aight we doin...
5-8 bars..
no verse bitting
no hate, d/r votes
first to 5 wins...
I'l spit first ~
check in before u spit
j_killa
Jshook
aight we doin...
5-8 bars..
no verse bitting
no hate, d/r votes
first to 5 wins...
I'l spit first ~
check in before u spit
checkin in hurry up and spit
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J Shooks
**KEYSTYLE**
This "killa" doesn't kill, he gets killed cuz his flow is weak/ i sling these bars, at your throat to leave scars, so ya can't speak/ this kids a master at failing, better then the tigers an thier losing streak//
his rhymes are vertically challenged, so he can't ELEVATE/ no matter how hard he try, he gonna drop"lightly" dis-regard his weight/
easy i take this win, an collect his "soul"/ even though i killed him lyricaly, hes stomach was still left wit a hole/
munipulated, i leave this helpless "killa" wit rhymes imprinted in his face/ give him cold sweets, wit nightmares to chase/ he say he a rookie but really a disgrace/ he be dead on the ground, star gazin to space//
i didn't feel like thinkin of any more..... so uppin for j killa's verse............................................. .........................................
iight i'll have mine in like 15 mins
no editing cuz u might try wit dat kind of structure lol
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wtf u talkin bout..... editing.... .... just spit................................
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you betta balance ya checks bitch, cuz this is a battle you cant afford to lose/
make u forward ya dues to an early retirement plan..life or death no time to choose//
who u tryna fool?you couldnt be "tight" if you was "peter pan's pants/
im hittin you with the type of punches that you could "never-land"!!//
u'z not a clever man..i-ima m-m-make you s-s-stut-t-t-err while y-ya words l-in-ggerr!!/
u battlin me was a "slip-up"..therefore, u should change ya name to "butter-fingers"!!//
"dislocate-ya-jaw"...just so you can say that you "spit loosely"/
hit n leave "bruises-on-ya-eyes" just to prove "you-can't-view-me!!//
~im done wit chu~
But I'll fuckin crush ya skull until ya face falls apart/
leave u in a state, where u are officially an abnormal retart//
uppin 4 votes
uppin 4 sum votes up in here
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the battle of the j's hahaha....not really funny i see
well i'm gonna vote killa he has potential and better overall verse
nice lay-out....or stucture
harder-direct punches
just better nigga u down 4 da crew
i'm leavin now i'll talk to 9 l8er about u iight
vote=j-killa
thanx uppin 4 sum more voters
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plz vote honestly
yea u up.... 1-0................................................. .........................
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Props to both of you. but j killa took this one.no beef but props
peep this:
vote close this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=2
i ain't got 100 posts...does my vote still count? dont think it does....but to be fair i wud say,
structure : killa( shooks was alova in pieces compared to tite line by line from killa)
flow : Shook (verse seemed to fit betta, tho i cant know ya timin n pauses killa)
technique : cant say (both tite styles)
Word-Play : Shook ( vertically challengin goin wit elav8 n shit...god wordplay form both bu shok took it)
Best Line: Killa (the stutter line was awesome man...tite!)
over-all feel : Shook (seemed more pro then killas)
over-all: hard to judge bu i wud say shook took it by a hair man...no beef 2 nietha, jus speakin my trooth even tho it dont count
BATTLZ IN PROGRESS:
[EYERONIK]
J-Kila
J-Shook
THA REMIX
MC GAMBIT
WINZ :no-one yet
LOSSES:no-one yet
RePpIn LW crew SqAd DeEp
ma man XpLiCiT
nice to see the difference between what a vet says and a new-b
vet=crackills
new-b=GuRu
so anyways uppin 4 sum votes
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aight uppin....... its 2-0 on the poles, but really 2-1........
IF U VIEW THIS VOTE...
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