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Hotdog
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I’ll melt Hotdog's dogs till he’s just skin and bones
Rob you of those till you just a ghost that roams through internet posts
Let a blade float across your chin,
Give you a second grin and another hole for me to stick my dick in
Kentucky Fry this Chicken with his ovaries missin so he can fuck with no condom and still get no children
Why do 'shemales' battle anyway? Aren’t they afraid they’ll break a nail?
Get behind your tail and leave a trail of blood drippin after clit rippin
Have my dick spittin and give you a facial wet,
Enough to get paid at sites that buy interracial sex
I’m takin bets to make money off you like whore cheques given to pimps in corvettes
Strangle you with your right breast
Tied around your white neck and cave your head in with the left stretched
Hotdog…shit I just spit in that,
Bitch worse than cops banging my door lookin for the drugs I stashed
I fucked him up so bad, these freaks are gonna print this clash and beat their dicks to that
This ain’t a suitable place for faggots so I’m kickin you out
“Screamin 187 with my dick in yo mouth”
yo you beat me once it aint gonna happen twice
ima chew u up, spit u out like u made out of rice
you bitches can fight when its 3 on 1
but when its 1 on 1 u better make a run
ima make you scream my name while im destroying ur brain
i aint playing no more fucking games
all the motherfuckers that beat me
ima set u up in flames
i wasnt a killer until u pushed me
i had to kill ya bastardz
to prove that i aint no pussy
its like tha NBA with my guns
gotta use the cuppers or heat
after a short time u'll b laying in tha creek
or burned in tha streets
when u motherfuckers beat me up
that wuz tha wrong choice
now tha whole untouchable recordz
is bustin on u boys
Bit Apathy. Faggggoooo.
-Bruklor
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Flow:hotdog
Punches:hotdog
Creativity, Vocab:hotdog
Overall-hotdog
penskills u really need 2 elavate and flow more and u both need 2 come harder pen if u came a little more harder and flowed more this vote would be yours
good job hotdog
kings overview
flow- hd
structure- skillz
creativity- skillz
personals- skillz
multis- ???
punches- skillz
vote: Penskills
could u honestly hit up these ones plz...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...9&pagenumber=2
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105273
this one gos to penskills
hotdog didnt really seem to have any good punches
penskills maybe coulda hit harder with some of his line too but he did enuff to do this guy in this battle
vote: penskills
return the favor and vote on the battles in my sig
hotdog was some more of the top of the dome freestyle, not typed, retyped reviewed then printed style. this win goes to the dawg
Ja'e Roc Entertainment 2004
hmmm... yeah this one has got to go to penskills
didn't think either one of you came hard at all... pretty weak battle
wasn't felling very much from either... but both had good flow... weak punches... well HD didn't have really any punches... structure was real iffy... not too tight... yadi besides that... i'mma go with PS... he had some punches that were in lines (LOL) ... both elevate...
Vote-Penskills
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penskills killed him in this battle, cleary blew him away with some swift punches and meta's Good battle tho,
but my vote goes for Penskills
Vote/pen
Oh my god...Originally Posted by Problem C
That is such riding...^^^
Penskills clearly won this battle.
He clearly flowed better.
Punched more.
Had the better format.
Utilized metas...
Clearly was all over Hotdog.
In every catagory.
That should be easy to see.
Peace
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