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@Salamander @Amen vs @Packed Graves @GalacticQuote:
Originally Posted by Salamander
Check-in due tomorrow (Tuesday) with a pic by 11:59PM EST
Verses due Friday 11:59PM EST.
lets make this good.
win/losses will be added in after the battle for both teams.
I'm taking Sals pic, @Galactic you get Wilmer.
http://i57.tinypic.com/2cqgupl.jpg
What a frazzled cat.. women lather that? MADNESS!
Return the tie to Cactus Jack... women would rather jack cactus.
This lone stranger is pro-geek w/ no bangers, he's so weak.
A closet dweller, lookin' like he was born w/ coat hangers through both cheeks.
You act fly & rap why? I ain't gettin' bashed by a scrawny brat...
The way you Slytherin your outfit, you should be labeled that by a talking hat.
Galactic is spawning? WHACK. He has little ones? MISTAKES!
Sportin' a Tank Top under your shirt and a cannon in the middle of your face.
This smashed fag is trashed eh? Past fazed, boozed & goofy.
Not just Wrecked... he's Adrien Brody half way through the movie.
http://distilleryimage0.s3.amazonaws...0a1f9bf5_6.jpg
Let's go...
Obvious kid's poor as fuck & I knew in life this faggot is wack,
IDK if I shld diss or donate articles of clothin & advertise this pic as a feed the children charity ad.
I mean, such a touchin' visual & don't want the shit to haunt me,
I'd say, if this pathetic picture's worth a thousand, Wordz, It'll make for a Sacred Scripture HOF piece.
Stay positive, kid. Life's a bitch & all the tragedy's surrounding,
Amen's just trying to shed light, on the subject... Which'll finally upgrade his ENTIRE family's housing.
Your chick's a major slut & her swag's hot kid, no one can top her,
Anytime I sea leopard leggin's... I'm sure her pussy can easily offer more of an option then red lobster.
I'm serious, she's infested & this kid doubts, what could be crabs,
But lets not ruin the family photo's outstanding, on the same corner your wife discounts her pussy at.
http://i1189.photobucket.com/albums/...pic-4630-7.jpg
your spanish ways are disgusting & their showing sicc
Most of us Pray to Jesus…While youve got your cousin Jesus Mowing It
LOL. Tryin’a flex? You must be kidding fam
You don’t Seam Ripped but I can tell ya Waistline has different plans
your styles so lazy, its like you smoked a doobie twice
& your skin is so Oily, w/ the way its Shinning it should fight for Movie Rights
In a battle w/ you I’ll Save Face & assume the concussion
Cuz bro if we ever go Head to Head trust the FIRST thing I’m doing is duckin
That Jawline is abrupt but that ain't a surprise to me
Homie real talk...You have enough Chin it could start its own Asian society
http://i57.tinypic.com/2qla2kn.jpg
You & wifey are air heads, with your cables crossed
Both your necks have balloons on them <- in that case, nice choice on the table cloth
Sal your torso is shaped like a pyramid & your type soft
His girl hates him, cuz everytime you give her a shoulder to lean on she slides right off
Your girl I could never Under Amor, she's fat that would trash rep
Only reason his shirt says Protect This House, cuz he'll fight for her til his last breath
Real men like big ass & tits, not this homo fuck
So he found a girl thats so flat, her bras the Walking Billboard For Solo Cup
Your girl has a spare tire gut i know why you make it work
cuz your criticized for jokes going flat, but it's a quick fix ever since you been dating her
What a frazzled cat.. women lather that? MADNESS!
Return the tie to Cactus Jack... women would rather jack cactus.
cool flip tho other then calling dude ugly doesn't dive into the pic much, still a cool line nonetheless.
This lone stranger is pro-geek w/ no bangers, he's so weak.
A closet dweller, lookin' like he was born w/ coat hangers through both cheeks.
lmao dope.
You act fly & rap why? I ain't gettin' bashed by a scrawny brat...
The way you Slytherin your outfit, you should be labeled that by a talking hat.
uggh.. slytherin punch.. but the shit made me laugh, not even gonna lie haha.. good wording.
Galactic is spawning? WHACK. He has little ones? MISTAKES!
Sportin' a Tank Top under your shirt and a cannon in the middle of your face.
I fucks with it.. good wordplay.
This smashed fag is trashed eh? Past fazed, boozed & goofy.
Not just Wrecked... he's Adrien Brody half way through the movie.
lol
Let's go...
