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Thread: Torn Pages

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    Stimulate
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    Torn Pages

    Torn Pages: By Stimulate
    With malice in his mind, he flips through the book looking for truth...
    Thoughts of altered knowledge was applied throughout his youth....
    Feelings beyond recognition, was immersed out of his imagery...
    And added to the lord's personal collection of white lie seas....
    See, heaven is the only form of life that reflects in this society...
    The sight of dusk drfting from the day triggers a new anxiety...
    The thought of betrayal skewed and transformed into belief...
    What the fuck in this world soothes him? There is no relief...
    He's peramanently altered by the intesity of pure truth...
    The man in white robes still hasn't filled in his empty tooth...
    The view above us strikes sparks of theories into the cerebrum...
    American civilization is more like crackers and chewed off crumbs...
    He stalks the earth's surface, still searching for some verity...
    Although in this humanity, no human has true life clarity...
    Normal? He's irregulary abnormal with no real life prosperity...
    His lifespan was more like an prisoner with dead insularity...
    His beliefs, tormented by life, thrown in The Rejected Abyss...
    Reports crumbled into balls of shit and injected amiss...
    There is only one option, one choice in this twisted universe...
    That's to present loyalty to him and his ability of reverse...
    Rewind, so he can destroy what this world has worked on...
    His actions are all known when sighted by the eyes of god...
    While these possibilities rushed through the young man's ages...
    He had found the source of his fear, to find it as Torn Pages...
    Last edited by Stimulate; July 11th, 2005 at 02:07 PM

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    not a bad piece....your imagery was ill....your vocab and rhyme scheme was ill....very consistent and your topic was original and creative....nice multis......your structure was tight and this piece flowed very well,keep droppin tha hottness.~1~


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    Yo man this piece of yours is 1 of a kind...iv never seen a topic like this...ur wordplay was tight nd so was your structure...This whole thing was ill.Mad props man.

    Keep it up,peace.

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    Amazin concept, flow was gud and imagery was off tha chain...Sick vocab and wordplay made this I brilliant piece that was amazingly original and creative... Great Work, Keep Droppin and doin ya thang...

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    woa..... homie diss drop was the best....the vocab and rhymes were unbelivable incredible......the strcutrue was fantasticly Super.....there is no good enough word to explain how good this is.... yo exellent job and kep it up...

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    Stimulate
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    thanx if u want PM me ur OMs and i'll hit em up

    uppin

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    not a bad piece....your imagery was ill....your vocab and rhyme scheme was ill....very consistent and your topic was original and creative....nice multis......your structure was tight and this piece flowed very well,keep droppin tha hottness.~1~
    ^ Took the words right outta my mouth..

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