Sirusx vs Twixn...

[Swift Death]

10 lines/....

blind spit... due 1 hour after both check in....

chea....

[Swift Death]

check............................................. ......

[SirusX]

Good Luck Twixn.. in..

[Swift Death]

cross paths with me and youll get stomped, for a thrill
toss sirus some trainging wheels because he couldent be sick ill (bicycle)

Dea, i will be down to battle, but you are better...

your terrible why dont you just admit it to us all
wait you did... try not to stumble before you take the fall

This forum needs to be more active to attract heads.

oh youll attract heads but i aint talking bout homies
bitch blow me, after this battle ill have you making fees
take a bat to this fools kneecaps... put your feet in line
pidgen toe design... should realign your crooked spine
sirus getting holy on us, because it was hard for him to en light ten
so say amen... your done, so stop writting and put down you pen

[SirusX]

Hidden in your headphones……………. yea I’d try and hide too
Kid your nothing, never mentioned cuz they look for what IQ?...
My crew was yours…….. but you settled for a homicidal cliché
Twixn couldn’t afford the right track if he traveled the freeway
T’s on a crash course…Shoulda just stayed in ur’ topical grave
Blinded by flow…cuz he couldn’t sea the farewell optical wave
Often to blame…..for the wack lines he’s stealing from others
Your tired rhymes are free..no need to be steal in the covers
T claims to kill’s clichés yet his record somehow canary’s on
Stay hidden…the only good thing outta the Yukon was…

[SirusX]

If you do not understand either verse, please dont waste your time.

If you do understand, please waste your time.

[Record]

TWIX
cross paths with me and youll get stomped, for a thrill
toss sirus some trainging wheels because he couldent be sick ill (bicycle)
(meh)

your terrible why dont you just admit it to us all
wait you did... try not to stumble before you take the fall
(hell no)

oh youll attract heads but i aint talking bout homies
bitch blow me, after this battle ill have you making fees
(no)

take a bat to this fools kneecaps... put your feet in line
pidgen toe design... should realign your crooked spine
(*slaps himself, no*)

sirus getting holy on us, because it was hard for him to en light ten
so say amen... your done, so stop writting and put down you pen
(pff)

wtf was that verse man i seen u do better.. that was horrible.. u need to work on ur punches man..

SIRUS
Hidden in your headphones……………. yea I’d try and hide too
Kid your nothing, never mentioned cuz they look for what IQ?...
(no)

My crew was yours…….. but you settled for a homicidal cliché
Twixn couldn’t afford the right track if he traveled the freeway
(kinda played but accepted)

T’s on a crash course…Shoulda just stayed in ur’ topical grave
Blinded by flow…cuz he couldn’t sea the farewell optical wave
(meh)

Often to blame…..for the wack lines he’s stealing from others
Your tired rhymes are free..no need to be steal in the covers
(nah)

T claims to kill’s clichés yet his record somehow canary’s on
Stay hidden…the only good thing outta the Yukon was…
(no)

u didnt have a good verse either.. i think both of u need more practice.. or maybe this was a bad day.. nyway vote sirus for better overall verse wit 2 punches decent..
return the fava n vote here yall...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161588

[Swift Death]

thanks for the vote up................... leave links./.

[SirusX]

up. 50

[SirusX]

up.... Plz vote...

[Swift Death]

ihh hes banned... vote still count? chea.... it was good breakdown... up!

[Ike Ill.]

Twixn:

cross paths with me and youll get stomped, for a thrill
toss sirus some trainging wheels because he couldent be sick ill (bicycle)
(wordplay..nice)
your terrible why dont you just admit it to us all
wait you did... try not to stumble before you take the fall
(Eh...)
oh youll attract heads but i aint talking bout homies
bitch blow me, after this battle ill have you making fees
(Nah...)
take a bat to this fools kneecaps... put your feet in line
pidgen toe design... should realign your crooked spine
(Blah...)
sirus getting holy on us, because it was hard for him to en light ten
so say amen... your done, so stop writting and put down you pen
(argh....)

SirusX:

Hidden in your headphones……………. yea I’d try and hide too
Kid your nothing, never mentioned cuz they look for what IQ?...
(Aight... a punch at least)
My crew was yours…….. but you settled for a homicidal cliché
Twixn couldn’t afford the right track if he traveled the freeway
(I get it.... aight..)
T’s on a crash course…Shoulda just stayed in ur’ topical grave
Blinded by flow…cuz he couldn’t sea the farewell optical wave
(disapointing..)
Often to blame…..for the wack lines he’s stealing from others
Your tired rhymes are free..no need to be steal in the covers
(he aint stealing but meh)
T claims to kill’s clichés yet his record somehow canary’s on
Stay hidden…the only good thing outta the Yukon was…
(not a rhyme... so-so finisher)

v/ - SirusX for punching better.... Twixn I liked your rap personally.. its just hits when fights.

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=162883

[SirusX]

3, up .

[mywords]

cross paths with me and youll get stomped, for a thrill
toss sirus some trainging wheels because he couldent be sick ill (bicycle)
IITE
your terrible why dont you just admit it to us all
wait you did... try not to stumble before you take the fall
NICE PERSONAL... OK PUNCH
oh youll attract heads but i aint talking bout homies
bitch blow me, after this battle ill have you making fees
WTF..NO
take a bat to this fools kneecaps... put your feet in line
pidgen toe design... should realign your crooked spine
NO.. VIOLENCE THREATS= TIRED AND PLAYED
sirus getting holy on us, because it was hard for him to en light ten
so say amen... your done, so stop writting and put down you pen
THIS WAS OK
6/10



Hidden in your headphones……………. yea I’d try and hide too
Kid your nothing, never mentioned cuz they look for what IQ?...
OK.. COULDA BEEN WORDED BETTER
My crew was yours…….. but you settled for a homicidal cliché
Twixn couldn’t afford the right track if he traveled the freeway
OK..
T’s on a crash course…Shoulda just stayed in ur’ topical grave
Blinded by flow…cuz he couldn’t sea the farewell optical wave
GOOD
Often to blame…..for the wack lines he’s stealing from others
Your tired rhymes are free..no need to be steal in the covers
OK
T claims to kill’s clichés yet his record somehow canary’s on
Stay hidden…the only good thing outta the Yukon was…
ERM.. :/

6.5/10

v/ sirus.. ill hit this back when i get 100 posts http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=163191

[SirusX]

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