10. Due by Friday night.
Boston
OG Maestro
10. Due by Friday night.
Ye.
I don’t discriminate, Aannddd... I’m the reason your girl don’t seem right,
Cuz I don’t care if your dane a white, I still beat that pussy up like a UFC fight
Anti-social fuck only focus on writing, leaving your chick twerking on chairs
So while you follow the news for punches, I’m your bitch's current affair.
My dude OG, I have a business proposal... let’s say we,
partner up… and use ALLLLLL your fillers… and open a temp agency.
Dumb fuck ^… If I want cheddar, I’m going to your crib strapped
with two gats, one timber the other wolf… just to push your wig back.
Heres a knife & a tutorial how to wrist slap, a sealed ticket to hell & roadmap
Because I am killing Maestro like getting rid of the ESL program.
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Bring that ass here, HERE, boy.
Listen.
There's a thin line between dead & alive. you musta lost it when you crossed
I'll kill you & ya life savings'll pay for the funeral. I guess it costs to be the Bos'
I STILL write my shit w/ a note and pad, that's how you tell it's proper
You Google rhymes & schemes.
The way you get words from screens, you got the style of a teleprompter
He talks tough. but you're DRUNK if you think this guy is tucked
If he sending shots to the face back to back?...then he's in a bar tryna fuck
But hold up,
Why the FUCK you take the name 'boston'? You'll never be Joe, boston
Wait,...a '1-3' record?
You'll never 'break even'. OKAY, OKAY. I guess you're another Joe Boston
Mannnnn, in the morning I'm the wrong one to fuck with, yo
I wake up & drink success. You success is waking up to a Cup of Joe
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Your success if waking up to a Cup of Joe*
up.
I don’t discriminate, Aannddd... I’m the reason your girl don’t seem right,
Cuz I don’t care if your dane a white, I still beat that pussy up like a UFC fight
naw not feeling this flip
Anti-social fuck only focus on writing, leaving your chick twerking on chairs
So while you follow the news for punches, I’m your bitch's current affair.
lol nice
My dude OG, I have a business proposal... let’s say we,
partner up… and use ALLLLLL your fillers… and open a temp agency.
the punch landed kind of flat. I see wher eyou were going tho
Dumb fuck ^… If I want cheddar, I’m going to your crib strapped
with two gats, one timber the other wolf… just to push your wig back.
kind of a broken flip. woulda sounded aight in audio but not text
Heres a knife & a tutorial how to wrist slap, a sealed ticket to hell & roadmap
Because I am killing Maestro like getting rid of the ESL program.
lol I mess with this
vs
There's a thin line between dead & alive. you musta lost it when you crossed
I'll kill you & ya life savings'll pay for the funeral. I guess it costs to be the Bos'
weak jab
I STILL write my shit w/ a note and pad, that's how you tell it's proper
You Google rhymes & schemes.
The way you get words from screens, you got the style of a teleprompter
stretched but lite punch here. concept was coo
He talks tough. but you're DRUNK if you think this guy is tucked
If he sending shots to the face back to back?...then he's in a bar tryna fuck
aight pretty lite on a played flip
But hold up,
Why the FUCK you take the name 'boston'? You'll never be Joe, boston
Wait,...a '1-3' record?
You'll never 'break even'. OKAY, OKAY. I guess you're another Joe Boston
lol no coulda got creative with this a had a dope line
Mannnnn, in the morning I'm the wrong one to fuck with, yo
I wake up & drink success. You success is waking up to a Cup of Joe
no lol read kinda gay
overall weak battle. no real dope punches and a few good concepts and schemes that missed the mark. gotta get more creative. throw in some wordplay and personals to really attack. I got Boston taking this with a couple ok lands.
v. boston
I don’t discriminate, Aannddd... I’m the reason your girl don’t seem right,
Cuz I don’t care if your dane a white, I still beat that pussy up like a UFC fight
-THIS WAS COOL
VS
Mannnnn, in the morning I'm the wrong one to fuck with, yo
I wake up & drink success. You success is waking up to a Cup of Joe
-COOL
VOTE: BOSTON... Not a hot battle but i felt OG did better execution wise in our battle. I dont think he toom em serious n payed the price. Bostons misses were a better in my eyes
ups
I don’t discriminate, Aannddd... I’m the reason your girl don’t seem right,
Cuz I don’t care if your dane a white, I still beat that pussy up like a UFC fight
>> nice start 0.50
Anti-social fuck only focus on writing, leaving your chick twerking on chairs
So while you follow the news for punches, I’m your bitch's current affair.
>> light jab 0.25
My dude OG, I have a business proposal... let’s say we,
partner up… and use ALLLLLL your fillers… and open a temp agency.
>> LMFAO!! I laughed at this bar, fav bar of urs in this battle bro 1.0
Dumb fuck ^… If I want cheddar, I’m going to your crib strapped
with two gats, one timber the other wolf… just to push your wig back.
