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  1. April 9th, 2005, 09:49 PM #1
    illfeelin
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    illfeelin' here so get right..

    i got rhymes,
    to make your fuckin head rewind,
    make you look back,
    say "damn that should of been mine,"
    but its not, and i got,
    everything that you need,
    to that ill feelin' w/out
    smokin' weed,
    cuz i'm the next drug,
    next slug through ya fuckin mug,
    gettin grimmy tuggin on your
    girls panties hoppin the tub.......


    try me....
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  2. April 9th, 2005, 09:54 PM #2
    Chronic Cancer
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    fix ya shit son.......now it aint bad but it aint good.......step up ya game......THEN TRY ME!!
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  3. April 10th, 2005, 11:36 AM #3
    Mistral
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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
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  4. April 10th, 2005, 11:56 AM #4
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    Well it was... interesting to say the least. You might want to think more about your choice of words, you didn't seem to come off as the kind of person that you wanted to.
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  5. April 10th, 2005, 02:09 PM #5
    warchild
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    This was to short to give a lot of feed.
    The structure flow and vocab all needs work.
    If you want to improve try and come up with concepts for your raps and think up some good punches and metaphors.

    Return the favour.
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=184935
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