Obvious kid's poor as fuck & I knew in life this faggot is wack,
IDK if I shld diss or donate articles of clothin & advertise this pic as a feed the children charity ad.
weak
I mean, such a touchin' visual & don't want the shit to haunt me,
I'd say, if this pathetic picture's worth a thousand, Wordz, It'll make for a Sacred Scripture HOF piece.
weak
Stay positive, kid. Life's a bitch & all the tragedy's surrounding,
Amen's just trying to shed light, on the subject... Which'll finally upgrade his ENTIRE family's housing.
its cool, not harsh tho.
Your chick's a major slut & her swag's hot kid, no one can top her,
Anytime I sea leopard leggin's... I'm sure her pussy can easily offer more of an option then red lobster.
blahh, you've had unneeded stretched wording the whole verse.
I'm serious, she's infested & this kid doubts, what could be crabs,
But lets not ruin the family photo's outstanding, on the same corner your wife discounts her pussy at.
this could have been dope but the execution was terrible, the stretched line feels like im taking a never ending journey to get to the punch smh.[/QUOTE]
this one is hard to call really.. there were A LOT of lines I wasn't feeling and some that were great. Sal had the best verse by far easily but Amen dropped the ball with some super weak lines, I think the verses vs Sal and Amen from Gal/PG weren't the hardest but they had the most consistent as a whole. Its 20 lines and I felt they spaced out their better lines better then sal/amen due to amen not really having any quotables here. The rust is real homie,Quote:
Originally Posted by Packed Graves
good battle though guys
v/Gal/PG
What a frazzled cat.. women lather that? MADNESS!
Return the tie to Cactus Jack... women would rather jack cactus.
Ok,
This lone stranger is pro-geek w/ no bangers, he's so weak.
A closet dweller, lookin' like he was born w/ coat hangers through both cheeks.
Nice, lmao, scheme is iLL
You act fly & rap why? I ain't gettin' bashed by a scrawny brat...
The way you Slytherin your outfit, you should be labeled that by a talking hat.
Lol, pretty dope
Galactic is spawning? WHACK. He has little ones? MISTAKES!
Sportin' a Tank Top under your shirt and a cannon in the middle of your face.
Fuck lmao, that's dope
This smashed fag is trashed eh? Past fazed, boozed & goofy.
Not just Wrecked... he's Adrien Brody half way through the movie.
Lmao, hilarious, door verse
Let's go...
Obvious kid's poor as fuck & I knew in life this faggot is wack,
IDK if I shld diss or donate articles of clothin & advertise this pic as a feed the children charity ad.
Real wordy, ok tho
I mean, such a touchin' visual & don't want the shit to haunt me,
I'd say, if this pathetic picture's worth a thousand, Wordz, It'll make for a Sacred Scripture HOF piece.
Rhymes r off, kinda stretched fa u
Stay positive, kid. Life's a bitch & all the tragedy's surrounding,
Amen's just trying to shed light, on the subject... Which'll finally upgrade his ENTIRE family's housing.
Lol, ok
Your chick's a major slut & her swag's hot kid, no one can top her,
Anytime I sea leopard leggin's... I'm sure her pussy can easily offer more of an option then red lobster.
Felt u coulda shortened it to make it better
I'm serious, she's infested & this kid doubts, what could be crabs,
But lets not ruin the family photo's outstanding, on the same corner your wife discounts her pussy at.
Iight...
Vs
your spanish ways are disgusting & their showing sicc
Most of us Pray to Jesus…While youve got your cousin Jesus Mowing It
Lmao that's dope IMO
LOL. Tryin’a flex? You must be kidding fam
You don’t Seam Ripped but I can tell ya Waistline has different plans
Lol, iight
your styles so lazy, its like you smoked a doobie twice
& your skin is so Oily, w/ the way its Shinning it should fight for Movie Rights
Lol, iight again
In a battle w/ you I’ll Save Face & assume the concussion
Cuz bro if we ever go Head to Head trust the FIRST thing I’m doing is duckin
Lol, nice
That Jawline is abrupt but that ain't a surprise to me
Homie real talk...You have enough Chin it could start its own Asian society
Lol, nice
You & wifey are air heads, with your cables crossed
Both your necks have balloons on them <- in that case, nice choice on the table cloth
Ok
Sal your torso is shaped like a pyramid & your type soft
His girl hates him, cuz everytime you give her a shoulder to lean on she slides right off
Lol, funny, nice hit
Your girl I could never Under Amor, she's fat that would trash rep
Only reason his shirt says Protect This House, cuz he'll fight for her til his last breath
Nah ain't feelin that much
Real men like big ass & tits, not this homo fuck
So he found a girl thats so flat, her bras the Walking Billboard For Solo Cup
Lol, nice
Your girl has a spare tire gut i know why you make it work
cuz your criticized for jokes going flat, but it's a quick fix ever since you been dating her
Ok...
Well hot damn, sal dope verse all in all u held it down wit perfect wording, good shit...
