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    Dare

    Dare to push your way out of your mother`s womb;
    Dare to do your very best until the day they lay your tomb;
    Dare to live a full life in between;
    Dare to dream the impossible dream.

    Dare to learn how to walk undaunted by the fact that you might fall;
    Even if you fall learn from your mistake and dare to try some more;
    Dare to grow out of your mother`s craddling arms;
    Dare to bring your boisterous temper to a calm.

    Dare to find yourself a life long friend;
    Dare to love her until the very end;
    Dare to be loyal and faithful to her;
    Dare to ignore that fleshly stir;
    Dare to love her with all your heart;
    Treat her like a queen, respect her, be smart!

    Dare to leave your parent`s house;
    With a well chosen bride to be your spouse;
    Dare to start again that orbit around the earth;
    As you announce to this world your child`s birth.

    In case, my brothers, you didn't see my plan;
    I am saying dare, dare to be a MAN!


  2. #2
    It has the word Dare in it too many times! Buy a thesarus!

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    s.R.
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    On Topic, Very Very Good Vocabulary... Nice Overall Poem and Deep

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    i LOVE the use of the word Dare. its like a challrnge to the audience to get out there. NICE

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    I agree, I love the repetition of the word dare also. It was almost like a voice getting louder in my ears.. Becoming more frenzied and feverous in its pitch.. Actually Daring the reader to do these things. Brilliant.

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    Don't listen to fuckin oddpants- What the fuck? That's the point.....you had.....how many "dares" in that? How many different words for "dare" is there? Probably not 15 of them. I thought is was pretty good. I think sometimes we need to state the obvious because people tend to forget what really matters. Good job.

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