, so it's time u just departed bitch
    u had to rewrite for Bar this season just to have a decent part in it
    O.K
    stop your crying and bitching pussy I'm sick of you faking fame
    we only roll out the red carpet so ur bleeding won't make a stain
    NOPE
    the Future left your crew and now u pussies getting smashed
    u have Alzheimer's now in chat always reminiscing in the past
    NAHH
    u need a kicking in the ass, stop crying and bitching son
    you're so scared of my bars you pm me to drop different ones
    NICE PERSONAL BUT NOT REALLY A HEAVY HITTIN PUNCH
    when your fit's are done, realize u only drop some subpar lines
    the rest is so played voters swear they're redirected to the archives
    EHH
    seriously u act like such a girl. the bitch of all the bitches
    half the league that knows ur a Brit has no idea ur from Britain
    EHH
    you're poor and retarded. that can't be denied by you either
    cuz everytime I call u Lower Class u cry for two reasons
    EHH-O.K
    get money? you're only hope is hopeless so me and Token chuckle
    only time com hit's the lottery he leaves the store with broken knuckles
    O.K
    ur girl's a sloppy hair dresser, her reputation makes many scared
    but when I say she gave me bedhead, just know I didn't have any hair
    NICE
    this homo isn't actually an alcoholic, watch me rip 'em in half
    when he says he has a cock tail, he really means a dick in his ass
    KINDA FL'ISH NAHH
    bitch you're soft as fuck, quit acting like a boss you're not
    you only have a darkside cuz we were playing shot for shot
    EHH
    com's facin death. he's fallen off now just another dominated vet
    honestly, on the real u haven't had a single punch nominated yet
    NOT REALLY FEELING THIS

    WASN;T REALLY FEELING YOUR VERSE, I FELT YOU KINDA HAD A LOT OF INFORMATION ON HIM BUT YOU FORCED YOUR BARS TO MUCH, AND THEY CAME OFF LIKE TRIED TO HARD, WHICH TOOK AWAY FROM YOUR PUNCH, YOU HAD SOME O.K BARS, BUT MORE WEAK ONES

    VS.

    I'll choke you after you've passed out, you can't mask its ya last bout
    So meet the second bitch in a month who's life passed from Tapout
    NICE
    It's time I tore through this fool, bitch to the core n' ya through
    And If this fag ever showed true grit he'd probably flawless you too
    O.K
    Bitch it's April you're a fool, and my avys worth just increases...
    ...when I put ya in a Splinter a sling and Shredder shit verse to pieces
    EHHH I LIKE THE CONCEPT THE WORDING IS EHH
    I'll stamp ya skull till I pop it n' run and jump on the socket
    So when you give a girl the eye, she's just gonna vomit and drop it
    ITS O.K BUT IM NOT FEELING IT
    You can't stop it, dirty bastard he's into scat on his bed
    I told this prick he'd get shit on and he brought a cup to the thread
    WISH YOU MENTION TWO GIRLS ONE CUP IN YOUR SET UP SO IT WOULD OF BEEN BETTER OVERALL THIS BAR IS EHH-O.K
    This fucker is dead and yo look, a hater's cliqued with a faker
    Coz this battle's tongue in cheek, but can't you and chrit do that later?
    LAST WEEK MARIAH DID A TONGUEANDCHEEK BAR COMPLELETY DIFFERENT BUT THIS ONE MADE ME LAUGH,AND WAS BETTER TOO. IGHHT PUNCH
    Fates stuck, you can't stop it, wasted a chance to help run shit
    Bitch we even had an arrangement.. till I smashed your face with the trumpet
    NAHHH
    And his I.D.'s on display but its just a fucking nerd looking queer
    Well at least Bert from Sesame Street can finally buy Ernie some beer
    LOLLOLOLOLOLOL
    Bitch we all know you're a metro and changing ya verse up's a nono
    Coz no matter how you dress it up it'll always come across homo
    IGHT
    This prick must have a mental block, his brain is literally snowed in..
    ...or else why tell people I reworded a verse that 10-0 ko'ed him?
    EHHH
    Bitch you're a stalker don't front me, dude's stressed from his monthly
    The only reason you give no extension is coz they've all left the country
    EHHH
    And I'd see this bitch muted but the little poor boy was excluded
    As a kid he got batteries for christmas... with no toys included
    LOLOLOL
    Well I'll tell you now kid, ya rhymes suck.. easy to see when ya time's up..
    ..when the first hand's on ya neck and the second hand's got ya dial fucked
    IGHT
    While I don't care about this puff's swag stealing mine is enough, fag
    There's TWO guys pissed at ya colour choice the way ya making blue look bad
    EHH
    You can't touch me so stop, infact why even drop in the thread?
    I'm gonna have Nas on the phone thankin me for proving Hip Hop is dead
    EHHH


