Music.

[B.I.Detained.]

"Lets come together.. right now."
- The Beatles.

Listen..
..and vision the fact, music was made for material crap, & loosely percieved
Some believe that satan's imperial powers is how music's concieved.
Incognito indeed, for brass and percussion would only induce the spirit of lovin'
Notes had risen from nothin', 'cept a passion for something..
Totally undescribable, a liable emotion that motion's belief.
A singular feat, that can be used adjacently for love, loss AND grief.
Which could fuel and conquer beef.. is there anything else like it in the world?
Music is my world..
You can use it too woo a girl and lose a girl, there's no limitation
Or segregation, a global phonomenon that still infects every nation.
Whether it be about sex, immagration or politics I'll follow it.. cuz
Music is my life..
Its above that high - that satisfies me, even in my darkest days -
Prince was there to heal my pain,
Purple rain overshadowed the hurt that came.
I have his discography hung on my wall - in a golden frame.
Music is my name..
I'm a thunder of noise, with every serial ploy or rhetorical line..
I evolve your thoughts to the very fabric of time.
I can make the "out of key shine", with a feathered -but laden bass
I create something so poetic and beautiful, then release the taste.
Yet for the morbid case, of people who live WITHOUT Music..
Music is my muse..
Not to confuse you. I'm not a note, nor a man or an instrument in hand
I'm just a force to be reckoned with- sweeping the land.
& through generations of ages, from sticks on drums, from mild hums
to the sfx of guns,
a quartet of nuns,
a group of kareoke set Mums..
Music IS music..cuz

Fender strings can compensate for those slender sins and poisened whims
and the general animosity of those "tender things"..
Its all forgotten - with THAT ONE SONG.
That one long moment where you hold it in old Mothers tongue.
Just listen..

For genarations of the evolution of music, only musical solutions..
..make people take heed.
With so many fake people roaming free..
Music - is the only true belief.

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[Flo3try]

this piece was crazy ill i was really feelin the whole concept i could actually take this piece and it would be exactly what i feel..... music is mah life i couldnt live without it... this has good vocabulary,wordplay and the structure is nice...

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Some believe that satan's imperial powers is how music's concieved.
Incognito indeed, for brass and percussion would only induce the spirit of lovin'
Notes had risen from nothin', 'cept a passion for something..
Totally undescribable, a liable emotion that motion's belief.
A singular feat, that can be used adjacently for love, loss AND grief.
Which could fuel and conquer beef.. is there anything else like it in the world?
Music is my world..

Its above that high - that satisfies me, even in my darkest days -
Prince was there to heal my pain,
Purple rain overshadowed the hurt that came.
I have his discography hung on my wall - in a golden frame.
Music is my name..

all i gotta say is keep doing what you doing because i like it best piece i've seen from you in my opinion

[Poeta Demonio]

I loved this peice, it was almost like you were in my thoughts of music, then again millions would also feel this was wrote for them!...
This was a great peice, i really got into what you were saying and enjoyed the transition from verse to verse...
Your vocabular was good, yet not over the top, which also mad ethe peice stand out for me, usually people either have to little vocab, or way to much, but you had a great ballance of simplistic and complex.
Pretty much every line was not only true to you, but also true to me and as i said, prolly millions of others, especially the 'purple rain' part, damn i understood that part lol.
I've seen this topic quite alot, but i've never seen a inturpritation of the topic done as well or creatively as you have done here, it was literally amazing to read.

Fender strings can compensate for those slender sins and poisened whims
and the general animosity of those "tender things"..

^^^This was my favorite line of your verse, i found this a beautiful line, amazingly imaginative and creative in it's own respects.

I have wondered for quite a while what your true ability was, but now i think i have have finally seen what i was looking for in this peice... i will be nominating this, i found this a great read in all aspects.

I read through it 4 times to try and find something to critisise about it, but i actually can't, i usually can, you know nit pick lol, but i actually can't this.

well done, i loved it.

[Cody Nash]

wow. that was amazing, the content was crazy. I mean I never fell off of it once, and I had no trouble breezing through it. It flowed so well that you could read it through twice and a consistant speed without stopping in less than a minute. Music is a played and over used topic and LIKE MOST GOOD PEOPLE DO ..you went and made Music your own ..good job.

Prince was there to heal my pain,
Purple rain overshadowed the hurt that came.
I have his discography hung on my wall - in a golden frame.
Music is my name..
I'm a thunder of noise, with every serial ploy or rhetorical line..
I evolve your thoughts to the very fabric of time.
I can make the "out of key shine", with a feathered -but laden bass
I create something so poetic and beautiful, then release the taste.
Yet for the morbid case, of people who live WITHOUT Music..

