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    'alternative' medicine

    Many forms is the way it comes talking about medicines
    Like a joint after a hard days work, one of life’s blessings
    Which lessens the impression it leaves on the anatomy
    Should be prescribed to me to relieve the anxiety
    Another manifestation of its creation is alcohol
    Its not bad at all, temporary block stop’s light like a parasol
    A whole other person influenced by long legs, tits and all
    Last time a recall, woke up 10x worse than before the fall
    Another favourite of mine I find is Ecstasy its sublime
    Generates the energy the feel of eternal life without decline
    Its fine for a quick pick me up, for a few hours you’ll shine
    Burning brain cells, so losing time another ‘E’ another chime
    If ya wanna go the other way, drop an acid’n start to really play
    Alternative world revolved on your own thoughts drifting away
    Lifting reality to another plane, careful can turn you insane
    But its fuckin good, so typically it must fuck wit ya brain
    My favourite by far is coke a toke a snort the quick transport
    Neutralise my nasal absorb, short sting then Buzzin galore
    Doesn’t last long, from taken to about 30 mins then its gone
    To confirm to prolong another hit timed to normalities gong
    The way I do it is all in one, hash, e’s, coke, acid, alcohol collab
    Ultimate hit the rush the buzz of it all in a mix up bag…………………..
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    i liked it, it was dope , some gd lines!!! keep them comin!!

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    Which lessens the impression it leaves on the anatomy
    Should be prescribed to me to relieve the anxiety

    ^That was a decent attempt at a multi but the last words don't rhyme completely. .

    The flow was kept thoghout though & qute good, there could be room for improvement like everybody ie. more inner, multis etc.

    But it was good along with the content was i di enjoy. .Props

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    shit, sorry i forhot th write the replies down, here they are

    mostar - just clowning
    point-blank - contradict this
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    I Deff Seen Potential Here..Yet Ya Rhyme
    Was Off.. Words That Made The Depth Better
    But Didn't Fit The Whole Rhyme Scheme.. Work
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    thnx for the feed....oh and auspicious i tried to hit your links but they dont work, it said 'no link specified', aight.......Pc
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    you got skill that cant be questioned but i know ive seen better from you this was still a decent read
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    nice piece,
    some good lines,
    the flow was consistent throughout,
    just try and add multis/internals but dont force them,
    some nice vocab,

    overall good piece,worth reading, just keep writing and elevating,


    can you check out my Consider yourself lucky piece

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    thanx for the feed....cana get some more thrown this way......peace dawgs
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