    V/COM

    SOME OF YOUR BARS I WEREN'T FEELING BUT YOUR VERSE WAS MORE ENJOYABLE TO READ AND HAD SOME STANDOUT BARS.

    O.K BATTLE BUT I FELT COMS VERSE WAS MORE HARD HITTIN AND EFFECTIVE.

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    Re: Dios (6-2) vs. Com (5-3)

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    Re: Dios (6-2) vs. Com (5-3)

    stop your crying and bitching pussy I'm sick of you faking fame
    we only roll out the red carpet so ur bleeding won't make a stain
    seriously u act like such a girl. the bitch of all the bitches
    half the league that knows ur a Brit has no idea ur from Britain
    ur girl's a sloppy hair dresser, her reputation makes many scared
    but when I say she gave me bedhead, just know I didn't have any hair

    vs.

    It's time I tore through this fool, bitch to the core n' ya through
    And If this fag ever showed true grit he'd probably flawless you too
    This fucker is dead and yo look, a hater's cliqued with a faker
    Coz this battle's tongue in cheek, but can't you and chrit do that later?
    Fates stuck, you can't stop it, wasted a chance to help run shit
    Bitch we even had an arrangement.. till I smashed your face with the trumpet
    And I'd see this bitch muted but the little poor boy was excluded
    As a kid he got batteries for christmas... with no toys included
    While I don't care about this puff's swag stealing mine is enough, fag
    There's TWO guys pissed at ya colour choice the way ya making blue look bad

    This was pretty good man. I'm surprised by you both, I mean, I'm obviously new, but I was still impressed. Dios, some of your concepts were good, but not quotable because they were worded weird or with too much simplicity. COM, you're good man, I could tell you're a UK head, lmao @ colour, but word buddy, your hits were solid, I only didn't quote some because I feel they didn't hit like the rest of your verse, good shit. Nice match folks.

    v/COM

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    Re: Dios (6-2) vs. Com (5-3)

    legend? shit must be rigged as fuck cuz no way u were chosen
    no one remembers ur accomplishments, so u had to edit ur own in
    aiight coo..
    so stop boasting so much bitch your rep is weak as hell
    no need to say you're a self made man.. trust me we can tell
    heh..
    you're all out of concepts, so it's time u just departed bitch
    u had to rewrite for Bar this season just to have a decent part in it
    not sure I liked this one..
    stop your crying and bitching pussy I'm sick of you faking fame
    we only roll out the red carpet so ur bleeding won't make a stain
    lol, dope.
    the Future left your crew and now u pussies getting smashed
    u have Alzheimer's now in chat always reminiscing in the past
    eh..
    u need a kicking in the ass, stop crying and bitching son
    you're so scared of my bars you pm me to drop different ones
    lol, coo..
    when your fit's are done, realize u only drop some subpar lines
    the rest is so played voters swear they're redirected to the archives
    aight
    seriously u act like such a girl. the bitch of all the bitches
    half the league that knows ur a Brit has no idea ur from Britain
    nice hit.. really dope.
    you're poor and retarded. that can't be denied by you either
    cuz everytime I call u Lower Class u cry for two reasons
    aiight...
    get money? you're only hope is hopeless so me and Token chuckle
    only time com hit's the lottery he leaves the store with broken knuckles
    nice..
    ur girl's a sloppy hair dresser, her reputation makes many scared
    but when I say she gave me bedhead, just know I didn't have any hair
    aiight-ish...
    this homo isn't actually an alcoholic, watch me rip 'em in half
    when he says he has a cock tail, he really means a dick in his ass
    not bad..
    bitch you're soft as fuck, quit acting like a boss you're not
    you only have a darkside cuz we were playing shot for shot
    eh..
    com's facin death. he's fallen off now just another dominated vet
    honestly, on the real u haven't had a single punch nominated yet
    okay
    fuck all that shit. latest is '06 so let me say it for u bitch
    Final Resume.. is just u admitting that u won't be adding more to it
    aiight