>> wasnt feelin this here 0.0
Heres a knife & a tutorial how to wrist slap, a sealed ticket to hell & roadmap
Because I am killing Maestro like getting rid of the ESL program.
>> Didnt like this nameflip attempt here, sorry 0.0
Total: 1.75
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There's a thin line between dead & alive. you musta lost it when you crossed
I'll kill you & ya life savings'll pay for the funeral. I guess it costs to be the Bos'
>> DOPE fuckin start 1.0
I STILL write my shit w/ a note and pad, that's how you tell it's proper
You Google rhymes & schemes.
The way you get words from screens, you got the style of a teleprompter
>> light 0.25
He talks tough. but you're DRUNK if you think this guy is tucked
If he sending shots to the face back to back?...then he's in a bar tryna fuck
>> lol nah 0.0
But hold up,
Why the FUCK you take the name 'boston'? You'll never be Joe, boston
Wait,...a '1-3' record?
You'll never 'break even'. OKAY, OKAY. I guess you're another Joe Boston
>> Lol nice nameplay 0.50
Mannnnn, in the morning I'm the wrong one to fuck with, yo
I wake up & drink success. You success is waking up to a Cup of Joe
>> light close 0.25
Total: 2.0
Vote: OG (slight edge)
*Very, very close battle I thought... Yall both did yall thing, but i got the slight edge goin to OG because - i scored 2 separate bars 0pts for Boston & OG had only 1 bar scored at 0pts, so thats what did it. But like i said....good battle yall!!
Boston
I don’t discriminate, Aannddd... I’m the reason your girl don’t seem right,
Cuz I don’t care if your dane a white, I still beat that pussy up like a UFC fight
written smoothly, not feeling the concept though
Anti-social fuck only focus on writing, leaving your chick twerking on chairs
So while you follow the news for punches, I’m your bitch's current affair.
this was pretty cool, reptitive already on the chick plays back 2 back though, both indirect as they aren't personals.
My dude OG, I have a business proposal... let’s say we,
partner up… and use ALLLLLL your fillers… and open a temp agency.
Nice concept, dope bar
Dumb fuck ^… If I want cheddar, I’m going to your crib strapped
with two gats, one timber the other wolf… just to push your wig back.
ehh not feeling this
Heres a knife & a tutorial how to wrist slap, a sealed ticket to hell & roadmap
Because I am killing Maestro like getting rid of the ESL program.
ight bar, jab factor for me
OG Maestro
Listen.
There's a thin line between dead & alive. you musta lost it when you crossed
I'll kill you & ya life savings'll pay for the funeral. I guess it costs to be the Bos'
came off as light for me, rolls of the tongue though
I STILL write my shit w/ a note and pad, that's how you tell it's proper
You Google rhymes & schemes.
The way you get words from screens, you got the style of a teleprompter
This was dope, nice play
He talks tough. but you're DRUNK if you think this guy is tucked
If he sending shots to the face back to back?...then he's in a bar tryna fuck
Not feeling
But hold up,
Why the FUCK you take the name 'boston'? You'll never be Joe, boston
Wait,...a '1-3' record?
You'll never 'break even'. OKAY, OKAY. I guess you're another Joe Boston
awkwardly worded, otherwise dope concept
Mannnnn, in the morning I'm the wrong one to fuck with, yo
I wake up & drink success. You success is waking up to a Cup of Joe
another not really feeling this, didn't come off very strong for me, and I hate the rhyming with yo to make it work, you can surely come up with something smoother
Overall - rough battle to vote on tbh. There was a bar or two from each that were alright. Pretty close, but it comes down to Bostons bars just flowing better for me. Easier to read, a good smooth flow always makes the verses better.
MVGT: Boston
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up.
Boston was ok, but your punches seemed diluted.
OG great metas and punches, hard to follow your flow but your punches hit
Vote:OG
vote DQ'd. not broken down
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Boston
Bar 1: Not a bad concept, but it is very indirect. Meaning it could be used against anybody.
Bar 2: Once again indirect. I'm half curious if you are biting thee lines from another site since they are so indirect. Unless I am not aware that you are for real fucking or even know his chick.
Bar 3: Finally direct. Still could have been used against anybody though. Also, I'm not a fan of the concept.
Bar 4: Once again, nothing direct here.
Bar 5: The endrhyme is a far stretch. This concept worked but didn't hit hard in my opinion.
OG
Bar 1:This could have been executed better.
Bar 2: Pretty generic if ya ask me. This is like Bos also, indirect.
Bar 3: Did anybody say anything about this guy being "tucked"? Indirect again. I swear I'm wondering if y'all know who are battling half the time.
Bar 4: Not feelng this
Bar 5: nahhh
Overall, a weak and indirect battle to be direct.
I'm going with Boston here because he had the better indirect punches.
Vote: Boston
My advice or request is to attack your opponent more directly and personal.
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