CREW BATTLE: G.I.T.M. VS DEVINE JUDGEMENTS
10 LINES
VERSE DUE ON SUNDAY OR MONDAY
THIS BATTLE HAS BEEN SET UP ON TUESDAY SO YOU HAVE PLENTY OF TIME.
G-LUCK
Teckniques
GRaFFiK NaTuRE
CREW BATTLE: G.I.T.M. VS DEVINE JUDGEMENTS
10 LINES
VERSE DUE ON SUNDAY OR MONDAY
THIS BATTLE HAS BEEN SET UP ON TUESDAY SO YOU HAVE PLENTY OF TIME.
G-LUCK
check
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checkin in........took me for ever to find this shit
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your battle statistics stay hidden,ashamed, we know it aint ur "nature" to be winning
u do lil contendin,give lil competition.like a sicence fictional textee u just pretendin
let me paint u a picture.. better yet how bout a graffik(graphic)
kickin ur vocal cords around is the only way u can hack it(hackey sack)
the fact is you hand me a victory like its a religious practice
what happened? battelin you is just a distractional tactic
dis kid loses so often failure is engraved in his history
so why do u expect me to handy you this victory
this kid is in his crib crying and screamin.dying from feeling
he couldnt look down on me if he was crucified to da ceiling
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almost forgot about this... i'll start writing now
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: me and the fans concur when I say i'm killin this man for sure
I'll Slam this herb and my verse is breakin T's like golf amateurs!
voters must be electronic music… cuz they be like Teck…no
you're getting paid? gotta kick yourself with nikes to see a check yo!
If he tried to chat wit dames… the females would slap his frame
Shit we gotta go to Houston if we wanna see T-mac(k)in game!
You're whack n' lame…dawg I read your previous verses
And you couldn't write continuously if you were keyin in cursive!
This kid ain't the first to fall… crew battle? We merked you all
but why'd you gimme this herb? T's only tight if his shirt's too small…
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lets get the flyweights+ voting here... with adaquate explainations
uppin for votes
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your battle statistics stay hidden,ashamed, we know it aint ur "nature" to be winning
u do lil contendin,give lil competition.like a sicence fictional textee u just pretendin
not bad opener
let me paint u a picture.. better yet how bout a graffik(graphic)
kickin ur vocal cords around is the only way u can hack it(hackey sack)
so-so
the fact is you hand me a victory like its a religious practice
what happened? battelin you is just a distractional tactic
ok
dis kid loses so often failure is engraved in his history
so why do u expect me to handy you this victory
weak
this kid is in his crib crying and screamin.dying from feeling
he couldnt look down on me if he was crucified to da ceiling
not that good ending
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: me and the fans concur when I say i'm killin this man for sure
I'll Slam this herb and my verse is breakin T's like golf amateurs!
strong opener
voters must be electronic music… cuz they be like Teck…no
you're getting paid? gotta kick yourself with nikes to see a check yo!
ehh
If he tried to chat wit dames… the females would slap his frame
Shit we gotta go to Houston if we wanna see T-mac(k)in game!
okay
You're whack n' lame…dawg I read your previous verses
And you couldn't write continuously if you were keyin in cursive!
Nice punch
This kid ain't the first to fall… crew battle? We merked you all
but why'd you gimme this herb? T's only tight if his shirt's too small…
okay ending
I think graff came alot stronger and had better punches
V/graff
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hit up one of my battles when u got time.............
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uppin for votes
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uppity up up up
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i like graffik verse so i got to vote for u home boy
vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=185544
uppin for explained votes
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uppin
stop sleeping people..........................................
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your battle statistics stay hidden,ashamed, we know it aint ur "nature" to be winning
u do lil contendin,give lil competition.like a sicence fictional textee u just pretendin
Ok...stretched to all hell...I liked the set up, you were going personal, nice...
Then your punchline metaphor kinda fell short like woah!
let me paint u a picture.. better yet how bout a graffik(graphic)
kickin ur vocal cords around is the only way u can hack it(hackey sack)
Again, good set up, real nice...but again, the punchline is your problem...
I'd have said "I kick your vocal chords around...blah, blah, blah...
Why have him kick his own...doesn't make sense???
the fact is you hand me a victory like its a religious practice
what happened? battelin you is just a distractional tactic
Once again, no punchline...very flat statement
dis kid loses so often failure is engraved in his history
so why do u expect me to handy you this victory
If you'd reversed this, it'd have been much better...
You're really confused on what a punchlne is, ain't ya?
this kid is in his crib crying and screamin.dying from feeling
he couldnt look down on me if he was crucified to da ceiling
Wording, dude...
"and you can look down on me, when I crucify ya to the ceiling!"
Woulda been much better.
Some nice personals, some good concepts...
But they're not getting delivered well.
VS.
me and the fans concur when I say i'm killin this man for sure
I'll Slam this herb and my verse is breakin T's like golf amateurs!
Good flow, good meta, nice punch using nameplay.
voters must be electronic music… cuz they be like Teck…no
you're getting paid? gotta kick yourself with nikes to see a check yo!
You really reached for this, didn't ya? So-so here.
If he tried to chat wit dames… the females would slap his frame
Shit we gotta go to Houston if we wanna see T-mac(k)in game!
Real nice punch and nameplay!
You're whack n' lame…dawg I read your previous verses
And you couldn't write continuously if you were keyin in cursive!
Nice flow...not sure about the much, but the comparison kinda made me laugh.
This kid ain't the first to fall… crew battle? We merked you all
but why'd you gimme this herb? T's only tight if his shirt's too small…
Again, nice flow...kinda played concept, but funny as fuck nonetheless.
Man...you've improved alot since last I read ya shit...
Winner: Graff
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