    vs

    I'll choke you after you've passed out, you can't mask its ya last bout
    So meet the second bitch in a month who's life passed from Tapout
    eh..
    It's time I tore through this fool, bitch to the core n' ya through
    And If this fag ever showed true grit he'd probably flawless you too
    dope..
    Bitch it's April you're a fool, and my avys worth just increases...
    ...when I put ya in a Splinter a sling and Shredder shit verse to pieces
    okay-ish.. weird usage of a ninja turtle theme tho
    I'll stamp ya skull till I pop it n' run and jump on the socket
    So when you give a girl the eye, she's just gonna vomit and drop it
    lol
    You can't stop it, dirty bastard he's into scat on his bed
    I told this prick he'd get shit on and he brought a cup to the thread
    lmao..
    This fucker is dead and yo look, a hater's cliqued with a faker
    Coz this battle's tongue in cheek, but can't you and chrit do that later?
    lol, funny..
    Fates stuck, you can't stop it, wasted a chance to help run shit
    Bitch we even had an arrangement.. till I smashed your face with the trumpet
    dope..
    And his I.D.'s on display but its just a fucking nerd looking queer
    Well at least Bert from Sesame Street can finally buy Ernie some beer
    aiight coo..
    Bitch we all know you're a metro and changing ya verse up's a nono
    Coz no matter how you dress it up it'll always come across homo
    not bad..
    This prick must have a mental block, his brain is literally snowed in..
    ...or else why tell people I reworded a verse that 10-0 ko'ed him?
    aiight-ish..
    Bitch you're a stalker don't front me, dude's stressed from his monthly
    The only reason you give no extension is coz they've all left the country
    lol.. coo..
    And I'd see this bitch muted but the little poor boy was excluded
    As a kid he got batteries for christmas... with no toys included
    lolol.. liked this..
    Well I'll tell you now kid, ya rhymes suck.. easy to see when ya time's up..
    ..when the first hand's on ya neck and the second hand's got ya dial fucked
    okay
    While I don't care about this puff's swag stealing mine is enough, fag
    There's TWO guys pissed at ya colour choice the way ya making blue look bad
    lol..
    You can't touch me so stop, infact why even drop in the thread?
    I'm gonna have Nas on the phone thankin me for proving Hip Hop is dead
    I used this almost identically on him.. lol



    pretty dope battle.. a lot of fresh shit from both sides...
    com i think edged it tho.. bit harsher



    vote COM

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    Re: Dios (6-2) vs. Com (5-3)

    legend? shit must be rigged as fuck cuz no way u were chosen
    no one remembers ur accomplishments, so u had to edit ur own in
    decent opener, good personal, punch was ok

    so stop boasting so much bitch your rep is weak as hell
    no need to say you're a self made man.. trust me we can tell
    this one didnt do it for me, but the concept was coo...

    you're all out of concepts, so it's time u just departed bitch
    u had to rewrite for Bar this season just to have a decent part in it
    this was better, nice punch, shaky wording tho

    stop your crying and bitching pussy I'm sick of you faking fame
    we only roll out the red carpet so ur bleeding won't make a stain
    i liked this one too, pretty dope punch line

    the Future left your crew and now u pussies getting smashed
    u have Alzheimer's now in chat always reminiscing in the past
    not a hard punch, this was just ok

    u need a kicking in the ass, stop crying and bitching son
    you're so scared of my bars you pm me to drop different ones
    wording was better, concept was kinda blah, just ok

    when your fit's are done, realize u only drop some subpar lines
    the rest is so played voters swear they're redirected to the archives
    again concept was kinda blah for me on this one man

    seriously u act like such a girl. the bitch of all the bitches
    half the league that knows ur a Brit has no idea ur from Britain
    this one actually made me laugh, maybe its just me. i liked this one

