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Thread: Wanting Eyes.

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    Rock you in the Face Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic's Avatar
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    Wanting Eyes.

    She looks and notices people who wouldn't do the same
    People who find something else, People with no shame
    She walks the street, family beside her, she's in the front
    Recognition only talking to the others, making it so blunt
    She just stares, wanting whatever her brother recieved
    Her soul in need, wanting eyes of people ever so Direly
    But she can't recieve information into relative thoughts
    Her Mind painting pictures she hoped her eyes caught
    She knows nobody's looking, but she still wants to see
    The colors of vast control, looking for pictures to recieve
    She stands, cane in hand, for the people to try to find
    That though they think she can only see darkness
    She knows what she sees, perhaps the people are blind

    He journeys his everyday adventure outside of his door
    Wearing something outrageous, from his set of clothes
    Maybe something thats noticeable, the colors on brink
    Or maybe the threads in his clothes, that no longer link
    He only calls for things, That he recieves so negatively
    Attention he doesn't get, that he calls for so desperately
    He thinks he's the life of every single thing thats happening
    His clothes, his attitude, for your eyes that he's grasping
    Maybe its the fact, That his father was never really there
    That he abuses what he gets, And always overpays his fare
    But you see, He can't see what the other townsfolk can see
    Is that a disgraced person...
    Who wants the people to see what he wants them to see

    What brings these two together, is that they both realize
    They are wanting eyes, one to see, and one to see eyes
    One wants to know what her world is like,curious to explore
    And one wants the eyes to see, until from his antics are sore
    One needs them to see, what colors seem to fit her world
    Though she needs to realize, she's perfect, perfect as can be
    She doesn't need the attention, just realization that she needs
    While he needs to know, that he craves too much for himself
    people are telling themselves, this boy is way too full of Himself
    He has the eyes of attention, Just not the one he wants
    He needs the eyes of other, Because He broke the ones he got
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
    [YOUTUBE]seYxVBIsycE[/YOUTUBE]
    Just watch My Back, I got the front.

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    Rock you in the Face Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic's Avatar
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    Hence Forward.. BURR!
    [YOUTUBE]seYxVBIsycE[/YOUTUBE]
    Just watch My Back, I got the front.

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    this is nice man....ya structure was off the Hook and ya FLow Man Amazing............But getting Off that it was Pretty Nicely Done ya Vocab was Good ya Wordplay was betta Made the read Betta to....can't say much for the topic....But it was Good keep doin yall THing....Peace....

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    ~CeRtiFieD~
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    yeah that spit were pretty hot, fa'low were sweet an structure were packing heat dawg......

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    good rhyme structure ....ya flow was easy 2 follow....had a strong story....a few filler lines..but definitely a good piece...

    ima have 2 give dis 1 2 thumbs up...

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    Rock you in the Face Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic's Avatar
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    nice drop homie.......ur vocab,wordplay,structure, n rhyme was all tight as fuck son...keep doin ur thang...overall this drop was fire son...

    Peace

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    this was good, had a good flow, sounded like a poem sorta, anywayz, keep spittin

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    hey nice drop...good flow keep it up!!

    ~1~

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    hell yeah man I thought this shit was hott as fuck!!!! Good structure and good flow..........peace homie...........keep spittin.

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    coolio,thanks for replies
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
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    Just watch My Back, I got the front.

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    dis was hot, at first i thought it was about
    a golddigger but da second verse cleared me up
    keep at it man
    peace
    Its all on me
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    A gold digger?
    OK, however you see it.
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
    [YOUTUBE]seYxVBIsycE[/YOUTUBE]
    Just watch My Back, I got the front.

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    awsome shit, structure impectable, wordplay the shit, keep up

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