Amen I never seen ur bars stretched like this befo... Concepts were cool but wording was wack IMO...set ups were iight tho...
Pack an gal were very consistent throughout there verses witch u gotta give them the W here, I mean sal was smooth af but iunno I feel pack n gal were just punching away throughout, good shit all y'all
Vote packed graves and Galactic
@Wordz AhGod. @fresh how come the polls say 1-0Sal(lol) when its a tag team & its 2-0 us?
Dont trip we'll be checking the polls periodically homie.
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Because it's now a fatal 4 way and I won.Quote:
Originally Posted by Packed Graves
the admins will add in the win/losses for both teams, the polls can only take one name at a time, the only other option would be to add all members individually and with as fucked as the polls are since the update, I wouldn't dare put anyone through that. Plus there can only be one winner lol.
What a frazzled cat.. women lather that? MADNESS!
Return the tie to Cactus Jack... women would rather jack cactus.
--eh this is corny to me. Not to mention a lazy ass punch
This lone stranger is pro-geek w/ no bangers, he's so weak.
A closet dweller, lookin' like he was born w/ coat hangers through both cheeks.
--this is nice . Good concept good imagery , it just works
You act fly & rap why? I ain't gettin' bashed by a scrawny brat...
The way you Slytherin your outfit, you should be labeled that by a talking hat.
--eh 5 yrs ago this would of been hot maybe. U worded it wack but the wp would of been fresh when it was relevant. I imagine it was done in that era correctly
Galactic is spawning? WHACK. He has little ones? MISTAKES!
Sportin' a Tank Top under your shirt and a cannon in the middle of your face
-- good lord your setups are garbage. This was horrible as a whole but the punch alone was fire with the right opener this would of been a haymaker. A lot of y'all cats underestimate the setup IMHO
This smashed fag is trashed eh? Past fazed, boozed & goofy.
Not just Wrecked... he's Adrien Brody half way through the movie.
-- just no
Obvious kid's poor as fuck & I knew in life this faggot is wack,
IDK if I shld diss or donate articles of clothin & advertise this pic as a feed the children charity ad.
-- so much wrong here . It's kind of corny played as well as worded bad
I mean, such a touchin' visual & don't want the shit to haunt me,
I'd say, if this pathetic picture's worth a thousand, Wordz, It'll make for a Sacred Scripture HOF piece.
--very played
Stay positive, kid. Life's a bitch & all the tragedy's surrounding,
Amen's just trying to shed light, on the subject... Which'll finally upgrade his ENTIRE family's housing.
--does this even make sense ?
Your chick's a major slut & her swag's hot kid, no one can top her,
Anytime I sea leopard leggin's... I'm sure her pussy can easily offer more of an option then red lobster.
-- better
I'm serious, she's infested & this kid doubts, what could be crabs,
But lets not ruin the family photo's outstanding, on the same corner your wife discounts her pussy at.
-- a outstanding concept? Really .. Terrible
your spanish ways are disgusting & their showing sicc
Most of us Pray to Jesus…While youve got your cousin Jesus Mowing It
--ok
LOL. Tryin’a flex? You must be kidding fam
You don’t Seam Ripped but I can tell ya Waistline has different plans
--eh played
your styles so lazy, its like you smoked a doobie twice
& your skin is so Oily, w/ the way its Shinning it should fight for Movie Rights
--nah wack played corny
In a battle w/ you I’ll Save Face & assume the concussion
Cuz bro if we ever go Head to Head trust the FIRST thing I’m doing is duckin
--loled legit funny
That Jawline is abrupt but that ain't a surprise to me
Homie real talk...You have enough Chin it could start its own Asian society
-- as played as the outstanding line. I hope u didn't think this was fresh
You & wifey are air heads, with your cables crossed
Both your necks have balloons on them <- in that case, nice choice on the table cloth
--sucky wording but clever and creative
Sal your torso is shaped like a pyramid & your type soft
His girl hates him, cuz everytime you give her a shoulder to lean on she slides right off
-- lol kinda played but ur setup and wording was stellar. Nicely done
Your girl I could never Under Amor, she's fat that would trash rep
Only reason his shirt says Protect This House, cuz he'll fight for her til his last breath
-- setup makes literally no sense
Real men like big ass & tits, not this homo fuck
So he found a girl thats so flat, her bras the Walking Billboard For Solo Cup
--don't get it
Your girl has a spare tire gut i know why you make it work
cuz your criticized for jokes going flat, but it's a quick fix ever since you been dating her
--well worded and clever
The 2nd team won
^most feedback niggas will EVER see from hush haha..
Sal/Amen - 0
Gal/PG - 3
Can we get more votes, we vote on everyones battles.