10 lines
no hate/ dr votes
no time, just get it in by tonight
10 lines
no hate/ dr votes
no time, just get it in by tonight
aight lol fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinaaaallyyyyyyyyyyyyy yy.........lololol.....
this is gon be great
Quick merkin........
Jesus Christ ...this stupid bitch needs to be straight up strangled
Krakajack so dumb..he asked me to ghostwrite his verse for THIS battle
But while u spit 1...I cover more lines then Oprahs make up
Bring yo boys even...I split "crews" like Tom and Penelopes break up
After this ya lifes over...like you got caught shootin at jakes
Good krakajack tracks alot like Bigfoot's...hard to find and usualy fake
Styles like mine are rarely seen...like fuckin Eskimos in shorts
After Im finished wit u..Sherlock Holmes wont find the corpse
Of course u cant win.....wtf is going through your head
Cant even start a battle...this the 3rd time u had to make this thread
you must be joking man
burn you with hotter flows than volcanos in an eruption
imma pro and like a builder i'll leave this con-struck-son
you stunk from birth like you just a fart from ya mom
spend so much time in EI, if you add an O you could start a farm
set you on fire, make you drop but you can't roll with me
cuz if you went fishing with your initials you couldn't poll a v
when you against the grain i leave you stuck like a sandwhich
so many dots in your verses cuz every word shoud be your last bitch
im universal like the studio while this weak emcee acts soft
cuz you can masturbate all you want but you'll never see jack off
vote it
its not my fault u started this thread 2 times in BITCH SLAPPED LMAO
wow man this seems close i will come back and vote on this. . . .
meanwhile you guys hit my battles up and i will be back trust me
and it's not my fault that you worry more about my broweser button freezing than actualy learning how to rap. it's also not my fault that you wasted your first up making the stupidest, lamest, most random, irrelevant statement. congragulations, you've proven yourself a moron.Originally Posted by Vanja
vote please, uppin 1
man this battle must be who had the best filler cuz thats what it was
no real solid punches on both sides like i said was moslty filler and such
so any punches that were attempted were basicly blah and need work
same thing with personals they were like non existent on both sides
and when they were attempted they came out wrong and choppy
i dont kno what else to say i think krackajack got this but it was a weak
battle not anything really worth quoting so both of you need to elavate
but overall id say Krakajack did attempt better at punches and personals
so thus vote/Krakajack . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . yo remember to poll
in my battle, me vs flash youd said youd come back to poll so do so aight
uppin 2
as long as im uppin i might as well point out that your first 2 lines didn't even rhyme. the thing about rap is it's supposed to rhyme. guess you missed that though.
uppin 2
agreed with thing on the fact this battle was mainly filler, no good punches at all, but if the split crews had been worded better, that couldve been a grreat punch..... other than that, its all personal opinion cuz both verses sucked, im ogin with kracka, cuz i laughed a little to his, not a ha ha, but more of a har
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.. im back
yo kraka u got 150 posts yet, if so poll vote at Thing V Flash ok thanks
i will send ya a pm if you still forget later on sometime
come on, stop sleeping. put up a link if you have a battle that you want me to vote on.
Vote-krakajack
Both came straight. I think the other two voter's over-exaggerated when they said both verses sucked because I believe you both came decent, but krakajack attempted to be more creative then Vanja. Vanja, you actually thought that your line about making a thread three time's was effective but honestly, it was really too effective at all. It just stated a fact. Its not like you can edit a thread, you have to make a new one if you mess up. But krakajack edged with disses, creativity, personals, punches, and humor.
AI. Legendary.
19x HOF. Seven Titles. 50.
Vanja definately took this one! The guy merked his competition with the opener!
Lets see it again!!!
Jesus Christ ...this stupid bitch needs to be straight up strangled
Krakajack so dumb..he asked me to ghostwrite his verse for THIS battle
Motha fuckin ali shit wit da 1 round knockout and what have you. . .
Yeh vanj was just hitting harder and had better structure. Flow was wicked! Delivery came at you like a drunk slut. Punches were good, same wit personal! You had a jokes creative line about eskimos & shorts.. but the way you swore b4 it... youd need 2 pause because otherwise youd be saying that your 'fucking eskimos' . . . just a thought. On another matter you need to work on diction. . . just read more or some shiza. But overall good verse.
Krakajack you were pretty damn wack. But it was expected by the name. Ballpark mass marketed bs. You need 2 work on 3 things! Creativity! Punches! & Structure because some of your lines seemed dragged on. Dont get greedy amigo. Other than that read more & listen 2 more rap!
Vote Vanja
well, you're obviously a moron, just for the fact that you said i got killed by a bar that didn't even rhyme. either you were not able to understand my punches or you are on vanja's dick for some reason. you didn't poll si i don't really care, but i figured i'd say something as long as im upping.
upping 4
laeve links and i will vote
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