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    The Way It Should Be

    The way it should be is money making,
    The way it should be is fine women dating
    The way it should be is free from hating
    Creating unity throughout all the nations………

    A lot of hating goes on in the world around,
    Confounded countries bound by war cos of believed bounties,
    Think of the unnecessary deaths, stacking high,
    Dunno how many but at a guess no less than million,
    It needs addressed, try to imagine the pain that manifests
    Broken families, grieving, members untimely leaving
    What’s wrong is we all heathens? Medieval -feeling
    -can get what we want with fighting force and upheaval
    Bigger aint better all nations should be equal
    Continental unity collabing in life without the evil……

    The way it should be is money making,
    The way it should be is fine women dating
    The way it should be is free from hating
    Creating unity throughout all the nations………

    They say money cant buy you happiness
    But happiness can’t buy you money, funny
    How people with it come out with the coined phrases
    Spend ridiculous amounts in ridiculous places
    Growing up on the streets, you get to know different faces
    Learn to be streetwise - emphasise life, and be evasive
    Like the oil on a chain, keeping it running, money
    Smoothes the flow freeing time so there’s less confrontin
    In an ideal world be plenty green and gold, amounts obscene
    No hunger with disease eased, alas, its only a dream……

    The way it should be is money making,
    The way it should be is fine women dating
    The way it should be is free from hating
    Creating unity throughout all the nations………x 2
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    it's hot, i liked it, good topic and good visuals
    Fate is inevitable, everything happens for a reason

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    AS I EXPECTED AN EXQUISIT READ GREAT POST ...
    YOUR WAY OF WRITTING AND DERIVING MEANINGS AMPLIFIED BY WORD CONTENT IS NOTHING LESS THAN EXTRORDINARY
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    your piece was well thought out and stuck to the same subject good lyricall dose but wasnt gully enough

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    The Mann
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    Yo this was good but just work on your word play and mutis

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    This was a real good piece....it flowed nicely as i read it, didnt get off really at all....your vocab was good, nothing wrong there....structure was real good....your chorus was nice...i cant really say anything bad about this, cause i enjoyed reading it...it was a real good piece...keep at it...and keep dropping.

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    this is tight shit nigga, flow was great, topic was good, the concept and message came through loud and clear.
    overall like WORD~PERFECT SAID AN EXQUISIT PIECE

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    i liked the hook, it was hard

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    thnx for the feedback, but whats with the free posters
    i mean " i liked the hook it was hard" is hardlt constructive
    anyways thnx.....keep hitin it...
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    can i get some more feed at it.......
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    ......................its starting to wilt.....lol
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    holla....at ya'll..................
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    Not bad not bad..work on it a little...multis needa little help..peace out

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    Since i'm in Corrupted Visions now, I must say dog, You held C.V. down well. This shit was fuckin real, and I love that shit. The shit about bitches, cars, bling, that shit ain't me. But reading shit like this makes me breath a sigh of relief, knowin that there are some real mufuckas doing this rap shit, ya know what i'm sayin? Real dope shit you dropped man, much props.

    Bigger aint better all nations should be equal
    Continental unity collabing in life without the evil
    ^^ Word to that.

    My only complaint is the one line in the hook, The Way It Should Be Fine Women Dating. I don't think that neccessarily belonged, ya know?

    Overall-- Great shit man, the content was dope, flow was on-point.

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