10 lines
no bitin/feedin
no crew
no dr
good luck
10 lines
no bitin/feedin
no crew
no dr
good luck
2 glocks up 2 MC's down
Illconceptz run cause Daffer22 is here now
Don't be scared cuz I'm just the new nigga in town
I'm here to kick your ass out the frame,straight perfection never lame
You bitch ass motherfuckers are just all the same, never r gonna get any fame
I leave you in pain, you act like a bitch going insane
Illconceptz is about to start cryin, don't say i'm lying
Or else you gonna be flying, why did you sign in?
You thought to defeat the one and only daffer22
Think again bitch and figure all this thru....
Ill have daffer send his name to walt disnep to be daffey's cousin,1
Rip this little kid like his fucking mother hadda crappy husband,2
Haha thats right 'son', and now Im going to fuckin be "takin you to school",3
With playdo you couldnt 'make' a friend if they had mistaken you fa cool,4
Im merkin this kid cause hes got wackness lurkin in his foolish head,5
Hows he gonna have back up when his whole fuckin crew-is-DED, (dead)6
Like a 'grand slam' have this kid runnin 'home' with his three bizarre members,7
Cause Im attackin ya with a 'mixture of flows' like professional bar tenders,8
You just got 'burned' so badly it leaves you witta mental scar,9
I just borrowed you for a 'score' like I hadda rental car,10
10 -----> score referring to bangin a chick. get it?
vote ppl gud luck illconceptz
a good battle but illconceptz gets my vote, purely because his flowed better and had sum personals.
keep at it both of you.
vote ill conceptz
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illconceptz keep on battlin' cuz u had betta personals and structure was good
Come on you didn't gave any information, this is an invalid vote
flow=IC
punches=IC
structure=tie
personals=IC
wordplay=IC
my vote IC
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just read the vote rules,ok
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daffer
you elevated a little bit since i last saw one of your battles!!
but really your verse didn't contain any real punches, or wordplay, or vocab, or anything really, just keep rappin, battlin an elevatin, you can only get better.
illconceptz
your verse was nothing speaicl but you won this one, you had punches which were directed towards him, attemts at wordpla, an a good enouigh battle verse to win.
vote- illconcpetz.
harder punches against a verse which had barely one!!
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aight cool thx for the advice.......
damn man i got to drop an honest vote here
daffer... you got potential.. but what you need to do is work on your wittiness and punchlines.. your verse had alot of weak wordplay.. i didnt really see any creative punchlines in your verse..i give your verse a 3.5/10
illconceptz- you had alot of nice punchlines and mulites in your verse.. you came really creative.. i mean this battle was one sided.. i felt like you used better wordplay and had better disses than daffer in this battle
vote - ill conceptz
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