10 lines
me first
10 mins after me or DQ
no feeding/biting
hurry and check in and i'll spit
Flesh-N-Bone
GriM EviL
10 lines
me first
10 mins after me or DQ
no feeding/biting
hurry and check in and i'll spit
hey sorry bout the freepost but why dont we do a battle between the three of us................................................ ..
um..no...i will battle oyu after............................................. ..............................................
Iight i'm here checkin in
it says my reply has to be atleast 100 characters so yea imma keep typin till i'm there
aight here it goes....
leave you flesh and bone with my acid distributed spit/
you freezin up the mic and aint even said shit/
u wanna feed off my lines like you eat ya baby food/
waiting to sink ya teeth but my solid rhymes will kill you dude/
im not nice,i burn up the mic like a fire in hell/
im here to bring death upon this wak emcees dell/(comp)
might as well leave you already lost this match you suck that much/
ive seen ya otha aliases and well you gotta learn to punch/
so you gonna make 5 aliases so you could win the polls/
this kid shakes his ass for men more than beyonce knowles/
pCe
You want beef, nigga breathe deep
Like mouths in furnaces flesh speak heat
There’s no retreat from me, F n’ B
Imma killer soccer player, you be sufferin from da-feet(defeat)
You just the first statistic, nigga don't push me
Rip out ya voice box and leave you speechless
Leave you like Chris Beniot knock ya jaw and leave you teethless
Rip ya optics and paste em to the screen cuz grim gotta see this
10 minutes is all I need to make this kat believe this
Like a mother wit birth problems your ass can't concieve this
personals-grim
vocab-tie
flow-grim
wordplay-flesh
punches-grim
multies-flesh
sum of fleshes disses was weak and he said how he was this and that...props though
tight battle but i think grims got it....
BEST LINES
GRIM:
so you gonna make 5 aliases so you could win the polls/
this kid shakes his ass for men more than beyonce knowles/
^funny ass shit^
leave you flesh and bone with my acid distributed spit/
you freezin up the mic and aint even said shit/
^good opener^
FLESH'S:
Leave you like Chris Beniot knock ya jaw and leave you teethless
Rip ya optics and paste em to the screen cuz grim gotta see this
^nice multies^
You want beef, nigga breathe deep
Like mouths in furnaces flesh speak heat
^aight but weak^
poll vote-grim
34 veiws and 1 vote....
Blah!...
uppin_1_.......................................... .................................................. .......
pCe
both of ya need to elevate, but ima say grim takes this, heres my breakdown....
structure-tie
flow-tie
vocab-grim
wordplay-tie
punches-grim
personals-grim
overall-grim
props to the both of ya, but ima say grim takes this....
peace.......
^^true ^^^ u both need to elevate but hey overall grim took da trophy on this one his punches just came stronger and he had some good multis and personals
hey thats was some okay shit but u do both need elevatin and grimm u took the trophy on my terms ur punches were stronger and so were ur personals so there u have it
hey hit this up wit and honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84896
whoops i accidentally posted 2wice eh sorry bout that but whatever.......................................... .................................................. ....
aiight i gotta give this one to grim.....he had a better flow and better ending....more personals too......yea aiight good battle though...............................aiight halla
aiight i gotta give this one to grim.....he had a better flow and better ending....more personals too......yea aiight good battle though...............................aiight halla
Flow.....Grim
Punches.....Grim
Personals......Grim
Originality.....FnB
Multies.....FnB
Overall...... Grim
Even tho my vote dont count....
Hit up this battle n vote....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84570
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