    you're poor and retarded. that can't be denied by you either
    cuz everytime I call u Lower Class u cry for two reasons
    another laugh, i had to read it twice, but i get it, nice punch

    get money? you're only hope is hopeless so me and Token chuckle
    only time com hit's the lottery he leaves the store with broken knuckles
    i could kinda see the punchline coming, but i still liked it

    ur girl's a sloppy hair dresser, her reputation makes many scared
    but when I say she gave me bedhead, just know I didn't have any hair
    this coulda been better, still a decent punch though

    this homo isn't actually an alcoholic, watch me rip 'em in half
    when he says he has a cock tail, he really means a dick in his ass
    lol this might be my favorite from u so far

    bitch you're soft as fuck, quit acting like a boss you're not
    you only have a darkside cuz we were playing shot for shot
    nah, didnt do it for me here

    com's facin death. he's fallen off now just another dominated vet
    honestly, on the real u haven't had a single punch nominated yet
    another decent personal, i am a fan of personals, this was ok

    overall not a bad verse, some inconsistencies, but u managed to string together a few nice punches in a row and those are the one that stood out for me


    I'll choke you after you've passed out, you can't mask its ya last bout
    So meet the second bitch in a month who's life passed from Tapout
    lol, funny opener, pretty good start Com.

    It's time I tore through this fool, bitch to the core n' ya through
    And If this fag ever showed true grit he'd probably flawless you too
    thats two in a row, wording was on point and punch was solid

    Bitch it's April you're a fool, and my avys worth just increases...
    ...when I put ya in a Splinter a sling and Shredder shit verse to pieces
    this one was kind of a stretch, i see where u were going, but didnt quite hit for me

    I'll stamp ya skull till I pop it n' run and jump on the socket
    So when you give a girl the eye, she's just gonna vomit and drop it
    wording helped this punch, this was cool

    You can't stop it, dirty bastard he's into scat on his bed
    I told this prick he'd get shit on and he brought a cup to the thread
    nah, didnt like this one, i get it, but seemed knda forced to me

    This fucker is dead and yo look, a hater's cliqued with a faker
    Coz this battle's tongue in cheek, but can't you and chrit do that later?
    lol, nice way to bounce back with this one

    Fates stuck, you can't stop it, wasted a chance to help run shit
    Bitch we even had an arrangement.. till I smashed your face with the trumpet
    decent punch, not that hard hitting

    And his I.D.'s on display but its just a fucking nerd looking queer
    Well at least Bert from Sesame Street can finally buy Ernie some beer
    decent personal, concept was kinda blah for me tho

    Bitch we all know you're a metro and changing ya verse up's a nono
    Coz no matter how you dress it up it'll always come across homo
    ok i guess, not one of my favorites

    This prick must have a mental block, his brain is literally snowed in..
    ...or else why tell people I reworded a verse that 10-0 ko'ed him?
    personals are always good if done right, this was just ok for me

    Bitch you're a stalker don't front me, dude's stressed from his monthly
    The only reason you give no extension is coz they've all left the country
    this was coo. pretty fresh concept, nice setup and punch

    And I'd see this bitch muted but the little poor boy was excluded
    As a kid he got batteries for christmas... with no toys included
    lol, kinda funny... wording coulda been a tad better tho'

    Well I'll tell you now kid, ya rhymes suck.. easy to see when ya time's up..
    ..when the first hand's on ya neck and the second hand's got ya dial fucked
    kinda blah for me dawg, sorry

    While I don't care about this puff's swag stealing mine is enough, fag
    There's TWO guys pissed at ya colour choice the way ya making blue look bad
    lol, got a chuckle outta this one

    You can't touch me so stop, infact why even drop in the thread?
    I'm gonna have Nas on the phone thankin me for proving Hip Hop is dead
    closer coulda been better, i see where u were going, but didnt hit hard enuff for me

    overall, u had a few low moments, but for the most part was fresh and consistent throughout the verse

    v/Com

    I liked both verses but i felt com was more original and had better wording that made his punched shine, I am big on wording and in every battle i vote one, the guy with the better wording will prolly get my vote. the freshest concepts aint shit without good wording...
    Props to both


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    Re: Dios (6-2) vs. Com (5-3)

    Com wins (6-3)
    Dios loses (6-3)

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