^That was my favorite. I felt it described the POINT of the piece so well. It basically shows how meaningful music is to other people and MOST everyone's LIFE! ..great read ..

!Nash ..
hit the second link in the siggy ..

[..:D.Realist:..]

yo this shit was ill..i didnt know you could spit fire lol your flow was good your vocab was good your rhymeskeme was all good to

.and vision the fact, music was made for material crap, & loosely percieved
Some believe that satan's imperial powers is how music's concieved. really good opening

Incognito indeed, for brass and percussion would only induce the spirit of lovin'
Notes had risen from nothin', 'cept a passion for something..
Totally undescribable, a liable emotion that motion's belief.
A singular feat, that can be used adjacently for love, loss AND grief.
Which could fuel and conquer beef.. is there anything else like it in the world?
Music is my world..
You can use it too woo a girl and lose a girl, there's no limitation
Or segregation, a global phonomenon that still infects every nation.
Whether it be about sex, immagration or politics I'll follow it.. cuz
Music is my life..
Its above that high - that satisfies me, even in my darkest days -
Prince was there to heal my pain,
Purple rain overshadowed the hurt that came.
I have his discography hung on my wall - in a golden frame.
Music is my name..
I'm a thunder of noise, with every serial ploy or rhetorical line..
I evolve your thoughts to the very fabric of time.
I can make the "out of key shine", with a feathered -but laden bass
I create something so poetic and beautiful, then release the taste.
Yet for the morbid case, of people who live WITHOUT Music..
Music is my muse..
Not to confuse you. I'm not a note, nor a man or an instrument in hand
I'm just a force to be reckoned with- sweeping the land

proper good middle of verse

& through generations of ages, from sticks on drums, from mild hums
to the sfx of guns,
a quartet of nuns,
a group of kareoke set Mums..
Music IS music..cuz

ight closer ... overall hot drop

[B.I.Detained.]

Yupyup.

[.ExQuisite]

well brix--nice job

i like how you have a complete and total dope piece.. flow works well-doesnt fall off or even get shifty with multis that sound so natural....overall hotness

sorry for the shoirt feed but not much to say---pure dope

nothing to critiscize...

[cK-]

nice work here i reely liked the way its put together ya got dope wordplay and vocabulary was dope and the flow was off the chain man i was reely feelin this also wa a great topic man keep it up. 1
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I'm a thunder of noise, with every serial ploy or rhetorical line..
I evolve your thoughts to the very fabric of time.
I can make the "out of key shine", with a feathered -but laden bass
I create something so poetic and beautiful, then release the taste.

[QuEsTsHuN]

D.H.B.
This is what the world needs...........

Awesome fucken writing homiE

I sincerely hope you never try to start a cult or something.... you'd brainwash half the globe through your deffinition of unity.

Ever think about getting into advertising?

[Killa_King]

Listen..
..and vision the fact, music was made for material crap, & loosely percieved
Some believe that satan's imperial powers is how music's concieved.
Incognito indeed, for brass and percussion would only induce the spirit of lovin'
Notes had risen from nothin', 'cept a passion for something..
Totally undescribable, a liable emotion that motion's belief.
A singular feat, that can be used adjacently for love, loss AND grief.
Which could fuel and conquer beef..

^^Nice shit right here very nice
Topic was perfect for this piece
Complexity was very strong on this
Just like ya style on this one all together
Imagery was very vividly painted
Vocab was genius,Wordplay was exceptional
Meta's were very descriptive
Even a few mult's thrown into the mix
Nice multisyllable rhyming also
Looking forward to more
Spit fire like this again I'm looking forward to it
Stay up 100

[NiNjah Red]

yeah mos def liked the poeticaly musical tones of this jpint.. nicely crafted.. making music to be the powerful medium it is fosho.. nice wording for the most part...


You can use it too woo a girl and lose a girl, there's no limitation
Or segregation, a global phonomenon that still infects every nation.
Whether it be about sex, immagration or politics I'll follow it.. cuz
Music is my life..
Its above that high - that satisfies me, even in my darkest days -

fosho was feelin that... nice rhymes arrangement..str8 melodic

good works

pz

[B.I.Detained.]

Thanks, to all.

[Seneka]

This is a pretty good piece with a lot of emotion and good vocabulary used in this. The rhyming wasn't too bad even unlike 99% of the drops on OM or any other topical thread. I can see how people would be attracted to a song like this, felling it good. No major complaints from me, keep droppin.

[rufus_dirty]

this shit was intelectual garbage ---- didn't eric sermon already do music and yall riding his dick lol if you spit this in the hood niggas would laugh yo corny ass off the block maybe you should go battle maya angelou cuz on the reals son yo this shit is trash